albinomonkey Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 wassup guys, changed name , to many people at school and parents know about my old one (systm) anyways here are some sketches ..critique appreciated.. latez http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000051.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000052.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000053.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000054.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000055.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00391622f00000056.jpg'> oh yeah i'll be painting soon , :p , and yes i suck at outlining and doing 3d shadows. i have to work on that. anyways please leave feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 Sorry to break your "wee-little" heart but, change yor goddamn name. STAYHIGH149. Just think of something else, original names aren't that hard to think of... Ummm... Your sketches aren't good. I'm too tired to drop info and advice and whatever. Maybe tomorrow. peace! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted May 16, 2004 Author Share Posted May 16, 2004 sorry to break it to ya, but i asked for critique not how my sketches arn't that good. and yeah there is a stay high 149, but thats not stay one. just don't reply to this later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 Fine. You're dope. Happy? Edited* Look. I'm not trying to come off as an ass. I'm just saying maybe you should change your name because you could run into some beef if not. But it all depnds on how hard you push. If you barely go out and paint, you won't find your shit buffed or dissed. Everyone goes through the name game. I've changed my name from MEAl to MELK to AMEK to AHEM to AMEND and now AEUDI. (Crazy, I know) I didn't whine or cry or even got pissed when people suggested that I should change my name. I respect the other writers that had the name before me. It's all about respect... And as for the comments on your sketches, well... I already said what I said. You're doing the same thing as SLYDE. Your letters are all "bubbly". Sort of like a throwup. If you want to continue in that style, try to make your letters easier to read. Don't overlap and twist shit. (What I mean by twist shit I mean don't make the width of one side of a letter much larger than the opposite side) I can't really say much from those sketches... But to make it easier for other people to drop advice... Would you mine droppping a simple? I just want to see how good your simples are. Uhh... I'll stop here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.VIRS Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 dumb fuck and the tag looks just the same as his now how is dissing a wel know writer and biting his name? albino cock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
972... Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 Keep it simple. My opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 dont overlap...go more simple, pick up the pencil and sketch more often, EVERYDAY! if you want to improve that is....it seems as if you only practice once every month..like my boy said to me once...keep it simple stupid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 You definitely need to find some uglier colors of markers. Also, your handstyle needs about 4 more arrows, another halo, 8 stars, a cloud, and some more quotation marks to be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted May 16, 2004 Share Posted May 16, 2004 Originally posted by GnomeToys You definitely need to find some uglier colors of markers. Also, your handstyle needs about 4 more arrows, another halo, 8 stars, a cloud, and some more quotation marks to be cool. and an "!" at the end with an "x" off to the top of the side.duh, everyone knows that.:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted May 17, 2004 Author Share Posted May 17, 2004 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 If you're gonna start painting soon, I'd stick to the chillest of spots if I were you. You're definitley not ready for the street, where you'll get dissed instantly if you're not developed. Unless you live in a one horse (writer) town. If you're cool people than only a complete dick will fuck with you. Practice more. The second one is the only one I'm kind of feelling. Make sure your stuff is readable and dont overlap your letters unless the letter can be made out easily by the reader. Readable letters get read by a larger audience. Keep it simple and reserve your markers for your best outlines. yup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InDY_500 Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 Originally posted by 972... Keep it simple. My opinion. Much agreed sir.....You definetly know what your doing but stay simple and eventually youll get to that point where youll be able to go a lil more complex.....not bad work though....Keep practicing, practicing, practicing....... Good Luck..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted May 17, 2004 Author Share Posted May 17, 2004 thank you all for the comments, im going to post up some more sketches today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rize415 Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 block letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted May 17, 2004 Share Posted May 17, 2004 You do know that lang hand steez looks very familiar amigo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted May 18, 2004 Author Share Posted May 18, 2004 yeah i know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 it wasnt until after i finished this sketch at 3 in the morning that i realized i had showed you a simple style before when you wrote "sent"... no im not tryin to show you up or anything. insomnia is just a pain in the ass... this may be a bit too complicated for you but make sure that when starting out 1)keep it simple 2)use block letters 3)sketch every muthasuckin day! 4)DO NOT cover up letter with letters ( and/or arrows... blocks... and things of the like) 5)dont listen to PAID:one... he's a heartless backstabbing bastard 6)eat your meat and veggies 7) make sure your 3d is in proportion with itself (this will obviously take lots of practice) 8)dont use dark fills when doing dark outlines 9)dont listen to me... 10)*fart* hope this helps... http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v59/dorkstar/stay.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 and yes... that T i drew should have a black outline on the top of it... but i didnt catch it till after it was scanned... and of course im a lazy fuck... so fuggit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandeLust Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Hey Dork You Still In 401?...:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 Originally posted by DorkstaR 5)dont listen to PAID:one... he's a heartless backstabbing bastard... Just 'cause I'm a bastard does'nt mean I dont know what I'm talking about. I gave your book to ARIZE a looooooong time ago. So he's the bastard now. hah! Plus! I don't think he's at the level of what you sketched. yup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 Originally posted by PAID: :idea:ne Plus! I don't think *STAY is at the level of what you sketched. A little simpler. http://www.boominent.com/stay.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 pff... there he goes... always tryin to outshine me. im not mad man... i just miss it a little. if u get in contact with arize then please have him contact me or hecz... thanks... laters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted May 20, 2004 Share Posted May 20, 2004 My humblest apologies bro. I put some stuff in there that I had a hard time letting go of so, You better damn well get that book back. Try hitting ARIZE's e-mail.....I'll try him by phone and get your stuff. I got mad respect for your work by the way and I always love seeing any new stuff. On another Note*...... I posted something in another thread talking about sketching multiples before chooseing a final for color. I roughed and redrew this at least 5 times before I decided to color it. In that time I learned some new stuff about my letter structures that I may or may not apply later to another outline. I try to bite my own stuff only. I need a life...... http://www.boominent.com/stay.gif'> Boredom is good for creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted May 20, 2004 Share Posted May 20, 2004 :eek: Damn paid wtf lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandeLust Posted May 20, 2004 Share Posted May 20, 2004 Heh Ic U Colored It In On Paint.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted May 20, 2004 Share Posted May 20, 2004 yea ok... this is about the time when i would come back and try to outshine paid:one... but im not even gonna waste my breath much less my time... theres just no way i can show him up. anyway... yea i'll be sure and hit up arize. i owe you massive thanks for hitting up my book. im not worried bout getting it by a certain deadline... hopefully it just finds its way back in one piece. theres alot of stuff in there that i have yet to see for my own eyes... laters:dazed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staE Posted May 20, 2004 Share Posted May 20, 2004 *AHEM*... haha dude i write stae. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
albinomonkey Posted May 20, 2004 Author Share Posted May 20, 2004 DAMN , thank you Dork and Paid:uno for actually taking the time to show me how its done, appreciate it, im taking your advice (like i shoulda a long time ago) and anyways heres some simples, im kinda messin with this name "slam" : http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00436911f00000001.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00436911f00000002.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00436911f00000003.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00436911f00000004.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00436911f00000005.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted May 21, 2004 Share Posted May 21, 2004 Not a problem. Uppercase your "L". It looks like it says SIAM instead of SLAM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
972... Posted May 21, 2004 Share Posted May 21, 2004 I would suggest that you should work on BlockBusters for a while now. Because it seems like you do letters and what not but you don't really understand what you are doing. Bars,proportions,placing and what not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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