try doing simples... like BOME
use bars to build letters, don't be afraid of the eraser
keep width consistent throughout the piece
dont use color yet, or arrows, or a 3d
just do an outline in pencil of your outline...
get basic structure down first holmes... maybe in a year or two you can do addons and connections.
i think there are too many addons, hence the 'forced' look.
the basic structure isn't bad, but to me there is a little to much goin on.
I really like a clean, strong simple, with a few addons.
freak, the D is kinda wierd, maybe make it more bottom heavy, like, skew the curved part of the D down more.
I like the rest a lot though, shit's tight!
western style requires strong letter structure, no matter the style.
simples help to create the necessary structure.
a lot of nonwriters might say they think your work is dope,
then on here you're called a clown because the structure sucks.
a good and bad idea is to post on a non-toy thread and see how much you get joked on.
chances are you'll be humbled into simples from experienced writers.
that's the basic idea, but the horizontal bars are too long.
I can barely see the handstyle, but from what i can see, stick to basic letters for that too.
what do you write? I might put something out there for you to work with...
if you have done keyboard simples already, you got out of them too soon.
build your letters with bars, all of equal width.
don't be afraid of the eraser.
and don't do addons yet, stick to the basics for a while.
How long have you been writin?