stract Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 my bad about last time, the whole thing didnt get off to a good start, but here is wat i wanted to post? ..... openly critize, constructive only, i only want stuff that will help im mostly intrested in critizim about my bottom peice, i know that top one is wackhttp://fototime.com/ftweb/bin/ft.dll/standard?pictid={01364D5C-0E80-40A1-8871-B59034E9BB7A}'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 14, 2002 Author Share Posted September 14, 2002 http://fototime.com/ftweb/bin/ft.dll/detail?ndx=0&slideshow=0&AlbumId={ABCFB95A-D9B5-4A6A-AE64-E7FDBC08C782}&GroupId=&screenheight=600'> i dont want to do it with a link, ... wats the way around? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whoa1 Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 The first link worked, the second one said your account has expired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 14, 2002 Author Share Posted September 14, 2002 wat specifily displeased you in the bottom style? any help with posting with no link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ran_dumbs Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 Originally posted by stract im mostly intrested in critizim about my bottom peice, i know that top one is wack First of all, they are both wack. Yeah it's a piece, a piece of trash. Hopefully that helps:crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 14, 2002 Author Share Posted September 14, 2002 wat else, was it the colors? the shading? the formation? the simplness? the spacing? the curves? the layout?...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuckedupafro Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 that is kinda whacky um.. basically, its a load of shit. i mean, if you have no arms, legs or head, then i'd give you props for your effort, but otherwise.. keep practicing on your style (or lack thereof) cuz when i saw that piece, my cat frowned. thats all i have to say:rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 atleast your starting out simple..... keep trying with even simpler STRAIGHT letters, and dont waste your time coloring them. simples over and over and over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ran_dumbs Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 ... Me personally I think that the letters and the shading suck, but that's just me, oh yeah and lose that big white bubble in the middle, it looks stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 Re: ... Originally posted by Ran_dumbs Me personally I think that the letters and the shading suck, but that's just me, oh yeah and lose that big white bubble in the middle, it looks stupid. yes dont try and do a "fill" other than a solid color because you obviously arent grasping that part. straight letters i mean like a fuckin font straight as fuck, pretend your doing the outline of a roller on your paper cause that curvy tweaked out crap isnt gonna fly pal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toyeattoywar Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 yeah, listen to wale. play around with that basic letter shit. the simpilar the better. go to the training ground and get an understanding of whats called "bar letters", then add small amounts of style to them slowly but stick with the basics. what you have now is pretty basic but it seems you arent working from any kind of basis of letter structure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shitonastick Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 um.. basically, its a load of shit. i mean, if you have no arms, legs or head, then i'd give you props for your effort, but otherwise.. ahhaha....man,for real...that shit sucks...i normally play nice and all,but foo,that shit look like some junky tag....damn foo',throw that shit away,and ur needles...and start ova.... Good Luck next time tough.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eseLokE1uno Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 dude your still joking right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 14, 2002 Share Posted September 14, 2002 i think 1st of).......change ur name.......2nd)....start over.......3rd)ummmmmmm there is no third just repeat 1&2....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 15, 2002 Author Share Posted September 15, 2002 does considering it was a qucik ten minute throw up make any differnce?.. i know it doesnt, but i do have a cleaner style when i take time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 hahahah dont try to make it sound like your even the least bit good... because your not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 15, 2002 Author Share Posted September 15, 2002 i am no ttrying that at all, i have a long ways to go, i know, i am not stupid.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Graffiti Doc Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 TRY HARDER Do a nice big block buster with simple letters...don't put color in your shit, stick to black and white, practice, practice, practice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuckedupafro Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 work on your letters, cuz these ones blow. my dog just walked by and passed out cuz your shit was on the screen. just try basing your 'style' on an established writer, like persue or cantwo or bates or punker or someshit, so that you get an idea of whut good stuff is supposed to look like. dont try and be too original, and dont directly bite any other writers. and change your goddam tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 Originally posted by stract does considering it was a qucik ten minute throw up make any differnce?.. i know it doesnt, but i do have a cleaner style when i take time. haha man go look in the 10 minute throwdown thread, it would take me MAX 10 seconds to burn that sucka 10 minutes is a long time to kill some shit man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 15, 2002 Author Share Posted September 15, 2002 allrite, allrite... ill go practice some more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 http://www.geobop.com/Education/911/images/mine/bush/coke.jpg'> http://www.nothingbutfreights.com/pics/phone.jpg'> http://www.nothingbutfreights.com/pics/phone2.jpg'> http://a1.cpimg.com/image/BD/8A/12670141-0e25-02000156-.jpg'> http://www.meyor.com/graff/22.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid31/pbcd4dbc0835359f149057a9e9f76bb2d/fd46222c.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GOTone Posted September 15, 2002 Share Posted September 15, 2002 ....damn.... .....looks like you gotta change your name or go to battle for it....... as well as practice up....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 16, 2002 Author Share Posted September 16, 2002 i know i am not in a postion to talk crap, i am not doing this by this post, but i persoanlly think pics 2 and 4 arent very good and the color scheme on number 1 isnt great either, i like the 3rd picture alot though. ive seen alot better on this site then wat this guy is hitting up, and i know with some practice, pateince and a few bowls, i will be able to claim this name. no dick riding though, my name is P H 1 , spelt out it is P H ONE, P H stands for pot head, cuase thats wat people call me, i dont jock peoples style, and if after a few months or so, i cant hang with the style, ill be sure to change and let that guy get the respect he deserves, but as of now... i am gearing up to compete. i just have motivation now to really practice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 16, 2002 Author Share Posted September 16, 2002 after a few months or so, if* i cant...... spelling error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted September 16, 2002 Share Posted September 16, 2002 Originally posted by stract i know i am not in a postion to talk crap, i am not doing this by this post, but i persoanlly think pics 2 and 4 arent very good and the color scheme on number 1 isnt great either, i like the 3rd picture alot though. ive seen alot better on this site then wat this guy is hitting up, and i know with some practice, pateince and a few bowls, i will be able to claim this name. no dick riding though, my name is P H 1 , spelt out it is P H ONE, P H stands for pot head, cuase thats wat people call me, i dont jock peoples style, and if after a few months or so, i cant hang with the style, ill be sure to change and let that guy get the respect he deserves, but as of now... i am gearing up to compete. i just have motivation now to really practice you are fuckin stupid you are in no position to judge this other cats stuff his hand burns that crap you posted , and wether you write PHone or PHONE doesnt matter it all comes out looking like phone so i reccomend quitting or changing your name and taking my earlier advice. props to bling for posting the real deal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stract Posted September 17, 2002 Author Share Posted September 17, 2002 you do not have to be able to write good to be able to recognize good peices, i mean come on, ( 2nd peice) pink, red , yellow , blue and white color scheme with arrows and dots all over, not to mention 5 holes in the O, that is not a quality peice rite there. i am fond of the 3rd one however, and the 1st...those ones are good....but seriously, that guy isnt a king, so i am not tripping over writting wat i chose, talk your shit all you want...it doesnt matter, that guy isnt bad at all, dont get me wrong, but he isnt the greatest. he is far better then me, i give him that...but skill comes with time and soon enough i will battle for my name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty_habiT Posted September 17, 2002 Share Posted September 17, 2002 That other phone rapes you stract. Look at his hand style, need I say more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 17, 2002 Share Posted September 17, 2002 Originally posted by stract after a few months or so, if* i cant...... spelling error hey Dumfuk........there is an edit buton rite next 2 teh reply buton...... what a dumbass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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