moses1 Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1692616&a=12995127&p=48932641'> what do u think of my style, ne crizitism welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JedaOne Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 personaly the letter arent that great i am not any better but i have seen better how long have you been writting i liek the character! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest same ol' 6s & 7s Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 character = baaaaaaad letters are pretty good if you lose the connectors which dont really work, but the basic letter structure is ok from what i see. keep drawin. ------------------ I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moses1 Posted May 22, 2001 Author Share Posted May 22, 2001 i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid furie Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 start simple... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.yuck Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 Yes. I the wisdom tycoon have some knowledge to drop. Try by making all of your letters the same size. Keep the basic shape you have now. Something i reckomend to all new comers is to read a book on caligraphy. As you understand letter structure better you will be able to tear the damn alphabet to pieces my young boy. PEACE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest same ol' 6s & 7s Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 1st- i am not an expert, king, or even close, but i do know a few things. some i can apply, others i still work on. having said that, i think that just working towards making your letters more consistant. in style and in shape. draw with a pencil and eraser close by. work with it. tweak it. draw shapes. rectangles, sqares, circles etc. this will help with getting some consistancy. drawdrawdraw paintpaintpaint thats what they tell me keep at it dont lose hope i get excited by progress, because i am no where near perfection ------------------ I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
curious george Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 what the fuck is up with that WAK ASS 3D! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
intercept Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 Originally posted by moses1: i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better. holy shit...a year and you suck that much i have been writing for a year and a half and painting for like a year(on and off).....and i was better than you when i first started look you should learn how to draw dont just tag wit markers............a year you must be kidding......this makes me happy to know i dont compelly suck.................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sect one Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 its not that bad the character looks like the crackhead from the pj's ------------------ representing chicago crews <-TVA, TIB, BTB, TDM, PMS Also registered as: thevisualassault ->..........."ahahahhahah........ahhhh......Africa" - Simpsons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satellite Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 make the two "s"'s consistent, lose that thing over the m, and the o looks slightly lopsided Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeBddub Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 for the love of god, lose the arrows! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garth vader Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 the character looks like that crackhead from the pj's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SezOneSke&SonsIncCo Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 its not bad if your a beginer just keep it more simpler, work on your handstyle,then throwies,then simples, then try out your crazy stuff thats the way I THINK is the best way to get better but who am i? ------------------ Penis Juice!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ruEtbeer Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 Originally posted by knowlej: for the love of god, lose the arrows! and change your name....moses kog. ------------------ i am the buff... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jojoo13 Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 take away all that other shit and you have yourself a good bomb...the charecter is wack though..it looks like a old man or a girrafe of some sort ------------------ no no NO not BZEE....BZ ={(____) <---i luv this stuff!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
near Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 personally i like it...its not a totally dope style or anything but ide like to see it up some where props on the character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dead people rule Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 dont do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanity Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 dump the connectors, don't worry about cuts in the 3d, cump the character, have the letters on the same 'plane' and make em the same size. there's a cat from st. louis that writes moses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sirca Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 Nice letter structure...its a pretty good piece Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rancid Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 The only good letter is the s. The handstyle sucks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JedaOne Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 how long have you been writting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moses1 Posted May 23, 2001 Author Share Posted May 23, 2001 OK dudes and chiks i been tryin all the things most of u all tell me, but when i do it just looks so simple kinda like just plain ol bubble letters neone can do. most of u all say it sucks but if u seen it w/out all that stuff around it i think u would be sayin worse thing. does ne1 have ideas for write it w/out all the shit around it but where it wont be so simple lookin. and i been tryin to write for bout a year but i change my style completly a few months ago. also thanks for tell me how it is cause i dont want to be out there putin up bullshit people think if fucked up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seym1has2no3fiends Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 I really like the word "crizitism" it sounds funny! criz-it-tism! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fr@se Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 i bet your crew is pretty tigh ------------------ -604- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imerz Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 Originally posted by curious george: what the fuck is up with that WAK ASS 3D! Nothing..... maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AidsIsDeadlyShit Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 work on the 3d .. the char the can the e and a lil bit on the s... not sayin i am dope but i just think that those are some aspects that need attention.. [This message has been edited by AidsIsDeadlyShit (edited 05-23-2001).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MASk! Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 Originally posted by intercept: holy shit...a year and you suck that much i have been writing for a year and a half and painting for like a year(on and off).....and i was better than you when i first started look you should learn how to draw dont just tag wit markers............a year you must be kidding......this makes me happy to know i dont compelly suck.................. TO bad your an asshole! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaEkOnCe Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 that stuff aint that bad. you look like you have mad potential keep writing. ------------------ "PTA smack a ho" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brown twinkie Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 honestly that bboy character is way played out. if you wanna do characters, be original please. other than that you need to PRACTICE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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