swif1 Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 beginners post here... could anyone give me feedback? the pic looks shitty and all but oh well. i should have taken the pic outside. any pointers? http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/Tree%20Humper/swif.jpg'> oh, on the S where you see like a creamy yellow line, it's the light reflecting off :heated: oh well comments please. oh yeah, i used paint markers. *edited* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 768186 Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 snif paint markers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 hmmm, whell your new and it looks like your keepin it simple so i dont know what to say more than practise practise practise. i think you need to try and come up with some ways of making it a little more original though. not saying its bitten or anything just a little on the bland side ya know. keep it up! ohh ya make the out line a different colour than the background blue. in some spots the letters look a bit thinner than they would if you used a different outline..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SerialRapisT Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 Yo SwifNewbiE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 PRACTICE! nice start. im kinda feelin the hand on the bottom. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Powers Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 the handstyle ain't bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dremster Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 good start definitely...work on doing that fast and furiously...over and over...also work on handstyles...and don't believe the hype! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Morris Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 dremster I would beg to differ with the fast thing..Iw ould take my time..I see so many people tht would be ale to put down high quality if they just took thier time...the hand isn't bad though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dremster Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 your right, i just saw that movie and wanted to use it in a sentence..peice.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted April 3, 2002 Author Share Posted April 3, 2002 HAHA...thanx to everyone...i guess every other toy should post in this thread? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sect one Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 the people in this forum are way too big headed to ever post their work in a "toys post here" thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted April 3, 2002 Author Share Posted April 3, 2002 that's weak...haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wimp-Core Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 Im a beginner, and this being a beginner thread I thought why the fuck not.. handstyle- http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/thaynecore/Handstyle.JPG'> A style I was messin around with- http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/thaynecore/De.jpg'> I have quite a few more sketches I could share... not that you'd want to see them or anything. heh. I mess around with alot of styles from simples to weird 3-d shit. But Im for sure a beginner so critisism is allright. Even the childish name calling :D paix. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mazer1 Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 Originally posted by ThirdDegreeBurna PRACTICE! nice start. . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ASER1NE Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 yeah swif it sucks , but atleast its got some potential that second shit is just bad . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 eyah i agree wimp core you are a joke, swif you have good potential; how long you been writin for? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~KRYLON2~ Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 nice shoes.....handstyle is alrite Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted April 4, 2002 Author Share Posted April 4, 2002 Originally posted by tears*uno ...swif you have good potential; how long you been writin for? to be honest, i been writing...or should i say "doodling" here and there since .97...i didn't have the desire to write until i found out about the prophet. soo...i should say...december 2001 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 not bad for four months writing; keep practicing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 how old er you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted April 5, 2002 Author Share Posted April 5, 2002 Originally posted by tears*uno how old er you heh...i'm 18...i wish i would have been able to be exposed to this shit earlier in life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOE FUNK Posted April 5, 2002 Share Posted April 5, 2002 SWIF, keep rockin' them letters and I swear, everytime you rock 'em, you'll improve the potential you already got. Chill for an hour each day and draw five outlines using your basic letters. If you change them a little each time you'll start getting a better feel for the letters and different styles based on your original, will start bustin' out. Both hands are nice. I see what you're tryin' to do with your graff Wimp-Core but it's not comin' off right. Your mark is slick though. Maybe you should do some letters based on your hand styles. You'll find that most graff letters are base on what a chisel point pilot can do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wimp-Core Posted April 5, 2002 Share Posted April 5, 2002 Cool, I'll try that out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wazmataz Posted April 5, 2002 Share Posted April 5, 2002 Just keep practasing. And to the both of you. One shouldn't put so much value in what some cats from the Internet say. "Um I know, I, ah um am ah toy." Please, work on your self esteem befor you work on your paper "graffiti". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idonotlikeu Posted April 5, 2002 Share Posted April 5, 2002 i knew i shouldnt have clicked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest THEdude Posted April 6, 2002 Share Posted April 6, 2002 Originally posted by swif1 heh...i'm 18...i wish i would have been able to be exposed to this shit earlier in life. yeah. me too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
artsol Posted April 6, 2002 Share Posted April 6, 2002 anyway...I dunno, I guess I'm just more open to new isht and more appreciative of different kinds of stuf. I thought the first was straight and the hand is tight, the second hand is also tight.nonsensical. - fired from Hasbro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest whoami Posted April 6, 2002 Share Posted April 6, 2002 Swift your handstyle is good for a beginner I can read it, its clean and nice...Just Work On that F so you can have a nice ending to it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted April 6, 2002 Author Share Posted April 6, 2002 thanx, i guess i'll draw/write more as soon as i wake up :D yeah, i ,too, thought the F was kind of -misplaced-...i tried to take the bottom part of the "S" and use that same err...structure(?) for the top of the "F" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mizx Posted April 7, 2002 Share Posted April 7, 2002 swift i can see your red and white shoes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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