Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 ..::recent sketches::.. these are some of the sketches i did last month. good or bad? i think they're kind of toy, but i just need some opinions. thanks. http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_1'> http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_2'> http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_4'> http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/view_image.cgi?PICTURES=A366163_6'> I will post some more if yall think they're alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 None Work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 ... wow... not hard to post people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 HERE http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000001.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000008.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000028.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000024.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 i suggest u lose the "stick style" and find a style that flows. not only is it more appealing but it will benefit u to find a style u can stick with. work on simples more than anything. half ur letters dont really look like im sure they are suppose to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 thanks i'll try a more curvystyle today and might post it later today. this one is something i was working on and i was wondering if this would be good to change into a more curvy flow. Its a stick style right now but I could change that... http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000023.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 Did this one just now http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400405059_001P.jpg'> Hows this looking? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 :o the throwie...trash it or stick with it? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000032.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000031.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 damn pictures fuck this if you cant see the pictures just delete this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000033.jpg'> a quick simple letters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 can i get some opinions?:huh2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 9-6-03 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000034.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000035.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 9-6-03 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000037.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000038.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000036.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 i dont really like it.. its just simple with a little bit of bending and ugly arrows.. write through your imagination, not through what you think people will like, ay?:lick: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 6, 2003 Author Share Posted September 6, 2003 9-6-03 heh yeah i was just tryin some simples...i just did this one...i imagine something, write it on paper, and it gets transformed through eraser corrections into things like these. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000039.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000040.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 6, 2003 Share Posted September 6, 2003 Keep Workin on your pieces! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 hows this one? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000041.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 Originally posted by Fate2*88 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000033.jpg'> a quick simple letters I think this 1 is your best work its simple and good enough! You know your shadows! thats good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrSeusLives Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000030.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000032.jpg'> *These aren't throwies but they're nice. I think you should either stick with this "style" or just stick what you think is right. But if you chose to continue to achieve that "right style", I suggest getting a good letter structure. Your lettesr aren't terrible [i'm talking about your simples] but your letters don't match. The only reason they don't match, is because some bars [or just the letter itself] aren't all the same in size. You're probably thinking "So, so-and-so letter's are different sizes and their letters lood good". True but they're experienced with basic letter structure. To make a long story short, don't rush your stuff. Don't attempt a wildstyle yet. That goes for you, me, and any other toy. I don't do "wildstyle" myself because I find it difficult. I haven't really found my "style" yet. Plus, I always want my letters to be "readable". If someone passes by one of my pieces on a wall, I want them to be like "Damn, this MELK kid is nice" NOT "Damn, this toy is garbage. Imma paint over his shit". I think you should always have a piece that you'll be able to paint with ease. But as the moths/years go on, you can do whatever you want. Stay up MELK P.S - You gotta decide on whether you want to write FATE or FAIT. I bet "FATE" is takin' already though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 Thanks starz. I was just messing around with that one but here's another one for you if you liked it. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000042.jpg'> And i understand what you're saying Melk. I did start out with pieces and i should have worked my way up to pieces, but thats why i've started practicing simples and i hope to improve more before putting anything else on a wall. Thanks for the tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 Oh yeah MELK i write FAIT, fate is already taken. There's a Fate in LA so i'm writing FAIT. My name is Fate2*88 because i signed up for this forum before i changed my name and didnt want to re-register. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 I am noone to be speaking but I think you should stick with that style I like it..in about 5 months your shit is gonna be h-o-t-t,it's iight now but if you keep with it and improve your bad points..I think you get what i'm saying..iight i'm done..goodnight. -Noumerunoskionerola Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 NOUM you think i should stick withthe following style or the pieceing style i posted? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000043.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 Both..fuck it throw them both together if you can.. A wise man once told me "Don't listen to me listen to you"..You know who you are..::Coughheczcough:: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 7, 2003 Share Posted September 7, 2003 Woo that last one is hott stick to that one, then start making it more complex if your trying 2 do crazy pieces! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 7, 2003 Author Share Posted September 7, 2003 9-7-03 yeah i'm going to make the colors more complex eventually. here's a start with some clouds. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000044.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000045.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000046.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 8, 2003 Author Share Posted September 8, 2003 9-8-03 did these during school today... http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000047.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000048.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000049.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000050.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000051.jpg'> http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000052.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted September 8, 2003 Share Posted September 8, 2003 Common mistake by all toys is to put a lower-case kick on the bottom of an upper-case T. As a veteran I'm here to tell you... don't ever, ever ever ever ever ever ever ever EVER... ever come in here, with this again... http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000048.jpg'> Your letters lack life and a sense of movement. They're very stale. Even your simple letters. Which is fine, no sweat. But when you want to add some spice to your simples... you need movement and life to make the letters jump off... Just a tip from yer Uncle Joker... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted September 8, 2003 Share Posted September 8, 2003 See how in the T I drew for you that it almost looks juicy? Like you could bite into it. Not that what I've drawn is that good but it shows some movement with the flow and lean of the T. It all kind of goes together. Am I making sense? I'm honestly not trying to be an ass, I'm seriously giving advice. And maybe look into reading the user manual of your digital camera... mainly the section on how to focus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted September 8, 2003 Author Share Posted September 8, 2003 Thanks for the advice man i really appreciate all of it. You probably stopped me from doing something some real stupid stuff with my work. I understand what you're saying about the T and i'll definitely work on it. I'm going to practice with it and post up later tonight probably. Oh yeah, my digital, it's a cheap 50 dollar HP camera, and it has no focus...terrible for sketches. It's all i could get together, but whatever. I'll post up later and thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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