well first off you definitely dont want feedback from any of these kids that come on this thread. 90 percent of the kids that ur gonna get feedback from ARE worse than you are. that blue piece that you did is actually not to bad. the only thing i dont like about it is the lines and shit that you put in there just to take up the negative space. its not that i dont like it, cause you do have the right idea, i just dont like how you didnt somehow connect them to your letters. the next time you do a piece like that try to connect that shit to your letters somehow that way you dont just have stray lines going every which way. and your hands are a little too basic. a nice little trick to gettin your hands better is to practice them in cursive. but dont do basic english cursive, add your OWN funk to your shit, whatever YOURE feelin at the time. and dont be pointy with your letters whatever you do cause that looks wack as fuck. make your hands flow together and look effortless. use capitals and lowercase letters here and there also. but make it all flow together. and dont put crowns, question and exclamation points, underlines, or quotations around your shit. its just toy. if theres anything else you need feedback on ill be glad to help seeing everyone else in pittsburgh is either wack or a dick.