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want some feedback

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by shape1369, Jul 26, 2003.

  1. shape1369

    shape1369 12oz Member

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    want some feedback

    Discussion started by shape1369 - Jul 26, 2003

    well this is my first time postin some sketches, ill go in chronological order. hopefully i get this postin flicks thing right, prolly wont for the first time.

    http://www.fototime.com/{A92FFCD1-6906-45F7-B8AE-D1E555F5E205}/picture.JPG'>

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{6D54D4B8-7799-40C8-A264-4B52B4A12CEF}/picture.JPG'>

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{E2A0255A-BBDE-49E1-A8B1-58F89DC010FD}/picture.JPG'>

    lets hope this works, i read all the faq's on how to post pics so lets see if im a complete dumbass. first two say once, third says break.

    unfortunantly my only exposure to the culture is on here and what i see when im drivin round. so im tryin to meet more ppl in my area, anyone from texas and houston hit me up on aim.
     
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  2. Zack Morris

    Zack Morris 12oz Veteran Member

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    Zack Morris - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    that third one is nice...I would day your taking that one in the right direction..
     
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  3. supercooey

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    supercooey - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    ^^ definitely.. im feeling the third one also..
    might i suggest you draw more and post them here when they're done..

    good luck&peace.
     
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  4. eseLokE1uno

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    eseLokE1uno - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    The style your trying to pull off is a little to advanced for you.
    try simpler styles, you got the right ideas but your not there yet
     
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  5. StarzAbove

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    StarzAbove - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    Do what ese said;)
     
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  6. EveryWhere

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    EveryWhere - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    when i see yours im like whoa but when i take a closer look you really have weak structure like on the first, it LOOKS good, but the lack of real structure is the wrong way to write.

    the second gets a little better with the N and C.

    the third, you really start to develop your style.


    id also like to point out how annoying o's are.

    good progression, even if it was in a short time span. but as ese pointed out try simpler styles, get a flow. and if you hit a wall, go simple again.
     
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  7. EveryWhere

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    EveryWhere - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    and when i say hit a wall, i meant physically and mentally (like a writers block)
     
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  8. shape1369

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    shape1369 - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    i agree

    i agree wholy on the on the notion that the first two's letter structure blow. at the time i was like cool they look good, then about a week later after id looked at them and analyzed them i was thinkin shit these suck. i was and still am fairly proud of the last one though cus i feel that i didnt try to go to crazy and i still kept the structure pretty well, only thing i dont like bout that one is the k, for some reason i have the hardest time with k's. my prollem is i never really have anything in mind when i start drawin so by the time i finish a drawing or sketch the style has changed from the beginning towards the end. its a lil frustratin. thanks for all the comments
     
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  9. BloodKlot

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    BloodKlot - Replied Jul 26, 2003

    word is bond

    skab.uek
     
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  10. shape1369

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    shape1369 - Replied Jul 27, 2003

    found some more

    so i found some more real old stuff. remember when u whent through that phase where u thought arrows were the coolest thing? well i found mine from that period. the last one basically makes no sense but whatever it was just the product of my boredom in my precal class. again ill go in chronological order. i do have one that is fairly simple i like it.

    this one i did in my physics class. and yes i know that its not intelligent to put stuff on ur class work, but i dont paint so im not worried bout it.

    http://www.fototime.com/{610662E2-6BB6-4906-AAE5-A80CD36D8D14}/picture.JPG'>

    this second one is from precal, god i hated that class i either drew or slept every day.

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{8FA39C03-A104-430C-9908-871BBEEA0D91}/picture.JPG'>

    last one, this one says smoke but its really odd.

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{D5B6B647-DF67-4CF4-905C-8E88E2416808}/picture.JPG'>


    these are all from when i was gonna write smok, but then i realised i didnt like the letter combonation and i found out there are already a couple smok's out there. again anyone comments would be appreciated.
     
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  11. StarzAbove

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    StarzAbove - Replied Jul 27, 2003

    Go Simple!
     
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  12. shape1369

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    shape1369 - Replied Jul 27, 2003

    on the simple tip. yeah i understand the need for myself to work a lil more simply, but i was hopin a lil more for like hey u know u could do this, in terms of being simple or anything. iono anywho those last three i posted are near a year old, ive progressed a lil since then, as seen in the third pic of the first post. anywho keep them comments comin.
     
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  13. Intangible

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    Intangible - Replied Jul 27, 2003

    come with a basic letter form then tweak it...what you did was poopy.
     
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    greensleeves - Replied Jul 27, 2003

    ok, first of all, think of the most complex design you've ever seen, ok? good, now get some crayons, and draw it, you're guaranteed for success
     
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    Scrabble - Replied Jul 28, 2003

    You want some feedback. Not, can someone give me some feedback please. Or Can someone please give me some feedback. Oh no. You WANT some feedback...

    you know what? That sounds like an order. Scrabble dont take orders. Hell no!


    im just posting for the sake of posting
     
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