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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by swif1, Apr 2, 2002.

  1. STUP

    STUP New Jack

    Joined: May 8, 2017 Messages: 1 Likes Received: 0
    New to this forum, could I get some critiques?

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  2. TonyFee

    TonyFee New Jack

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  3. dvzxuno

    dvzxuno New Jack

    Joined: Apr 4, 2017 Messages: 51 Likes Received: 0
    there is some tight pices on here
     
  4. dvzxuno

    dvzxuno New Jack

    Joined: Apr 4, 2017 Messages: 51 Likes Received: 0
    where is everybody at????/
     
  5. SterTheMolestor

    SterTheMolestor New Jack

    Joined: Aug 20, 2017 Messages: 2 Likes Received: 0
    All critics are welcomed.. shred it up!

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  6. Abesk

    Abesk New Jack

    Joined: Jun 6, 2016 Messages: 9 Likes Received: 1
    What's up PUTS, I could tell by your S and U that it was you before I seen you spelled your name backwards hahah.

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  7. shaolean13

    shaolean13 New Jack

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 65 Likes Received: 4
    I like your tag.
     
  8. shaolean13

    shaolean13 New Jack

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 65 Likes Received: 4
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    I dig the roach letters on your piece stup.
     
  9. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,740 Likes Received: 363
    R needs tidying up, as does your D.

    Overall you need better balance/flow. As in your letters need to be around about the same size/width or to be reasonably sized based on composition (compare your R to your D and also your two L’s).

    Keep doing dimples until you’re tidy and sharp.
     
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  10. shaolean13

    shaolean13 New Jack

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 65 Likes Received: 4
  11. simon sandleshit

    simon sandleshit Junior Member

    Joined: Jan 30, 2014 Messages: 167 Likes Received: 58
    use bars to make your letters clean and even, draw them all the way through intersecting with each other then erase the innards. copy your keyboard letters. the idea with your ninja man is good but could be executed better. maybe if you spend more time on the ninja and put him to the side of your letters or standing behind them it would look better. look on google images for ninja characters and whatnot..
     
  12. shaolean13

    shaolean13 New Jack

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 65 Likes Received: 4
    Thanks for the tips bruh preciate it I will.20171025_214230.jpg
     
  13. simon sandleshit

    simon sandleshit Junior Member

    Joined: Jan 30, 2014 Messages: 167 Likes Received: 58
    your random spikes arent really working and the indents opposite of them almost make it seem like your trying to break the bar up in unnatural places..do keyboard letters til you can do them clean and balanced and keep away from extensions and whatnot until you understand where to place them.
     
  14. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,740 Likes Received: 363
    Keep it simple until it’s clean.
     
  15. simon sandleshit

    simon sandleshit Junior Member

    Joined: Jan 30, 2014 Messages: 167 Likes Received: 58
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