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so yeah somebody help me out

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by m o r s, Aug 31, 2004.

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  1. m o r s

    m o r s New Jack

    Joined: Aug 28, 2004 Messages: 71 Likes Received: 0
    this is pretty much the first time iv painted this name so tell me whats up just give me some feedback on it.

    i think its pretty fucking toy still but just help me out.
  2. Propaganda

    Propaganda Guest

    little touch ups and it would be fine to me...na it still looks fine. I mean can't work much with it.
  3. yeaaaah baby

    yeaaaah baby Elite Member

    Joined: Mar 8, 2004 Messages: 3,366 Likes Received: 150
    dont do that purple in the fill. keep your letters the same thickness. your 3D is a bit off, but its chill. not bad for your first time using paint. keep the flicks coming.
  4. anarky

    anarky Junior Member

    Joined: Jul 14, 2001 Messages: 178 Likes Received: 0
    lose the purple in the fill. looks like someone wrote in your piece as a joke.. other than that its good..
  5. AORAone

    AORAone Veteran Member

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  6. AORAone

    AORAone Veteran Member

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  7. Yellow Feets

    Yellow Feets Senior Member

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  8. ¤¤FoRGE²¤¤

    ¤¤FoRGE²¤¤ Member

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  9. GoRuben!

    GoRuben! New Jack

    Joined: Aug 29, 2004 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    keep working on straight letters like that. those "do dads" in the fill ain't working and basically just work on the tag.
  10. AORAone

    AORAone Veteran Member

    Joined: Feb 7, 2003 Messages: 6,460 Likes Received: 32
    actually, yeah, the tag does need work. however, its the least of his problems, theres nothing really wrong with it. its not all over the place or have excessive retarded extensions or anything.
  11. WallDecoratR

    WallDecoratR Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 5, 2004 Messages: 232 Likes Received: 1
    aint bad. better than what i started with. just keep it simple. work on shaddow and consistency proportion, and a good fill- in looks good though keep it up
  12. Joker

    Joker Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 7, 2000 Messages: 5,267 Likes Received: 92
    Should be in Brick Slayers, not Paperchase. And I think you got plenty of feedback... Closed.
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