hustler Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 I have posted some pieces i did, ages ago, u might remember, smok it was. I thought it would be useful for me to post some sketches so you can criticise them. They are not very good, but I just wanted to know weather i am going in the right direction or not. http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784974'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785315'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785173'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785014'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hustler Posted June 4, 2001 Author Share Posted June 4, 2001 some more: http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784743'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785015'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785252'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784973'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785178'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hustler Posted June 4, 2001 Author Share Posted June 4, 2001 http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784975'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784742'> http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784744'> Any help would be very greatful, marmuchian don't waste your time writing this time if you just gonna say, that I am a toy. I am a toy, I am not ashamed of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest i'mlost Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 wrong direction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brown twinkie Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 keep at it bro, just don't hit walls for awhile. keep focused and try and be objective. be humble. good shits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astroe Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 ummm definitly old school flavor goin on there but just learn how to spell and change your name (smoke isnt the most original) and you will be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hektic1F.E.C Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 do wht ever YOU feel is right, fuck everyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seym1has2no3fiends Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 Originally posted by i'mlost: wrong direction dido Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devilsMESnger Posted June 4, 2001 Share Posted June 4, 2001 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbian bum Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 WAaaaaaaay overboard on the colors. Do simpleler shit, 2 colors, then try mayby 3. All the colors and writing are meking it look a lot uglier than it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comp Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 there's a place for this, it's called "Place to post if your stuff is new/wack" just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeRoSoL JuNkiE Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 Originally posted by MystikPW: well i think that the color schemes are okay...still very toy but going in the right direction, some of the effects are old school but your letter structure sucks except for a few of them..oh and the one where you tried to go wild style looks like ass...stay simple to start with It's not good for toys to give toys advise, Didnt u ask how to do a piece or sum gay shit? Dude just keep at it, u seem to be practicing quite a bit, u'll improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i eat poo Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 the one that says Dwight is the best.Hell yeah.Dwight is a cool name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temp Name Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 go simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marmuchian Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 they suck, but better than many toy sketchesk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MESTHREE Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 Im having an epeleptic fit ------------------ mesthree13.hug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awkward Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 Does the 4th one down(the one that appears as if it were drawn on carboard) say AWR at the bottom? hmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest BIGMETALCIRCUS Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 Originally posted by MESTHREE: Im having an epeleptic fit i can see why. i think your going in the right direction. why bother coloring it though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tofu Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 I LOVE those old-schoolish color schemes, they're rad... Keep working on the letter forms. I agree that the Dwight piece is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeckFiftyOne Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 That "SARAH" Looks very similar to the "REAS" (located in SOHO fo' those who didn't know.)From The art of getting over. Not to be redneck "I do like Mullets and Mesh hats" But your stuff is to artsey fartsey. Slow it down. Kepp it simple untill it's so bomb your hand goes Wild. Time for bed. ------------------ "Is it better to be known as a Toy, or not at all." [This message has been edited by TeckFiftyOne (edited 06-05-2001).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some_tagger Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 you guys are saying "go simple" but those are pretty much crooked bubble letters filled in fancy all u look at when you see a taggers book are the letters nothing else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MystikPW Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 well i think that the color schemes are okay...still very toy but going in the right direction, some of the effects are old school but your letter structure sucks except for a few of them..oh and the one where you tried to go wild style looks like ass...stay simple to start with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SezOneSke&SonsIncCo Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 not bad but are all those differnet names that you write?? you must be bizzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AesoSayso Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 pleeeeeeeeeease dont tell me that says awr....and just a little tip: brickwall backgrounds dont make your piece any cooler, do some straight letters cuz those bubble ones just aint cuttin it.. Peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hustler Posted June 5, 2001 Author Share Posted June 5, 2001 Thanks for the help, well wasnt much help really, you always say the same thing, go simpler, I enjoy colouring it in, cause then i can which colours work the best with each other. Whoever said, the one where i tried to a wildstyle i didn't, i was just trying out new things. Whoever said that Sarah looked like something from the art of getting over, I havent got that book, and I have no idea what u r talking about, so if u can, but u won't, post it so ohter people can see it as well. Thanks again to evryone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teister Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 is this my password? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teister Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 lemme try to post some ish. Here goes. [img/]http://communities.msn.com/blackbooksketches/yert.msnw?action=Show Photo&PhotoID=2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teister Posted June 5, 2001 Share Posted June 5, 2001 okay, clearly I did that wrong. Thats what I get for not writing stuff down. How do you do this again? Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fame Posted June 6, 2001 Share Posted June 6, 2001 i still don't get it...you retards give every toy here the same stupid advice, "...go simpler...do straight letters...blah, blah blah..." -which apparently sucks, because nobody on here has ever gotten any better from it...here's some real advice dudes...if you can't even fuckin draw a clean ass bubble letter without help from the other 12oz. toys, don't even attempt to be a graff artist...so stop trying so desperately to jump on the bandwagon, because it's not one...you can practice your ass off, and you'll still suck...so put down your sketchbook, get off the fuckin computer,and go find your real talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hustler Posted June 6, 2001 Author Share Posted June 6, 2001 thanks Fame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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