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WHOA. regulator finaly sketched

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by REGULATOR, Feb 6, 2002.

  1. REGULATOR

    REGULATOR 12oz Elite Member

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    WHOA. regulator finaly sketched

    Discussion started by REGULATOR - Feb 6, 2002

    my first real sketch.....instead of just saying "that sucks" tell me how it sucks and how i could fix it...this is my first sketch.....constructive critisism please



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    i personaly am not feeling it...i never like my own shit
     
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  2. seeking

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    seeking - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    its really not that bad at all man... just work on the letter structure... make solid letters, not 'graffiti' letters...
     
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  3. THEMEDIC

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    THEMEDIC - Replied Feb 6, 2002

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  4. lackadaisical

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    lackadaisical - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    its not bad for a first time... i ve seen whole books of a lot worse shit. just keep practicing the basics, keep it simple at first.
     
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  5. crave

    crave 12oz Veteran Member

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    crave - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    whoa, that almost sounded like a complement..j/k:D

    try doing your 3-d left, right, or down, rather than at an angle. helped me getting my letters down.
     
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  6. blood as ink

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    blood as ink - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    not too shabby.
     
  7. cmeup

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    cmeup - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    first sketch?

    gotta draw more playa...

    takes forever to get good..

    teaser
     
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  8. sixteenvandals

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    sixteenvandals - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    the tags are actually headed towards being good. i dont think this could possibly be your first sketch. based on the tags.
     
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  9. ASER1NE

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    ASER1NE - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    thats what ive(and others) have been unsuccesfully trying to say about alot of shit............fukkin graffitti
     
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  10. OBEY

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    OBEY - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    actually i like it, the "S" and the "E" shold be more in tune with each other though
     
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  11. mopius

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    mopius - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    i hate when the 3-d goes in to the middle of the piece...makes it look really bad
     
  12. another loser

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    another loser - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    the A was cool.
    i very seldom like to see arrows on graffiti.
    i mean, it takes some good work to be able to use arrows correctly and collaborate them into your peices.
    dont take this as a diss, im doin what you said, tellin you how you can fix it up and jazz.
    but id suggest finding a good way to end your letters instead of wrapping them behind other letters and ending them with arrows.
    i think if an artist does use arrows, it shouldnt be on the end of an arrow, but on a bar you add to a letter to give effect.
    (ie: sever)
    i had actually just drawn somethin that said SWAE to show you what i meant, but i was gonna clean it up and edit it on the computer (yea im a toy) and my software fucked up.
    i may try it again later if you want.
    hope i helped you some.
     
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  13. --zeSto--

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    --zeSto-- - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    think 'Line Logic'

    some of the line on the first one don't make sence
    in terms of relative proportions. The go from thin to thick
    were the shouldn't. Try this.... (because I'm here to help)
    Make all the major lines (the one that form the letters) EXACTLY the same width,
    and make all the minor lines (your extra detail lines i.e. arrows) EXACTLY half the width of the major lines.
    Dont do any under/overlaps yet, they'll only throw your proportions out.

    s'ok them?
     
  14. emothug

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    emothug - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    Seems to me you spend a lot more time looking at graff then doing it.......thugging
     
  15. fiberoptical

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    fiberoptical - Replied Feb 6, 2002

    at least you got a descent handstyle..I would rather see a OK piece, and a nice hand, that a good piece and a horrible hand. You are on the right path. keep on keepin on in the sucka free.
     
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