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I know it took forever.. and it's pretty sketchy/all in pencil. But here you go Knews.. Hope you like it man.

Death battle: Skirm Lilsh4d Sev

^^do that, add some 3-d, and change that fill.

Seriously.. do not post another sketch like that. Do simple block letters like you've been told. If you honestly want crtis on what you did post, it's terrible. No letter form, 3d is off, everything. Start with the basics.

I think that has the potential to be really dope, but it doesn't do too much for me right now. good entry though.

Dude skirm, I'm not even trying to ride somebody's dick.. But I seriously think your letter form/overal style is ill.

Those are mannequins at an exhibit.

I don't want to repost it or anything, but on the last page I posted a sketch and would like some sort of crits/opinions.

Everyone hit some crits up on this too, please. If you're down bouncing, we can just do (ballpoint)outlines if you want.

Skirm Oscane Purrrple

I don't think the E in the last one flows, but all of those Fore's are fucking clean. bump.

God damn. Bump this whole crew. I was beginning to wonder where codak was hiding, good to see some new shit up. That guy kills.

Hey bouncing, are you willing to do exchanges? I'll put a few things up in a minute to give an idea of what I write.

You should one up for this battle, man.

Re: NASHVILLE!!! If you're referring to the fence, I'm pretty sure it says "I GOTS ONE!!"

Oscane the filled in one is 10x better than your outline. Dope.

LSD was originally made by scientists to benefit people. I'd say LSD is probably illegal because of the stupid things that have happened. (ie: A man thinking he can fly and walking off a building or balcony. Or people having bad trips and trying to kill someone.) Salvia is legal in most US states.. but it was recently made illegal in Tennessee. Salvia's a whole lot more "under the radar" than LSD though, so it's not illegal most places.

DOPE.

Jesus.. some of that's pretty dope, but was all that really necessary??

I wouldn't put that out in public anywhere. Not trying to be an ass, more like giving advice.

Pakoeeeee.

The fill on the lung is dope, but I'm not too keen on the letters. Still dope though. Bump Betor/Noseface/Kalus.

Anroe, that looks pretty good. but I have to say: On the handie stuff around the piece, where it looks like the corner of a piece of paper is curving up, your shadow is off. The way you have it makes it look like a light source is coming from both sides(which if the light were coming from both directions, it would cancel out the shadows).

Bump UH

*42 was definitely robbed.