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Ill shit on that New York thing man, I definetly ain't about to beat that lol. But I don't care just wanted to try some new letters really. I think I'm gonan start this shit now and see where i get.

hmmm details.... well most likely I will just do black and white cuz im lazy and not even that great of a colorer... if you wanna color em I'll do that though. probably just color the 3D and leave a white fill though haha. Umm... deadline... a week maybe? ill probably finish it ina day or so when i get a chance to draw somethin but the sooner the bette,r just try and get it up on here.

Re: Re: heres my girl Sally's work she did the letters i added some 3d..go easy on her. no offense to your girl but it looks like she draws like a 5 year old... her lines are all shaky and sloppy... and she tried too hard to make it graffiti. Not tryin to be offensive... but don't say it's a decent job "considering she doesn't do graffiti" cuz its a bad excuse. I've seen girls who for schol do posters or somethin can do decent bubble or straight letters and keep their lines neat and straight. Like the L is the same letter but ya girl has them lookin so different and decided to put a weird lookin lump in the first one. I dunno, it's all good... but she needs to kepe her lines straight and neat... and that's not cuz she can't do graffiti that's cuz she just can't draw or rushed maybe. ?? i dunno anwyayz thats just my opinion. I think that's the downfall to every person who does graffiti or doesnt and jsut does bubble letters or straight letters... when they can't keep everythin neat and straight. Half the time if the person would kepe their letter lines paralell and have everythin neatly down it'd look waaay nicer.

but space in your E... cuz like your C has space and your e is together in the center and it doesnt match. i think it'd look better with space...

simple letters... and if anyone would mind givin me there opinion on my letters or somethin, that'd be appreciated. Not sure if my structure is good or bad so whatever. I have other letter styles i have also beek workin on i might post but for now this is what I'll post and try to improve cuz gotta work one style at a time.... http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid109/p33ac6cb6deb56fe0aeeab3974f16e7f4/f93679b2.jpg'>

Anyone wanna battle me and the word (words actually) would be New York??? Reply on here if ya down...

wow this kooter arguement is just fuckin dumb. Honestly Kooter you are waaaay over reacting on all thsi shit and started the whole arguement and now trying to act hard and what not. Just stop, it's pointless. Big deal he said ya sketch was garbage, I'd have to agree, with the exception of some of ya nice hands ya shit ain't that great... neither is mine and I've had people say my shit is garbage, you think I care? No not really, I just keep doin my thing... no need to flip out like you did. You have been writing 5 months and have such a big ego and are trying to act so hard and it's pathetic. Honestly just stop and get over it cuz everyone is gonna have an opinion on ya shit and just cuz someones opinion hurt your stupid feelings doesn't mean you need to whine and argue about it. I don't got nothin against you... and still don't, but you gotta just quit it cuz it's makin you look stupid as fuck.

Yo seeking... not sure if ya too busy to help me out or nto but decided to ask. But a few pags back in the midst of the hecz fight you said i had letter sturcure (not sure if it's good or bad structure but ya said it was better than hecz's) but my bars were shit and I totally agree, well I don't even know if my letters are even any good but i try. Anywayz, just curious if you could help me out with bars and all that cuz I look at sketches like the nathan one above for example that have nice letters and then the bars added just flow nicely and make it look so hot and many good writers do the same... altho i can't seem to get the hang of the extras. If ya could give me some advice on it I'd appreciate it. Also any advice on letter sturcture would be good as well... what i should improve on that or whatever. I dunno, cuz you know ya shti and are pretty damn ill so I'd like to get some advice from ya. If ya can't give any that's cool, but if ya could I'd apprecaite it...

damn i was post number 1000!!! LOL that's awesome...

Damn I know seekin and hecz had some shit goin on another post a few pages back but my damn reply sparked a whole new arguement haha. Thanks for anyone who said they liked my shit or said it was better than hecz or whatever lol. Dunno whether I actually am or not, but don't care really... as long as I improve then I'm good. But Seeking... you said about my shit that I got more letter strucure but bars and arrows are shit and well pretty much agree haha cuz I realize it and it's what I'm workin on. You think you could help me out with that or tell me what bout em is shitty or what i can do to improve it or make em all flow better. Cuz I can improve letter structure and fix up my letters... I understand how that works now, but the extra I just don't lol. So yea... if anyone can help me with that I'd really appreciate it cuz it's frustratin. oh and Hecz... some other words for you. Look man, I didn't even try startin beef with you and you try to make an example outta me like im a toy and my shit is way worse than yours. Way back almost a year ago i did criticized ya shit and you did the EXACT same thing... and ya know... I got burned then cuz my shit sucked worse than it does now and i had no structure. But I still felt the same way about ya shti and still noticed you never improved.... and now you do it again tryin to make yaself look better and tryin to make a fool outta me and why? Your just an asshole and got too much of ego thinkin ya the shit. And I'm glad it backfired on ya ass.... and you can't even do nothin but back yaself into a corner with more excuses and lame insults. You need to stop the attitude and chill cuz the way you headed ain't doin any good for you... but it seems like you ain't about to change anytime soon so guess that's too bad for you then... oh well. peace.

lots of nice shit here... really feelin the Cer sketchs a lot Virs....ya stuff is nice altho like it hasn't changed much ina while. It's like you had ya really toy style from way back and now for the past few months or whenever you came back yo've had that same style you just posted above and like work from say 3 months ago looks the same. I say try doing more drastic change in ya work to see if you can get shit lookin better and give ya new ideas instead of lil changes in letters and arrows cuz the overall look is the same thing, ya know? So it's not much improvement. Altohugh it's improvement since way back and i am feelin it. Slyde likin all that painted stuff from ya boy lesn and whoever else... also some cool stickers. Hecz... looks alright cept just aint feelin the fact that you have about 15 arrows all over the place and lil tiny extensions and stuff... i dunno kinda looks wack, just way way overdoing it IMO. But the 3D looks really hot, you got colorin skills... i can give ya that. But eff the extensions all over the place, they don't make it look better. Also, you have had whatever 2d wildstyle you got since ive gotten here... it's been the same til now, just like i said to virs, why not try somehtin with a more drastic change just totally change up the style and letters inmstead of just lil changes here and there... ya know? Whatever tho, just my opinions. anywayz... i typed to much, im out.

This... you from the bronx or somethin??

upinsmoke.,... i get what ya sayin... but not everyone that is influenced and has similar styles is trying to reach the bar someone set like the revok example you gave. It's not an intentional thing when you get influence by your favorite writers and ones you see the most. It jsut happens... without you thinking about it.

damn dredz... that black and white one is real nice... i think tht girl smokin looks like kelis for some reason. I dunno, maybe it's just me though... lol.

I agree with seeking... always have and have said it before that hecz hasa big head and ain't good enough to have it, but for some reason mad kids here always backed him up so i never said anyhtin more other thana few times. I really just don't get it and from the day I came here his 3D and 2D and throws and hands have not changed AT ALL. And then I look at when I came here seeing virs stuff and now look above on this page and seein where he's at, his shit got way better. Personally I'm feelin some of those pieces more than hecz lame wildstyles.

it's offense you moron

not always true... some are clean... one of the cleanest bein cope2. But it ain't even about that... NYC got mad style and most of the throwies are real ill. Though that don't mean other areas don't got the nice throwies too i just like the majority of NYC throws more.

i agree...

i hate the letter overlapping a letter crap, it looks stupid... just my opinion though, but yea. Just do the letter and not like one over the othe,r itll look better IMO... cuz it seems overlapping the same letter over itself is just a way to fill space.

well none mentioned the 3D cuz there were much worse things in the drawing lol. But i didnt know it was a joke, but eh whatever. Btw anyone have opininos on my drawin?? whats good or bad, etc...

work on your handstyle, first and foremost. I know mine ain't the hottest, but I still know you gotta work on it. Don't do those extrea things. First work on just letters in it... cuz that circle arrow underline and the halo and the star all kill it. And yea the letters aren't that great either... those curvey things liek weird. But yea, just keep workin at that. And ya piece well you have SOME letter structure cuz at least i can read it. But the letters need more work... so keep practicin them and forget the extra crap also, like the arrows on the C and the T and stuff... just do really simple letters and make em flow nicely by themselves THEN add stuff. It works.... Ya throwie isn't that bad tho.,... probably best outta everyhting lol.

did the pencil two days ago and the red outline yesterday, pretty much first time I've ever done an outline that wasn't in black lol. http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid104/p62486307275830954305f89c7174bc18/f99939b1.jpg'>

yo starz... that Lets thing ain't mine lol. I kinda forfeited the battle cuz never drew up a sketch. Not sure who did the sketch in that picture, but sure as hell ain't me. Anywayz... just call it anon and take me outta the battle. Sorry..

Same... that's not even clseo to a burner man, nowhere near. Chill with the weird lines makin up ya letters all jagged and stuff... most of the extra jagged edges on the letters are straight pointless. Just work on ya letters and make em simpler... and practice and practice. Also ya hand is just... wack, those arrows are killin it, seriously.

oh i can... hmm i dunno i hate imagestation lol... used to love it tho, now its gettin on my nerves.