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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by Ckit, Jun 8, 2003.

  1. Ckit

    Ckit Member

    Joined: Mar 10, 2003 Messages: 725 Likes Received: 1
    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334806f00000003.jpg'>
    how do you like it?
    and if you dont like it then tell me how i can improve. dont just talk shit.
    ill post more as soon as i get them scanned.
     
  2. beLIEve504

    beLIEve504 Banned

    Joined: Apr 22, 2003 Messages: 20 Likes Received: 0
    im not really feeling the colors. theyre to wild and take away from the letters. and yah the letters.... well ill be quiet for now. keep working on it
    but expect alot of hate. how long have u been writing for?
     
  3. JayFo

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    I think they look pretty good... you kinda screwed up on ya 3D though... I'm not really sure where ya goin with it, the lines should ALL be paralell on 3D, ya know? If not all paralell than all should be pointin to a certain imaginary point and it will make it look like the letters are poppin out from that direction. Ya know what I mean at all? It just kinda throw it off when you don't have your 3D right... the letters look alright though, not bad. I ain't that best or anythin so I'm not gonna be the best critic, so let others say what they want, but the 3D is the first thing I noticed...
     
  4. NOUM

    NOUM Elite Member

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    finally you colored some of dem shits..they look way better with color..keep that shit up..try lgiht colors for the base colors and dark colors for the 3d..i wanna see some more of that shit youv'e come far home boy:king:
     
  5. Ckit

    Ckit Member

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    i took the one with the 3d off b/cuz it sucked. this is it w/out the 3d.
     
  6. JayFo

    JayFo Member

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    you messed up the 3D again on that last one. I know I'm probably beina pain in the ass... but I feel that lil stuff liek taht can make adiffernece in how it looks. Just look on the top left... there's an arrow goin iut to the left and a point goin up vertically, i think the highest part of the sketch. Look at where the shadow is goin if you continue the line, than look at the line all the way at the bottom right and at the top right. They don't intersect where they should... they should ALL go to the same intersection point if your gonna want the effect of poppin out from the right corner of the page. Ya get it? I know this is more of an art class thing, but trust me, it's one of the basics that you must know...
     
  7. iloveboxcars

    iloveboxcars 12oz Royalty

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 20,505 Likes Received: 441
    your hand is ugly.

    and that's coming from someone who doesn't pay too much attention to hands.
     
  8. JayFo

    JayFo Member

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    ^lol that too, but right now I was concentratin on the damn 3D cuz it's horribly off in all ya stuff. The letter styles ain't too bad or anythin, but I'm not the greatest with the whole letter structure shit so dunno what to say there... but yea, work on the 3D as well as ya hand...
     
  9. iloveboxcars

    iloveboxcars 12oz Royalty

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    yeah, dont use a vanishing point until you have normal 3d down.
     
  10. Ckit

    Ckit Member

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    yea i know the 3d sucks...it was done real quick..i usually dont put much effort into them....i got them pretty much down when i try though.....

    and im working on my hand a lot so hopefully ill improve..
     
  11. JayFo

    JayFo Member

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    That's cool, but don't spend time on the letters and go rushin on ya 3D. Cuz 3D is important too and when it's off it throw everythin off and when it's on it can make everythin look better. I'd suggest first goin nothin 3D, all lines same length and paralell. Then tryin vanishing point/shadow type stuff and just pick a point, on or off the page... and make all 3D lines go directly to it. Cut the lines off all at the same length and ya good. I'm glad you say you got it down, but then get it down everytime, no usin ven addin it if it's gonna be wrong... you feelin me? Anywayz, just practice man, peace.
     
  12. Ckit

    Ckit Member

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    yea good point. thanks for the advice.
     
  13. Ckit

    Ckit Member

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  14. krie

    krie Guest

    I like ^^ that 1
     
  15. JayFo

    JayFo Member

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    that one is nice... now if you do a 3D on it... I would suggest makin the 3D go to the left or down. Even better, in between the two, at a diagnal. So you can get a 3D on the whole bottom section, and have the piece poppin right. Make all the lines paralell and the same length, you can even get soemthin to measure the length the same every time until you get a feel for how long each line is and get it by site. Do that, color it, and repost it...
     
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