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Phone again .oOoo.

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by stract, Sep 14, 2002.

  1. stract

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    Phone again .oOoo.

    Discussion started by stract - Sep 14, 2002

    my bad about last time, the whole thing didnt get off to a good start, but here is wat i wanted to post?



    ..... openly critize, constructive only, i only want stuff that will help





    im mostly intrested in critizim about my bottom peice, i know that top one is wack[​IMG]
     
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    stract - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    http://fototime.com/ftweb/bin/ft.dll/detail?ndx=0&slideshow=0&AlbumId={ABCFB95A-D9B5-4A6A-AE64-E7FDBC08C782}&GroupId=&screenheight=600'>



    i dont want to do it with a link, ... wats the way around?
     
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  3. Whoa1

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    Whoa1 - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    The first link worked, the second one said your account has expired.
     
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  4. stract

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    stract - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    wat specifily displeased you in the bottom style?


    any help with posting with no link?
     
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  5. Ran_dumbs

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    First of all, they are both wack. Yeah it's a piece, a piece of trash. Hopefully that helps:crazy:
     
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    stract - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    wat else, was it the colors? the shading? the formation? the simplness? the spacing? the curves? the layout?......
     
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    fuckedupafro - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    that is kinda whacky

    um.. basically, its a load of shit. i mean, if you have no arms, legs or head, then i'd give you props for your effort, but otherwise.. keep practicing on your style (or lack thereof) cuz when i saw that piece, my cat frowned. thats all i have to say:rolleyes:
     
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  8. tears*uno

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    tears*uno - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    atleast your starting out simple..... keep trying with even simpler STRAIGHT letters, and dont waste your time coloring them. simples over and over and over.
     
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    Ran_dumbs - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    ...

    Me personally I think that the letters and the shading suck, but that's just me, oh yeah and lose that big white bubble in the middle, it looks stupid.
     
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    WALE!pd - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    Re: ...

    yes dont try and do a "fill" other than a solid color because you obviously arent grasping that part. straight letters i mean like a fuckin font straight as fuck, pretend your doing the outline of a roller on your paper cause that curvy tweaked out crap isnt gonna fly pal
     
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    toyeattoywar - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    yeah, listen to wale. play around with that basic letter shit. the simpilar the better. go to the training ground and get an understanding of whats called "bar letters", then add small amounts of style to them slowly but stick with the basics. what you have now is pretty basic but it seems you arent working from any kind of basis of letter structure.
     
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    shitonastick - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    ahhaha....man,for real...that shit sucks...i normally play nice and all,but foo,that shit look like some junky tag....damn foo',throw that shit away,and ur needles...and start ova....

    Good Luck next time tough....
     
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    eseLokE1uno - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    dude your still joking right?
     
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    C.O.P.S - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    i think 1st of).......change ur name.......2nd)....start over.......3rd)ummmmmmm there is no third just repeat 1&2.......
     
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    stract - Replied Sep 14, 2002

    does considering it was a qucik ten minute throw up make any differnce?.. i know it doesnt, but i do have a cleaner style when i take time.
     
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