stract Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 for those of you who saw my last post, the one that was critized so much for the lack of style, and the same name thing.. look at this one, it was just barley started, but is that even close to being on the rite track, imporoved at all from my last post?....when finsihed it will say Musterd, or Mustard, i havent decided. but once again, respectvly critize agian...tell me exactly what you hate ( detials...etc: colors, shape, shading, 3d....) and tell me if any little part of it is on the rite track. http://fototime.com/ftweb/bin/ft.dll/standard?pictid={0E51EE50-B51F-485F-8763-16B0C072B834}'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Fire Inside Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 oi-vey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some pittsburgh flavor Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 Originally posted by A Fire Inside oi-vey! oi-vey is right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuckedupafro Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 here we go again.. try and make your letters square, instead of round with straight bits on it. and make the size and width of your letters consistent, like fat vertical bits with skinny horizontal bits, with extra fat diagonal bits. you know whut i mean? by the way, all my pets have died from veiwing your pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 you shouldnt have posted that till it was finished but whatever,,, ummm you got a long way to go,,, yah do a simple and make sure the letters have the same width yah know,,, Think of it this way,,,, you have to build a nice solid frame in order to construct a stylish car on,, whelll you know what i mean,,, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shitonastick Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 ur colors are borin....ur letters are wack.... Stick to some square letters,or just rounds,not in the middle.... Peace out jigga wigga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 YOU SUCK AT LIFE and graffiti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AE..604! Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 dont worry about your shading,colours,or 3-d work on you letters you suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Durden Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 why are you even doing this to yourself? dont you kids look at some of the shit thats actually good in here? (granted, its few and far between...) but why would you look at that and then post your shit and waste space, your sure as hell not going to get too many positive comments. so why do it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 21, 2002 Author Share Posted September 21, 2002 you ask why do it?, its a rather simple question to answer, to recieve feed back of any kind. wether it be good or bad, its feed back. is it that hard to see? i see and respect all the good stuff on this site, thats how i know the feedback will be good, ive always thought my shit was wack and couldnt grasp letter formation, but everyone around me was impressed and liked my shit alot, even a few writters that write.... but i knew it was lagging alot so i decided to post one or two on here to see how harsh you could be so i can change it up for the good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crewk money Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 some advice, quit postin fugly shit. take up another artform like finger painting or sycronized swimming. your friends must suck too, if they say thats good. the forum votes for you to quit. suckas get tha dang-a-lang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Dazzle Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 Why the hell would you pick the word mustard??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest socrates Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 It would be funny if you had friends who wrote ketchup, relish, etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 CC!! CONDAMENT CREW.... anyways stract this is worse than the phone.... ahh god where to start.... just pretend your doing a roller on the paper.... thats what you need to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serpent of the light Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 just keep working and trying new shit out. then come back to these pieces that suck ass and do what you were trying to do. if that makes sense... like i've been at graf for a little over a year now, i know my improvement is great, and i've learned how to do a ton more shit with letters and fills and form and everything, and i can go back to my old sketches and redo them (on a new page) like i had wanted to do the first time... anyways, you suck now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whoa.666 Posted September 21, 2002 Share Posted September 21, 2002 This is why I don't do drugs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abbalah Posted September 22, 2002 Share Posted September 22, 2002 This is why I don't do drugs. haha ..:lol: :lol: :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 22, 2002 Author Share Posted September 22, 2002 allrite, i hear it, ill stop posts and go just to blocks and learn letter forms, but im defenitly sticking to PH1 , it wont be phone, becuase itll have my ph1 signiture next to it, plus they will recognize how much better his style is, thats if i even ever go bombing, . For you that are experienced, i recently stole a caligraphy book, you think that is the best place to start learning basic letter forms? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRone Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 are you going for a deteriorated look or are you a crackhead? try making your shit a bit straighter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 .. i dont even want to reply....... but dont worrie we all start some were:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 Originally posted by stract allrite, i hear it, ill stop posts and go just to blocks and learn letter forms, but im defenitly sticking to PH1 , it wont be phone, becuase itll have my ph1 signiture next to it, plus they will recognize how much better his style is, thats if i even ever go bombing, . For you that are experienced, i recently stole a caligraphy book, you think that is the best place to start learning basic letter forms? yes, very good way to learn the cali type style with the thin tops, fat verticle and even fatter diagonal (sp? fuck it you know what i mean) lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dremster Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 see what confuses me is, you come on 120z, see pictures of real writers doing real graff, and other dudes drawing and what not, and some how it seems like a good idea to you to post yours? i'm not saying your the only one whom does it, but look for yourself, you need work. then come on here and show people. otherwise your just gonna get dissed. get yourself at a comfortable level then post...it should be a rule in the sketch section...i'm so sick of seeing toy ass shit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest schick1 Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 i cant believe you started a thread for 2 letters, id say the letters are ok they need work but the colors are ugly try to pick pretty colors and blend or fade or buble or whatever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
intak Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 Originally posted by stract you ask why do it?, its a rather simple question to answer, to recieve feed back of any kind. wether it be good or bad, its feed back. is it that hard to see? i see and respect all the good stuff on this site, thats how i know the feedback will be good, ive always thought my shit was wack and couldnt grasp letter formation, but everyone around me was impressed and liked my shit alot, even a few writters that write.... but i knew it was lagging alot so i decided to post one or two on here to see how harsh you could be so i can change it up for the good. How old are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimmy james Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 ok heres what you do go to your local pawn shop purchase a gun go to an ammunition store or an old war veteran buy one bullet that's all you need take it from there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 23, 2002 Author Share Posted September 23, 2002 hey schick1, what part of the letters need work other then the colors?, i will work on colors/fills at another time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sancho panza Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 you shouldnt worry about color yet, just keep working on your letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 23, 2002 Author Share Posted September 23, 2002 Originally posted by dremster see what confuses me is, you come on 120z, see pictures of real writers doing real graff, and other dudes drawing and what not, and some how it seems like a good idea to you to post yours? i'm not saying your the only one whom does it, but look for yourself, you need work. then come on here and show people. otherwise your just gonna get dissed. get yourself at a comfortable level then post...it should be a rule in the sketch section...i'm so sick of seeing toy ass shit.. well, as i see it, i have already answered your question. like i told you, people around me said my shit was dope,( ive done alot of other peices) but i know i was lagging on style, and the only way i figured how i can see what i am doing wrong( which is alot, i know), i figured that i would have to be dissed by people who really know. and who else better then you harsh ass bitchy fuckers, cuase you know thats who you are, and so do i. thats why i knew i could find out exaclty wat to do to get a little more insite on to wat writting is really about, thanx all you people for acttaully dissin my stuff, its helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 23, 2002 Author Share Posted September 23, 2002 Originally posted by sancho panza you shouldnt worry about color yet, just keep working on your letters. im not worried about the colors if you read, i said ' other then the colors' , i just wanna know about my letters, what specificlly needs to be worked on, ie: thickness on the sides/diagnoals,top, should it be skinnier in an area instead of where it is skinny, shold the points be different, should there be more roundess or circlness, ....that kind of stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimmy james Posted September 23, 2002 Share Posted September 23, 2002 the letters are VERY sketchy, and boring, to boot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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