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Rate my sketch..please

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by Seck, Oct 13, 2001.

  1. Seck

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    Rate my sketch..please

    Discussion started by Seck - Oct 13, 2001

    On a scale of 1-10...What do you think? I still need to fix the lines/drawing up a little bit, and rescan and clean it up more, + color it...but how does it look? What can I change, should I add shadows, any comments?

    I need to know because it's for a contest. Thanks a lot...

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  2. dead fetus

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    dead fetus - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    is 0 an option?
     
  3. TRUE

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    TRUE - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    I would suggest that you try a more simple sytle, work on your letter forms, and just practice a hell of a lot... slowly you'll start to see improvement. Just keep at it.

    But as for what changes you should make for THIS piece...
    Give it some 2-d and a nice simple fill.

    Oh, and dont let the people on this board discourage you. They're going to say some bad things.
     
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  4. OGBforMumia

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    OGBforMumia - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    http://www.flyinghellfish.com/images/cherrybomb.jpg'>
    now thats what i call a bah-day (the little thing that shoots H20 up your butt to "clean" you)


    i like the sketch. but practice more.. color it and scan it again
     
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  5. cese

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    cese - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    post back when u develop a stile
     
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  6. Seek One

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    Seek One - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    wack
     
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  7. Jesus of Nazareth

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  8. taco bell bomber

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    taco bell bomber - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    why do most people have to give asshole replies..look jus work on going simple for now.dont try tech stuff cause it wont work
     
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    taco bell bomber - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    and the first 2 letters are thicker than the other to..work that out also
     
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  10. Zaius

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    Zaius - Replied Oct 13, 2001

    keep it simple till you get structure.
     
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  11. Cyber Optx

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    Cyber Optx - Replied Oct 14, 2001

    try and work your style
    keep a continous form/shape
    -straight or curved lines..try to incorporate both but make it flow
    3d, background and some snazzy fill

    did you sketch it in pencil first, practice,practice,practice
    ....and the scale of 1-10 well.....

    :king:
     
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  12. REGULATOR

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    REGULATOR - Replied Oct 14, 2001

    yea dude......work hella simple shit first.....when u try to jump into wildstyles and shit, ur shit comes off pretty toy....its pretty Uneven, so even it up and some color, thenppost it
     
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  13. The Helacious Dr. Dazzle

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    The Helacious Dr. Dazzle - Replied Oct 14, 2001

    Yeah, keep practicing, it'll come

    At the mo, though I don't think you'll win that contest.....
     
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  14. eros

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    eros - Replied Oct 14, 2001

    try making the widths of your lines conform more with one another, and practice copying computer fonts and the letters on signs... keep at it
     
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  15. TheGarbageMan

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    TheGarbageMan - Replied Oct 14, 2001

    this isnt really about youre drawing...everyone has to start out somewhere, like others are saying, develop youre style...but get a new name, plllleeeaaassseee. theres like 800 million peolpe with the name seck or sec or sel something like that is way overused, i know 3 secks and 2 tecks and 3 sels, its all getting stupid and theyre toys anyway. Think of a new name with letters that you can develop youre own style on, and be original :D
     
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