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Rate my sketch..please

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by Seck, Oct 13, 2001.

  1. Seck

    Seck New Jack

    Joined: Oct 8, 2001 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    On a scale of 1-10...What do you think? I still need to fix the lines/drawing up a little bit, and rescan and clean it up more, + color it...but how does it look? What can I change, should I add shadows, any comments?

    I need to know because it's for a contest. Thanks a lot...

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  2. dead fetus

    dead fetus Guest

  3. TRUE

    TRUE Member

    Joined: May 1, 2000 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    I would suggest that you try a more simple sytle, work on your letter forms, and just practice a hell of a lot... slowly you'll start to see improvement. Just keep at it.

    But as for what changes you should make for THIS piece...
    Give it some 2-d and a nice simple fill.

    Oh, and dont let the people on this board discourage you. They're going to say some bad things.
     
  4. OGBforMumia

    OGBforMumia Member

    Joined: Sep 23, 2000 Messages: 710 Likes Received: 0
    http://www.flyinghellfish.com/images/cherrybomb.jpg'>
    now thats what i call a bah-day (the little thing that shoots H20 up your butt to "clean" you)


    i like the sketch. but practice more.. color it and scan it again
     
  5. cese

    cese Member

    Joined: Apr 20, 2001 Messages: 588 Likes Received: 0
    post back when u develop a stile
     
  6. Seek One

    Seek One Elite Member

    Joined: Nov 26, 2000 Messages: 2,666 Likes Received: 0
  7. Jesus of Nazareth

    Jesus of Nazareth Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 6, 2000 Messages: 2,388 Likes Received: 1
     
  8. taco bell bomber

    taco bell bomber Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 2, 2000 Messages: 2,037 Likes Received: 0
    why do most people have to give asshole replies..look jus work on going simple for now.dont try tech stuff cause it wont work
     
  9. taco bell bomber

    taco bell bomber Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 2, 2000 Messages: 2,037 Likes Received: 0
    and the first 2 letters are thicker than the other to..work that out also
     
  10. Zaius

    Zaius Member

    Joined: Jul 6, 2001 Messages: 917 Likes Received: 3
    keep it simple till you get structure.
     
  11. Cyber Optx

    Cyber Optx Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2001 Messages: 514 Likes Received: 0
    try and work your style
    keep a continous form/shape
    -straight or curved lines..try to incorporate both but make it flow
    3d, background and some snazzy fill

    did you sketch it in pencil first, practice,practice,practice
    ....and the scale of 1-10 well.....

    :king:
     
  12. REGULATOR

    REGULATOR Elite Member

    Joined: Sep 6, 2001 Messages: 3,383 Likes Received: 0
    yea dude......work hella simple shit first.....when u try to jump into wildstyles and shit, ur shit comes off pretty toy....its pretty Uneven, so even it up and some color, thenppost it
     
  13. The Helacious Dr. Dazzle

    The Helacious Dr. Dazzle Member

    Joined: Sep 23, 2001 Messages: 257 Likes Received: 0
    Yeah, keep practicing, it'll come

    At the mo, though I don't think you'll win that contest.....
     
  14. eros

    eros Senior Member

    Joined: Aug 3, 2000 Messages: 1,033 Likes Received: 0
    try making the widths of your lines conform more with one another, and practice copying computer fonts and the letters on signs... keep at it
     
  15. TheGarbageMan

    TheGarbageMan Member

    Joined: Jun 8, 2001 Messages: 331 Likes Received: 0
    this isnt really about youre drawing...everyone has to start out somewhere, like others are saying, develop youre style...but get a new name, plllleeeaaassseee. theres like 800 million peolpe with the name seck or sec or sel something like that is way overused, i know 3 secks and 2 tecks and 3 sels, its all getting stupid and theyre toys anyway. Think of a new name with letters that you can develop youre own style on, and be original :D
     
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