BJ,
I see a white chicklet on that first one.
Also, Im not feeling the staircase. Its a different approach from the stuff I usually see from you; you outlined the shapes this time. It looks like you used a Rusto Flat Black with a New York Thin-- the line width of those caps aren't as thin as grey dots on those fancy cans. Im sure that was a tough job, staircases. Colors are kinda funky too.
Im going to post some stuff so you guys can rip on me tenfold in a few days,
-T.