OsCaR306 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 something i did late last nite.. http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174900&index=0&key='> something i did fast the other day http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...01&index=0&key= today... http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...03&index=0&key= today also... http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...02&index=0&key= i dont have mad skills and im still improving but to improve i think u need criticism...most of u r guna be dicks anyway tho, and u dont knjow the first thing about writing...but..yea.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 *correction the people who r dicks r the ones who usually dont know the first thing about writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TranceStoner Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 IM NOT A DICK!!! UMM yeah its maddd late im high as hell... bout to go to bed and shit... I'll give you some criticism with out being a dick here it goes umm so yeah my personal opinion is that the coloring is cool and shit but you gotta put alittle more work into straiting out the letters for example make them more even , try rounding them out and maybe work with more simple styles. The first piece i like the character on the bottom of the page the coloring was cool too. Just yeah, make the letters more simple and then post some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 when u say straightening out the letters, more even, do u mean balance? cuz im just not getting that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 as much as you say "everyone that disses on me is a toy"....its not always true. you need a LOT of work on your letter structure. it looks exactly like the shit i was drawing after writing for a few months. i hope you are a new writer. this was my attempt at not coming off as an asshole but im sure it didn't work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 yeah im a new writer..3 or 4 months.. and all i was saying is alot of the people that diss on the board do really suck..i didnt say everyone...but alot.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 well? i dont know if its just me but were did you get that toon face thing at the bottom of the 1st link? i rember.. some one posting that same guy on 12.. but it seemed alot better? who knows.. just as sad as it is chill out on the wavy lines.. keep it simple.. like the e and tje purple one the center line is all waked out? keep it kinda normal good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest krie Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 nice , i feel if u keep at it, ull improve alot. peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAZER Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Re: well? Originally posted by ~DeNtOnE~ i dont know if its just me but were did you get that toon face thing at the bottom of the 1st link? i rember.. some one posting that same guy on 12.. but it seemed alot better? who knows.. just as sad as it is chill out on the wavy lines.. keep it simple.. like the e and tje purple one the center line is all waked out? keep it kinda normal good luck! Bam bam- http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00213577f00000035.jpg'> I understand that your learning, but biting that hard isnt cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyrax Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Stay in school, it's spelt "heist" not "hiest"...thought i'd let you know, unless that's on purpose and you want to make it look like you can't spell for shit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rEaL 1NA Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 ......maybe you should try to use simpler letters without so much going on so you can get your form tighter....looks like you have the right idea but you just need practice.....this shit takes dedication.....look at zesto's "summer school" thread for some tips....stay up......:scramble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Re: Re: well? Originally posted by TheGlow I understand that you're learning, but biting that hard isn't cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 this fool ain't good enough to bite yet. i was drawing that exact character a grip ago, its just a generic piece of shit character that you can experiment with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 ive seen that char done so many times...obviously the person who posted b4 bited it...so dont shit on me b4 u shit on him. and i know, i purpopsely spell heist like that... plus there was a writer who wrote heist, so.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 Originally posted by OsCaR306 ...obviously the person who posted b4 bited it... *bit (it) to dont shit on me b4 u shit on him. *so (don't) and i know i purpopsely spell heist like that... *purposely spelled ("heist") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Media OEC Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 Look a lot of people probably make fun of you, but I;m like them, thats just ,mean........on the other hand you should just kill yourself because you will never have any talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest uncle-boy Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 Re: Re: well? Originally posted by TheGlow Bam bam- http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00213577f00000035.jpg'> I understand that your learning, but biting that hard isnt cool. i've seen characters like this a thousand times the one above isnt original and neither is the one on the top of the thread. but who the fuck really cares anyways, he's just practicing in a darn sketch book. and they both suck.;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted August 1, 2002 Author Share Posted August 1, 2002 Originally posted by swif1 *purposely spelled ("heist") woah..so i dont have proper grammer... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.R. Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 experiment with different shit and try and find yourself a style that you can work out and improve, and yeah they might as well name that little character Bill or soemthing cuz i see him alot. "Aw shit there's bill again". i'm high pay no attention to me:scramble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest melt Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 yeah, ive seen that character a lot. just keep your letters simple for now, it'll pay off later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 i like the coloring not the letters, work on the letter forms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stoney Blaze Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 Originally posted by OsCaR306 woah..so i dont have proper grammer... [grammar]:dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted August 1, 2002 Author Share Posted August 1, 2002 heh:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yoink Posted August 1, 2002 Share Posted August 1, 2002 like everyone here has said or is thinking PRACTICE with way more simple letters....learn the letter structure that way and it wont look so ...like ya tried too hard...some 2 cents for ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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