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Ummm.... Im a toy..

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by BANK, May 13, 2004.

  1. BANK

    BANK Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 8, 2004 Messages: 197 Likes Received: 0
    Critique this shit

    i started a new thread cuz there was a bunch of shit that didt need to be in my other so herethe new stuff...
    heres an update
    am i going the wrong way?
    if pics dont show let me know
  2. BANK

    BANK Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 8, 2004 Messages: 197 Likes Received: 0
    ^check the handstyle on this too... Yeah B dont go with this one^

    ignore the E i got bored


    so critique this please

    *if pics dont show up let me know
  3. *Destroyin'*

    *Destroyin'* New Jack

    Joined: Mar 23, 2004 Messages: 65 Likes Received: 0
    yo..keep working on blocks..only blocks!
    and your tag needs a lot of work..try a simple one
  4. JetBlackOne

    JetBlackOne New Jack

    Joined: Dec 26, 2003 Messages: 33 Likes Received: 0
    Keep practicing, everyone is born a baby.... everyone is born a toy.
    Paintin a lot can actually help you with your dead letters. Don't trap yourself with just one style work with many and develop your own. Practice your script every second of the day.
  5. shani1985

    shani1985 Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2004 Messages: 169 Likes Received: 0
    i think that if youll work really hard youll get better but dotn try to do wild or somthing just like Destroyin said keep it blocks and only
    and you tag take of all the bullshit arround . keep it simple
  6. netster

    netster New Jack

    Joined: May 14, 2003 Messages: 69 Likes Received: 0
  7. Talon

    Talon New Jack

    Joined: Nov 26, 2003 Messages: 88 Likes Received: 0
    don't do stuff like that yellow one and the one above it. when people say blocks, they mean blocks. the ones under those were pretty nice.

    ENO ELPMIS Senior Member

    Joined: Aug 18, 2003 Messages: 1,885 Likes Received: 1
    get some paint pens so you can do real highlights instead of coloring around the white
    keep doin that blocked out shit for a while and youll eventually learn crazy letters n shit from that
  9. colonisms

    colonisms Member

    Joined: Oct 15, 2002 Messages: 270 Likes Received: 0
  10. InDY_500

    InDY_500 Veteran Member

    Joined: Sep 30, 2002 Messages: 5,169 Likes Received: 67
    You got the overall concept, the only thing I can say is to keep working on that all the time.....
    Nice work though........
  11. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 15, 2003 Messages: 7,134 Likes Received: 6

    The purple is the best one u have i would choose that 1 2 mess around with
  12. ct conn

    ct conn Junior Member

    Joined: Feb 11, 2003 Messages: 172 Likes Received: 0
    the block-busters aren't bad, just stay in the books for a while
  13. earo 35

    earo 35 Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 18, 2004 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 1
    uh.... you need to work oon the flow of the more detailed letters... i dont like the simple shit. dont think that its bad, its just that i dont like stuff thats too simple. well, at least you have a good handstyle.. how long have you been writing?
  14. BANK

    BANK Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 8, 2004 Messages: 197 Likes Received: 0
    lets just say that i was going in the worng direction for way to long and i did a complete overhaul and started over about 2 1/2 months.. everything in this thread from the re-beggining ...um i thought my handstyle was really bad...?
  15. nvOne

    nvOne Member

    Joined: Jan 23, 2002 Messages: 355 Likes Received: 0
    Those aren't that bad man. They're not blwoing my mind or anything hehe..but you're on the right track for sure. Keep it up.

    ps. being a toy is a lot more than just lack of skill..I've met 'real' writers that act pretty damn toyish. I'm sure we all have....

    311. nice.