BANK Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 Critique this shit i started a new thread cuz there was a bunch of shit that didt need to be in my other so herethe new stuff... heres an update http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00410163f00000034.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00410163f00000035.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00410163f00000032.jpg'> am i going the wrong way? if pics dont show let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 13, 2004 Author Share Posted May 13, 2004 ***************UPDATE**************** [ ^check the handstyle on this too... Yeah B dont go with this one^ ignore the E i got bored so critique this please *if pics dont show up let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Destroyin'* Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 yo..keep working on blocks..only blocks! and your tag needs a lot of work..try a simple one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JetBlackOne Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 Keep practicing, everyone is born a baby.... everyone is born a toy. Paintin a lot can actually help you with your dead letters. Don't trap yourself with just one style work with many and develop your own. Practice your script every second of the day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shani1985 Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 i think that if youll work really hard youll get better but dotn try to do wild or somthing just like Destroyin said keep it blocks and only and you tag take of all the bullshit arround . keep it simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
netster Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 Originally posted by BANK ***************UPDATE**************** http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK4.jpg'> http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK3.jpg'> http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK.jpg'> http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/B.jpg'> so critique this please *if pics dont show up let me know these are actually pretty clean. You letters are consistent in width and they look nice. Keep up with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 don't do stuff like that yellow one and the one above it. when people say blocks, they mean blocks. the ones under those were pretty nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENO ELPMIS Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 get some paint pens so you can do real highlights instead of coloring around the white keep doin that blocked out shit for a while and youll eventually learn crazy letters n shit from that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colonisms Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 Originally posted by BANK http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK4.jpg'> nanananananananana...bank? your stuff doesnt look bad keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InDY_500 Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 You got the overall concept, the only thing I can say is to keep working on that all the time..... PRACTICE.. PRACTICE... PRACTICE.... Nice work though........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 THE BOWLING TEAM LMAO:lol: ITS ALL ABOUT THE DEDICATION;) The purple is the best one u have i would choose that 1 2 mess around with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ct conn Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 the block-busters aren't bad, just stay in the books for a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 uh.... you need to work oon the flow of the more detailed letters... i dont like the simple shit. dont think that its bad, its just that i dont like stuff thats too simple. well, at least you have a good handstyle.. how long have you been writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 14, 2004 Author Share Posted May 14, 2004 lets just say that i was going in the worng direction for way to long and i did a complete overhaul and started over about 2 1/2 months.. everything in this thread from the re-beggining ...um i thought my handstyle was really bad...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvOne Posted May 14, 2004 Share Posted May 14, 2004 Those aren't that bad man. They're not blwoing my mind or anything hehe..but you're on the right track for sure. Keep it up. ps. being a toy is a lot more than just lack of skill..I've met 'real' writers that act pretty damn toyish. I'm sure we all have.... 311. nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 14, 2004 Author Share Posted May 14, 2004 Originally posted by nvOne 311. nice. hell yeah .... 3/11/04 ....wrist band Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 15, 2004 Share Posted May 15, 2004 im feelin them bank, keep it up...add some 3d or sommin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*¿Akrb?* Posted May 15, 2004 Share Posted May 15, 2004 im postin my stuff im a toy2 http://img34.photobucket.com/albums/v102/varo_who/sketch4.jpg'> http://img34.photobucket.com/albums/v102/varo_who/sketch3.jpg'> http://img34.photobucket.com/albums/v102/varo_who/sketch2.jpg'> http://img34.photobucket.com/albums/v102/varo_who/Sketch1.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FightTheBuff Posted May 15, 2004 Share Posted May 15, 2004 aight, you need to PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE 24 hours a day. start out with basic shit, then later when you get good at that, you can try more complicated stuff and develop your style more. first just get down block letters and the like. good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 15, 2004 Author Share Posted May 15, 2004 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imation Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 not bad,u doing just fine, keep it up, cause i like ur style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timemachine Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 u suck peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIRS Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 akrb u jus need to practice nonstop for real u try to hard start with a clean handi then do all the arrows dimensioning and all the other good stuff aiight and how long u been writin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIRS Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 my wak shit did this like a month ago i got the dimensionin all wrong i know!!critisize if u want ..but its a month old! http://img69.photobucket.com/albums/v210/thuglifenigga/Apr20_21.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF? Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 well. since it's a month old i wont say much, alot can change in a month...but since i dont believe you? it sucks. as you have clearly pointed out, the 3-d is horrible. make it more simple to start out, copy bill board fonts. worked for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 im gonna work on a picture that will help you all with 3-d..... once you see it, youll kick yourself in the ass over and over and over till you shit out your brains.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted June 10, 2004 Author Share Posted June 10, 2004 um im back.... http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/bank.jpg'> new im fuckin around with this name i liek it mess with sum other letters though this is the first sketch i did for this name kidna quick http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/seize_001.jpg'> same thing just diffent I: http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/seize.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aerosolpros Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 yo you guys need to work hard and dont give up we were all like you toys once, alls it takes is time...im outhttp://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00439151f00000080.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 bank - i like that "BAN" its hot...u should do the K now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
High Priest Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 http://www.rdi.st/bmwfirehose.jpg'> Just keep on working more and more.. it takes time, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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