Guest -sudz- Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 i scanned it greyscale, the colours i used sucked, but you get the jist. what do you think? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00214109f00000017.jpg'> sorry about the size, fotango is shitty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fr8lover Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 sudz i thought a bunch of people told you that the whole attempting transcendiness wasnt gonna work for ya. get back to nice big letters and ease up on the shadow too buddy, you could kill someone with that thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest -sudz- Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 i'm not attempting 'transcendiness'. as soon as anyone who's not wicked posts anything in here that's 'abstract' people throw that accusation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest --zeSto-- Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 yeah... less ghost lines.. either overlap or underlap.. pick on and stick with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest -sudz- Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 yeah, i've been trying to stop with those, i've gotten into the habit i guess. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmeechLizard Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 Shitty shit? I donno about that, I actually think its pretty coo. Why does everybody on this forum end their replies with "keep it up" or "keep practicing" etc? Do you really think if you dont say that shit 100000000 times that people are going to assume they should stop writing because you didnt tell them to continue? :confused: Heh, j/p, anyway I think that sh@ is pretty nice, any criticism I would have would just be reaching for things to point out, and theres way too much useless negativity on these forums as it is. Peace. :beat: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyHorton Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 Originally posted by SmeechLizard Shitty shit? I donno about that, I actually think its pretty coo. Why does everybody on this forum end their replies with "keep it up" or "keep practicing" etc? Do you really think if you dont say that shit 100000000 times that people are going to assume they should stop writing because you didnt tell them to continue? :confused: Heh, j/p, anyway I think that sh@ is pretty nice, any criticism I would have would just be reaching for things to point out, and theres way too much useless negativity on these forums as it is. Peace. :beat: you're new here, aren't you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest -sudz- Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 thats what i was going to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BitchAssSlut Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 whats the point of asking for help? unless your name is ouija, you dont seem to ever accept tips or criticism in any serious manner from anyone... people have been telling you to do the same thing forever now.. what makes you think anything has changed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illwill Posted July 12, 2002 Share Posted July 12, 2002 i think theres way too much goin on in that thing. to be honest it looks kinda like chicken scratch with a 3-d. make it alot simpler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arson.85.ATG Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 i really hate it when people do that..they do their letters and then the fucking shadows like twice the size of the piece..it looks bad..i mean ok..yea u are better than some cats in here..just keep practicing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unseen Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 my advice is to not ask for help from random ppl on the internet. reason #1 is because they dont know what your going for in ur work. reason #2 being u should try to develope on ur own and creat ur own stuff. reason #3 is the onley way u can make considerable progress is by practice u cant become very much better by following someones advice to straighten a line or tone it down or whatever. If u just have some fricken paitents and practice you will soon be crushing alot of these ppl giving u advise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeRoSoL JuNkiE Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 Originally posted by Arson Oner i really hate it when people do that..they do their letters and then the fucking shadows like twice the size of the piece..it looks bad..i mean ok..yea u are better than some cats in here..just keep practicing.... Oh please...stop talking like your sketches are really good and you can rag on people cause you think you kick major ass. You suck until further notice buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ser3adc Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 make it simple man...if i didnt know what it said i would never be able to decipher it...if some other writer saw that drivin by they'd never know what it said...and isn't that what counts?...just my 2 cents Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 You people all get way too indepth with your conversations. just look at the sketch and say what could be improved. ie I think the style sudz uses could work aight if he changed something with that sketch. you cant change his style because its what his mind wants it to look like. but I think you can use things such as ballance to look at. I think in some areas there are too many lines close together and it looks too unbalanced, I would say spread the lines out more evenly. just trying to help though, looks pretty good sudz. fuk im high^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 LOOKS TERRIBLE SIMPLIFY, SON...HOT DANG. ABSTRACT IS FOR WHEN YOU HAVE A GOOD AMOUNT OF EXPERIENCE IN GRAFFITI AND NATURALLY FLOW ONTO MORE COMPLEX LETTERS. CAPS LOCK WILL END NOW I DONT EVEN KNOW WHY IT WAS ON IN THE FIRST PLACE... I suggest you work on the simple shit first. you are trying to get abstract far too early...dont rush it. everything comes natural once you have enough experience. only kids who do abstract stuff, as far as i know, are kids who have a shitload of experience or/and very talented/weird art kids. dinosaurs will devour your city if you dont simplify. i do not speak lies. http://plasticpuke.net/~sway/girls/Anna_Kournikova/010.jpg'> I HAVE A TENNIS RACKET HOLY SHIT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceso One SAF Posted July 13, 2002 Share Posted July 13, 2002 do letters not blobs with lines thru it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DMX Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 honestly, i don't really know what to tell you anymore... for the last two years or so you've been posting crap and people keep telling you to work on your simples and yet you continue to do this attempted wildstyle/abstract garbage. you posted some simple shit a while back but it was still horrible... so i guess all i can do is repeat the same thing... WORK ON YOUR SIMPLES AND HANDSTYLES AND NOTHING ELSE. don't even bother with piecing, it's going to look like crap guaranteed. just draw block letters as simple and straight as possible over and over for hours. don't try to add "style" to them. i hope i don't come off like an asshole in this post. i'm just trying to help. i'd really like to see you get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 i did this one sitting in church today...i had to keep myself occupied. anyway i think you have a problem making every dropshadow a dark outline. outline only the letters that you want to stand out. there are too many dark lines intersecting. maybe this will give you a little picture of what im talking about. i give you abstractus dorkus..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
space Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 Originally posted by DorkstaR i did this one sitting in church today...i had to keep myself occupied. damn... durin church... well atleast you weren't poppin and lockin, i always get shit for that. hehehe... nice sketch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest eleven17 Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 that doesnt really come off as abstract to me dork......but it is sick none the less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 Originally posted by DMX honestly, i don't really know what to tell you anymore... for the last two years or so you've been posting crap and people keep telling you to work on your simples and yet you continue to do this attempted wildstyle/abstract garbage. you posted some simple shit a while back but it was still horrible... so i guess all i can do is repeat the same thing... WORK ON YOUR SIMPLES AND HANDSTYLES AND NOTHING ELSE. don't even bother with piecing, it's going to look like crap guaranteed. just draw block letters as simple and straight as possible over and over for hours. don't try to add "style" to them. i hope i don't come off like an asshole in this post. i'm just trying to help. i'd really like to see you get better. hmm thats a little odd this kid registered on this forum may of 2002. yet he claims that sudz has been posting this crap for 2 years. whell i dont know but I think that sounds just a little odd.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 Originally posted by FROSTY hmm thats a little odd this kid registered on this forum may of 2002. yet he claims that sudz has been posting this crap for 2 years. whell i dont know but I think that sounds just a little odd.... either way, he speaks truth. i've seen sudz in the beginning and he hasnt gotten much better. it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DMX Posted July 16, 2002 Share Posted July 16, 2002 Originally posted by FROSTY hmm thats a little odd this kid registered on this forum may of 2002. yet he claims that sudz has been posting this crap for 2 years. whell i dont know but I think that sounds just a little odd.... i've been on here for a long time with a different name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest --zeSto-- Posted July 16, 2002 Share Posted July 16, 2002 umm.. sudz has indeed gotten better. He's way better at painting and his cows dont cause seizures anymore. and dork... good lesson!;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted July 16, 2002 Share Posted July 16, 2002 you think? i think he may have gotten a tiny bit better, but for 2 years...he should be at a better level...but i suppose it varies from person to person. i just think he should focus on simples. sure they may appear boring, but its what must be done. the cows i think are overrated and nothing special. check the fly shit out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DMX Posted July 17, 2002 Share Posted July 17, 2002 Originally posted by Kr430n5_666 i just think he should focus on simples. sure they may appear boring, but its what must be done. see i don't get why people always say that, i don't think they're boring at all. a nice funky simple style is one of my favorite things to see. i'm going to use one of the most obvious examples and say mber, i absolutely love seeing his shit and it's always simple as hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted July 17, 2002 Share Posted July 17, 2002 Originally posted by DMX i've been on here for a long time with a different name allright whell thats why i didnt snap on you. just for incase you said something such as this. didnt wanna make a huge fool of myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BitchAssSlut Posted July 17, 2002 Share Posted July 17, 2002 Originally posted by FROSTY didnt wanna make a huge fool of myself youre about 977 posts late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ASER1NE Posted July 17, 2002 Share Posted July 17, 2002 i like it , ghost lines and all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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