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want some feedback

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by shape1369, Jul 26, 2003.

  1. shape1369

    shape1369 Member

    Joined: Apr 27, 2003 Messages: 557 Likes Received: 1
    well this is my first time postin some sketches, ill go in chronological order. hopefully i get this postin flicks thing right, prolly wont for the first time.

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    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{6D54D4B8-7799-40C8-A264-4B52B4A12CEF}/picture.JPG'>

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{E2A0255A-BBDE-49E1-A8B1-58F89DC010FD}/picture.JPG'>

    lets hope this works, i read all the faq's on how to post pics so lets see if im a complete dumbass. first two say once, third says break.

    unfortunantly my only exposure to the culture is on here and what i see when im drivin round. so im tryin to meet more ppl in my area, anyone from texas and houston hit me up on aim.
     
  2. Zack Morris

    Zack Morris Veteran Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2001 Messages: 9,728 Likes Received: 4
    that third one is nice...I would day your taking that one in the right direction..
     
  3. supercooey

    supercooey Junior Member

    Joined: Mar 4, 2003 Messages: 156 Likes Received: 0
    ^^ definitely.. im feeling the third one also..
    might i suggest you draw more and post them here when they're done..

    good luck&peace.
     
  4. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 1,280 Likes Received: 0
    The style your trying to pull off is a little to advanced for you.
    try simpler styles, you got the right ideas but your not there yet
     
  5. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,133 Likes Received: 6
  6. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 4, 2002 Messages: 1,128 Likes Received: 0
    when i see yours im like whoa but when i take a closer look you really have weak structure like on the first, it LOOKS good, but the lack of real structure is the wrong way to write.

    the second gets a little better with the N and C.

    the third, you really start to develop your style.


    id also like to point out how annoying o's are.

    good progression, even if it was in a short time span. but as ese pointed out try simpler styles, get a flow. and if you hit a wall, go simple again.
     
  7. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 4, 2002 Messages: 1,128 Likes Received: 0
    and when i say hit a wall, i meant physically and mentally (like a writers block)
     
  8. shape1369

    shape1369 Member

    Joined: Apr 27, 2003 Messages: 557 Likes Received: 1
    i agree

    i agree wholy on the on the notion that the first two's letter structure blow. at the time i was like cool they look good, then about a week later after id looked at them and analyzed them i was thinkin shit these suck. i was and still am fairly proud of the last one though cus i feel that i didnt try to go to crazy and i still kept the structure pretty well, only thing i dont like bout that one is the k, for some reason i have the hardest time with k's. my prollem is i never really have anything in mind when i start drawin so by the time i finish a drawing or sketch the style has changed from the beginning towards the end. its a lil frustratin. thanks for all the comments
     
  9. BloodKlot

    BloodKlot Senior Member

    Joined: Jun 29, 2000 Messages: 1,426 Likes Received: 0
    word is bond

    skab.uek
     
  10. shape1369

    shape1369 Member

    Joined: Apr 27, 2003 Messages: 557 Likes Received: 1
    found some more

    so i found some more real old stuff. remember when u whent through that phase where u thought arrows were the coolest thing? well i found mine from that period. the last one basically makes no sense but whatever it was just the product of my boredom in my precal class. again ill go in chronological order. i do have one that is fairly simple i like it.

    this one i did in my physics class. and yes i know that its not intelligent to put stuff on ur class work, but i dont paint so im not worried bout it.

    http://www.fototime.com/{610662E2-6BB6-4906-AAE5-A80CD36D8D14}/picture.JPG'>

    this second one is from precal, god i hated that class i either drew or slept every day.

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{8FA39C03-A104-430C-9908-871BBEEA0D91}/picture.JPG'>

    last one, this one says smoke but its really odd.

    [img]http://www.fototime.com/{D5B6B647-DF67-4CF4-905C-8E88E2416808}/picture.JPG'>


    these are all from when i was gonna write smok, but then i realised i didnt like the letter combonation and i found out there are already a couple smok's out there. again anyone comments would be appreciated.
     
  11. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,133 Likes Received: 6
  12. shape1369

    shape1369 Member

    Joined: Apr 27, 2003 Messages: 557 Likes Received: 1
    on the simple tip. yeah i understand the need for myself to work a lil more simply, but i was hopin a lil more for like hey u know u could do this, in terms of being simple or anything. iono anywho those last three i posted are near a year old, ive progressed a lil since then, as seen in the third pic of the first post. anywho keep them comments comin.
     
  13. Intangible

    Intangible 12oz Legend

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 17,479 Likes Received: 6
    come with a basic letter form then tweak it...what you did was poopy.
     
  14. greensleeves

    greensleeves Senior Member

    Joined: May 22, 2003 Messages: 1,068 Likes Received: 29
    ok, first of all, think of the most complex design you've ever seen, ok? good, now get some crayons, and draw it, you're guaranteed for success
     
  15. Scrabble

    Scrabble Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2003 Messages: 735 Likes Received: 0
    You want some feedback. Not, can someone give me some feedback please. Or Can someone please give me some feedback. Oh no. You WANT some feedback...

    you know what? That sounds like an order. Scrabble dont take orders. Hell no!


    im just posting for the sake of posting
     
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