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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by Kam12oz, Dec 18, 2002.

  1. Kam12oz

    Kam12oz New Jack

    Joined: Dec 17, 2002 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    ok heres a few sketches I did and can anyone give me some pointers on how to improve them and tell me some of the things i do that doesnt look good. they are just plain sketches with now color or back grounds a little 3d but i just wanted pointers on letter style.
    go here http://www.angelfire.com/art2/kam12oz/index.html
  2. virus

    virus Guest

    [x] fix them
  3. aPirate

    aPirate Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 28, 2002 Messages: 1,420 Likes Received: 0

    you cant link to your files Kam1.psd/Kam2.psd unless you upload them,
    store them online.
  4. ElectricitySucks

    ElectricitySucks Veteran Member

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  5. GeorgeDubya

    GeorgeDubya New Jack

    Joined: Oct 2, 2002 Messages: 6 Likes Received: 0
    someone needs a lesson in posting
  6. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

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  7. Kam12oz

    Kam12oz New Jack

    Joined: Dec 17, 2002 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    i added a link in my original post .....
  8. virus

    virus Guest

  9. crewk money

    crewk money New Jack

    Joined: Sep 6, 2002 Messages: 91 Likes Received: 0
    i don't like the technical one, your not ready for that yet. Just keep wit it.
  10. sqeels

    sqeels New Jack

    Joined: Dec 14, 2002 Messages: 35 Likes Received: 0
    thats a nice start but dont try technical stuff yet just keep doing simple stuff with different styles but yeah good start
  11. TresOne

    TresOne Member

    Joined: May 23, 2002 Messages: 447 Likes Received: 2
    The second sketch is the best by far -- keep it simple, and then go nuts later.
  12. Kam12oz

    Kam12oz New Jack

    Joined: Dec 17, 2002 Messages: 4 Likes Received: 0
    Well thanks so far on the pointers but keep them coming if youd like i can try to post some more i have done......um and if you feel the need to i wouldnt mind if you picked apart every little thing you personally wouldnt like cause all im tring to do is progress...........(i am more of a fine artist like acrylic painting, charcoal, pastels. if anyone is interested in seeing anything like that just tell me .....or if you have any ideas i could inquire my stlye from fine arts into writing just say cause it really couldnt hurt) but it maybe awhile before i get anything else posted cause ill be out of town.........thanks.......
  13. 3RDi-<SGM>-

    3RDi-<SGM>- New Jack

    Joined: Dec 2, 2002 Messages: 35 Likes Received: 0
    You're off to a good start. tweek the letters some more though because they're so simple they don't look like graff. when i say "tweek", i mean bend the lines of the letters some more. but yeah... not bad for the newness
  14. Intangible

    Intangible 12oz Legend

    Joined: Jul 9, 2001 Messages: 17,479 Likes Received: 7
    Work on straight letters....tweak later
  15. El Sodoma

    El Sodoma New Jack

    Joined: Sep 26, 2002 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 0
    I quite like them, a little boring but you're on the right track.