When you said you wanted to battle it was in the one-liner thread.
Anyway, yours is well-executed...you didn't color outside the lines or anything!
I like the 'B' and the way the 'I' comes out of it, that's rad...but overall the piece is garbage...the kind of thing you see and get confused with all the other pieces that looked just like it.
Maybe try a one-liner? Search art crimes, I'm sure you can find all the letters ready for you to print out and trace.
Love,
Okra
p.s. there's that god-awful E again....:confused: