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Guest --zeSto--

the F has sharp (almost square) corners but bu the time you get to the O, all the curves are smooth.

 

I think it would look sharper with less negative space inside the letters.

 

The left cross of the T seems to just disapear too quickly under the downstroke of the S.

I think it ends too quickly and because it's so thick, it needs to re-appear after the underlap.

 

I'm not sure about the thin off-shoots. Maybe try keeping them all moving in the same direction or add some other twist.

 

hope that's what you wanted to hear.

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Well basically TFD never really painted much and depended on me to get the crew back up(THE NEW GUYS).... Then i dont think alot of the crew liked me much so i felt that maybe its best if i stay cool with the guys im cool with and back out that crew. Also it was kinda my fault i never found intrestest in going to their meetings because it was always the same motivational talk and no action. AND YES I NEED A BETTER T. Im painting it monday ill send the finished product...

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Originally posted by --zeSto--

the F has sharp (almost square) corners but bu the time you get to the O, all the curves are smooth.

 

I think it would look sharper with less negative space inside the letters.

 

The left cross of the T seems to just disapear too quickly under the downstroke of the S.

I think it ends too quickly and because it's so thick, it needs to re-appear after the underlap.

 

I'm not sure about the thin off-shoots. Maybe try keeping them all moving in the same direction or add some other twist.

 

hope that's what you wanted to hear.

 

:rolleyes: :cool:

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