Kam12oz Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 ok heres a few sketches I did and can anyone give me some pointers on how to improve them and tell me some of the things i do that doesnt look good. they are just plain sketches with now color or back grounds a little 3d but i just wanted pointers on letter style. go here http://www.angelfire.com/art2/kam12oz/index.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest virus Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 [x] fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aPirate Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 kam12oz you cant link to your files Kam1.psd/Kam2.psd unless you upload them, store them online. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElectricitySucks Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 CLLLLLLLLLLLLOSE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgeDubya Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 someone needs a lesson in posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 Yeah Big time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kam12oz Posted December 19, 2002 Author Share Posted December 19, 2002 i added a link in my original post ..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest virus Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crewk money Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 i don't like the technical one, your not ready for that yet. Just keep wit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sqeels Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 thats a nice start but dont try technical stuff yet just keep doing simple stuff with different styles but yeah good start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TresOne Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 The second sketch is the best by far -- keep it simple, and then go nuts later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kam12oz Posted December 20, 2002 Author Share Posted December 20, 2002 Well thanks so far on the pointers but keep them coming if youd like i can try to post some more i have done......um and if you feel the need to i wouldnt mind if you picked apart every little thing you personally wouldnt like cause all im tring to do is progress...........(i am more of a fine artist like acrylic painting, charcoal, pastels. if anyone is interested in seeing anything like that just tell me .....or if you have any ideas i could inquire my stlye from fine arts into writing just say cause it really couldnt hurt) but it maybe awhile before i get anything else posted cause ill be out of town.........thanks....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3RDi-<SGM>- Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 You're off to a good start. tweek the letters some more though because they're so simple they don't look like graff. when i say "tweek", i mean bend the lines of the letters some more. but yeah... not bad for the newness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 Work on straight letters....tweak later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Sodoma Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 I quite like them, a little boring but you're on the right track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Sodoma Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 Originally posted by 3RDi-<SGM>- tweek the letters some more though because they're so simple they don't look like graff. You lamo, it doesn't have to look like 'graff'... if it's on a wall, it probably will. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crewk money Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 ^^^word! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HesT Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 I dunno kam but those sketches look like u bit em outta a molotov cocktail magazine i gots..... hmmm well jus develop ur own style payce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest virus Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 how can u bite block letters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHAKEWELL Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 practice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crewk money Posted December 20, 2002 Share Posted December 20, 2002 Originally posted by virus how can u bite block letters? you should know, bite pirate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted December 22, 2002 Share Posted December 22, 2002 well i used to write cam but, i got bored of it, so i suggest to just practice practice, and look around ur city for artists and take notes ,get a feel for the flow and such,dont bite, and dont try and connect the letters or anything, just get a feel for what there doing.then just sketch for mad hours, and ulll develop ur own style, and its the universal advice because it works peaver -lame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 6ozmesk Posted December 25, 2002 Share Posted December 25, 2002 born2rite i took him painting for his first time(first time holdin a can) tha nigga got talent he got the toy view of wut graff letters are etc.(no diss::cant do nuthin but get better) but he painted the cleanest fuckin piece an he fuckin freestyled it....i was highly impressed. KEEP WERKIN ON THA GRAFF DAWG SEE U MONDAY! :king: p.s. 2 hella ill sketches fo u to peep when u get back:D one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sieb Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 hey we dont want to see that, ive been writing for a few a years, and just now am i doing anything that i would be willing to post. but i dont, cause most sketches are gay to look at on the internet, unless theyre sick, most people try to cover up theyre weak graff with mediocre art skills that leaves fools fooled on 12 oz, most of the stuff peopel say is a good start is totla garbage, dont want none of this bullshit, so keep it in your book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sieb Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 did that dude just say dawg? i bet your both 7th graders, 6ozmesk has been writing for 4 months, and kam just started after mesk showed him, they tag the bathrooms at school, do sharpie tags on the bus, and paint those spots where the local wannabe stoners thro up 4:20, even tho none of those kids actually inhale. oh and you inline skate, maybe you skateboard? am i right. yeha and you draw names for ugly hoes at your school, and still get none. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill Me Now Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 Here's some advice. Quit while you're ahead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OooDAZEooO Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 like the second one, the rest really sucks......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Sodoma Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 Originally posted by Nothing did that dude just say dawg? i bet your both 7th graders, 6ozmesk has been writing for 4 months, and kam just started after mesk showed him, they tag the bathrooms at school, do sharpie tags on the bus, and paint those spots where the local wannabe stoners thro up 4:20, even tho none of those kids actually inhale. oh and you inline skate, maybe you skateboard? am i right. yeha and you draw names for ugly hoes at your school, and still get none. Hahaha, whoever this guy is talking about is a poofter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shitonastick Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally posted by virus how can u bite block letters? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- you should know, bite pirate! you should know, bite pirate! OH MY FUCKIN GOD!!!!U TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH MAN!!!MAD PROPS!!!ahahahaha :lol: U suck Virus..change ur name! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted December 28, 2002 Share Posted December 28, 2002 If im not mistaken i think shitonastick hasnt posted.. how do we kno hes not worse than virus? i think that its funny hes mocking toys when he himself has reason to be called one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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