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yokai the way you loop the bottom of your y (usually ) doesn't seem to work.. there's no reason to it..

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Alts..

Noone - that nos is straight ass, like all the other ones you've posted... either listen to people and try to improve via simples, etc. or stop posting these visual nutsacks... ...

if you are really trying to improve hikari let me offer advice: 1.your stuff sucks and will for a while. realize this and use it as motivation.. 2. DO SIMPLES. no rock effects or vines etc. til you have. basic structure down.. which will take a while. 3. don't post every sketch ...just practice and have fun...

random penner...

neg thread? ok...

honestly, eli, (imo) you've always had too many cut-ins/continuing internal lines in 1 piece... and sometimes the letter structure (like on the 's' in abys) is just awkward... bars are good to a point, but you also have to throw in more curvy, abstract lines sooner or later... if that makes sense? i dont know..

looks like baraka from mortal kombat, as well...

..no more members only private clubs for this guy...

...i think most people hold structure over coloring/cool fx? not hating just saying...

none - throwies are alright although clearly generic/bit styles....do your own thing .. upon - letters way too crowded... sometimes people can pull off the letters-squished-onto-a-single-board look but that one is not good. go simpler.

in effect...

^ pretty cool, original... some stuff could be worked out a little better but def. interesting..

some n's...

freak that looks dope man! i wish you would take the 2 more minutes or whatever it would take to thicken/thin outlines and make precise strokes cause your stuff would look infinitely ill if it was a tiny bit cleaner...

or just do two battles...

rakse wins... ...your move, whats the word...

dig it^ like the style for sure, think you should keep workin on it... ..still not into screwed music though haha...

spasone? hmmm...? heres a better pic of the miah just to add to the thread.. and for sure man shoot me another ill try to do another one too haha...

sorry bout the small image..click to enlarge.... will post better one when i can..

your can control/fades/etc. aren't too bad, but your letter structure needs practice imo. the chunky parts of your letters and whip-like extensions sometimes dont make sense, and seemed forced... i would say try simpler letter styles and let your own style develop along the way.. ..yep.

right on i have one more to finish i think but im down... ..sodem..