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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by albinomonkey, May 16, 2004.

  1. albinomonkey

    albinomonkey Member

    Joined: Nov 22, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    wassup guys, changed name , to many people at school and parents know about my old one (systm) anyways here are some sketches ..critique appreciated.. latez

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    oh yeah i'll be painting soon , :p , and yes i suck at outlining and doing 3d shadows. i have to work on that. anyways please leave feedback
     
  2. Yellow Feets

    Yellow Feets Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 10, 2004 Messages: 1,958 Likes Received: 0
    Sorry to break your "wee-little" heart but, change yor goddamn name. STAYHIGH149. Just think of something else, original names aren't that hard to think of...

    Ummm... Your sketches aren't good. I'm too tired to drop info and advice and whatever. Maybe tomorrow.


    peace!
     
  3. albinomonkey

    albinomonkey Member

    Joined: Nov 22, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    sorry to break it to ya, but i asked for critique not how my sketches arn't that good. and yeah there is a stay high 149, but thats not stay one. just don't reply to this

    later
     
  4. Yellow Feets

    Yellow Feets Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 10, 2004 Messages: 1,958 Likes Received: 0
    Fine.




    You're dope.





    Happy?

    Edited*
    Look. I'm not trying to come off as an ass. I'm just saying maybe you should change your name because you could run into some beef if not. But it all depnds on how hard you push. If you barely go out and paint, you won't find your shit buffed or dissed. Everyone goes through the name game. I've changed my name from MEAl to MELK to AMEK to AHEM to AMEND and now AEUDI. (Crazy, I know) I didn't whine or cry or even got pissed when people suggested that I should change my name. I respect the other writers that had the name before me. It's all about respect...

    And as for the comments on your sketches, well... I already said what I said. You're doing the same thing as SLYDE. Your letters are all "bubbly". Sort of like a throwup. If you want to continue in that style, try to make your letters easier to read. Don't overlap and twist shit. (What I mean by twist shit I mean don't make the width of one side of a letter much larger than the opposite side) I can't really say much from those sketches... But to make it easier for other people to drop advice... Would you mine droppping a simple?


    I just want to see how good your simples are.


    Uhh... I'll stop here.
     
  5. mr.VIRS

    mr.VIRS Member

    Joined: Feb 12, 2003 Messages: 638 Likes Received: 0
    dumb fuck and the tag looks just the same as his
    now how is dissing a wel know writer and biting his name?
    albino cock
     
  6. 972...

    972... Junior Member

    Joined: Jan 5, 2004 Messages: 136 Likes Received: 0
    Keep it simple.

    My opinion.
     
  7. why write?

    why write? Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 19, 2003 Messages: 5,859 Likes Received: 1
    dont overlap...go more simple, pick up the pencil and sketch more often, EVERYDAY! if you want to improve that is....it seems as if you only practice once every month..like my boy said to me once...keep it simple stupid
     
  8. GnomeToys

    GnomeToys Elite Member

    Joined: Jun 24, 2003 Messages: 2,616 Likes Received: 4
    You definitely need to find some uglier colors of markers. Also, your handstyle needs about 4 more arrows, another halo, 8 stars, a cloud, and some more quotation marks to be cool.
     
  9. AORAone

    AORAone Veteran Member

    Joined: Feb 7, 2003 Messages: 6,460 Likes Received: 32


    and an "!" at the end with an "x" off to the top of the side.duh, everyone knows that.:lol:
     
  10. albinomonkey

    albinomonkey Member

    Joined: Nov 22, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
  11. PAID:one

    PAID:one Member

    Joined: Oct 27, 2003 Messages: 383 Likes Received: 0
    If you're gonna start painting soon, I'd stick to the chillest of spots if I were you. You're definitley not ready for the street, where you'll get dissed instantly if you're not developed.

    Unless you live in a one horse (writer) town.

    If you're cool people than only a complete dick will fuck with you.

    Practice more.
    The second one is the only one I'm kind of feelling.
    Make sure your stuff is readable and dont overlap your letters unless the letter can be made out easily by the reader.

    Readable letters get read by a larger audience. Keep it simple and reserve your markers for your best outlines.

    yup.
     
  12. InDY_500

    InDY_500 Veteran Member

    Joined: Sep 30, 2002 Messages: 5,169 Likes Received: 67
    Much agreed sir.....You definetly know what your doing but stay simple and eventually youll get to that point where youll be able to go a lil more complex.....not bad work though....Keep practicing, practicing, practicing.......
    Good Luck.....
     
  13. albinomonkey

    albinomonkey Member

    Joined: Nov 22, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    thank you all for the comments, im going to post up some more sketches today
     
  14. rize415

    rize415 Senior Member

    Joined: Sep 15, 2002 Messages: 1,753 Likes Received: 0
  15. Propaganda

    Propaganda Guest

    You do know that lang hand steez looks very familiar amigo?
     
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