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trying to improve..

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by OsCaR306, Jul 31, 2002.

  1. OsCaR306

    OsCaR306 Member

    Joined: May 20, 2002 Messages: 508 Likes Received: 0
    something i did late last nite..
    http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174900&index=0&key='>

    something i did fast the other day
    [url=http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174901&index=0&key=]http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...01&index=0&key=[/url]

    today...
    [url=http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174903&index=0&key=]http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...03&index=0&key=[/url]

    today also...
    [url=http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gallery_item.cgi?id=174902&index=0&key=]http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...02&index=0&key=[/url]


    i dont have mad skills and im still improving but to improve i think u need criticism...most of u r guna be dicks anyway tho, and u dont knjow the first thing about writing...but..yea..
     
  2. OsCaR306

    OsCaR306 Member

    Joined: May 20, 2002 Messages: 508 Likes Received: 0
    *correction the people who r dicks r the ones who usually dont know the first thing about writing
     
  3. TranceStoner

    TranceStoner Member

    Joined: May 30, 2002 Messages: 899 Likes Received: 0
    IM NOT A DICK!!!

    UMM yeah its maddd late im high as hell... bout to go to bed and shit... I'll give you some criticism with out being a dick here it goes umm so yeah my personal opinion is that the coloring is cool and shit but you gotta put alittle more work into straiting out the letters for example make them more even , try rounding them out and maybe work with more simple styles. The first piece i like the character on the bottom of the page the coloring was cool too. Just yeah, make the letters more simple and then post some more.
     
  4. OsCaR306

    OsCaR306 Member

    Joined: May 20, 2002 Messages: 508 Likes Received: 0
    when u say straightening out the letters, more even, do u mean balance? cuz im just not getting that
     
  5. MrMajicMarkker

    MrMajicMarkker New Jack

    Joined: Jul 20, 2001 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    as much as you say "everyone that disses on me is a toy"....its not always true. you need a LOT of work on your letter structure. it looks exactly like the shit i was drawing after writing for a few months. i hope you are a new writer. this was my attempt at not coming off as an asshole but im sure it didn't work.
     
  6. OsCaR306

    OsCaR306 Member

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    yeah im a new writer..3 or 4 months.. and all i was saying is alot of the people that diss on the board do really suck..i didnt say everyone...but alot..
     
  7. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

    Joined: May 6, 2002 Messages: 1,072 Likes Received: 0
    well?

    i dont know if its just me but were did you get that toon face thing at the bottom of the 1st link? i rember.. some one posting that same guy on 12.. but it seemed alot better? who knows.. just as sad as it is chill out on the wavy lines.. keep it simple.. like the e and tje purple one the center line is all waked out? keep it kinda normal good luck!
     
  8. krie

    krie Guest

    nice , i feel if u keep at it, ull improve alot. peace
     
  9. HAZER

    HAZER New Jack

    Joined: Mar 1, 2002 Messages: 1 Likes Received: 0
    Re: well?

    Bam bam-
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00213577f00000035.jpg'>

    I understand that your learning, but biting that hard isnt cool.
     
  10. hyrax

    hyrax Member

    Joined: Jun 24, 2002 Messages: 486 Likes Received: 0
    Stay in school, it's spelt "heist" not "hiest"...thought i'd let you know, unless that's on purpose and you want to make it look like you can't spell for shit...
     
  11. rEaL 1NA

    rEaL 1NA Guest

    ......maybe you should try to use simpler letters without so much going on so you can get your form tighter....looks like you have the right idea but you just need practice.....this shit takes dedication.....look at zesto's "summer school" thread for some tips....stay up......:scramble:
     
  12. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 28
    Re: Re: well?

     
  13. MrMajicMarkker

    MrMajicMarkker New Jack

    Joined: Jul 20, 2001 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    this fool ain't good enough to bite yet. i was drawing that exact character a grip ago, its just a generic piece of shit character that you can experiment with.
     
  14. OsCaR306

    OsCaR306 Member

    Joined: May 20, 2002 Messages: 508 Likes Received: 0
    ive seen that char done so many times...obviously the person who posted b4 bited it...so dont shit on me b4 u shit on him. and i know, i purpopsely spell heist like that... plus there was a writer who wrote heist, so..
     
  15. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 28

    *bit (it)

    *so (don't)

    *purposely spelled ("heist")
     
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