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Phone again .oOoo.

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by stract, Sep 14, 2002.

  1. stract

    stract New Jack

    Joined: Aug 14, 2002 Messages: 38 Likes Received: 0
    my bad about last time, the whole thing didnt get off to a good start, but here is wat i wanted to post?



    ..... openly critize, constructive only, i only want stuff that will help





    im mostly intrested in critizim about my bottom peice, i know that top one is wack[​IMG]
     
  2. stract

    stract New Jack

    Joined: Aug 14, 2002 Messages: 38 Likes Received: 0
    http://fototime.com/ftweb/bin/ft.dll/detail?ndx=0&slideshow=0&AlbumId={ABCFB95A-D9B5-4A6A-AE64-E7FDBC08C782}&GroupId=&screenheight=600'>



    i dont want to do it with a link, ... wats the way around?
     
  3. Whoa1

    Whoa1 Member

    Joined: Aug 22, 2002 Messages: 292 Likes Received: 0
    The first link worked, the second one said your account has expired.
     
  4. stract

    stract New Jack

    Joined: Aug 14, 2002 Messages: 38 Likes Received: 0
    wat specifily displeased you in the bottom style?


    any help with posting with no link?
     
  5. Ran_dumbs

    Ran_dumbs Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 5, 2002 Messages: 108 Likes Received: 0
    First of all, they are both wack. Yeah it's a piece, a piece of trash. Hopefully that helps:crazy:
     
  6. stract

    stract New Jack

    Joined: Aug 14, 2002 Messages: 38 Likes Received: 0
    wat else, was it the colors? the shading? the formation? the simplness? the spacing? the curves? the layout?......
     
  7. fuckedupafro

    fuckedupafro Member

    Joined: Aug 17, 2002 Messages: 436 Likes Received: 0
    that is kinda whacky

    um.. basically, its a load of shit. i mean, if you have no arms, legs or head, then i'd give you props for your effort, but otherwise.. keep practicing on your style (or lack thereof) cuz when i saw that piece, my cat frowned. thats all i have to say:rolleyes:
     
  8. tears*uno

    tears*uno Guest

    atleast your starting out simple..... keep trying with even simpler STRAIGHT letters, and dont waste your time coloring them. simples over and over and over.
     
  9. Ran_dumbs

    Ran_dumbs Junior Member

    Joined: Aug 5, 2002 Messages: 108 Likes Received: 0
    ...

    Me personally I think that the letters and the shading suck, but that's just me, oh yeah and lose that big white bubble in the middle, it looks stupid.
     
  10. WALE!pd

    WALE!pd 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Jun 7, 2002 Messages: 12,040 Likes Received: 364
    Re: ...

    yes dont try and do a "fill" other than a solid color because you obviously arent grasping that part. straight letters i mean like a fuckin font straight as fuck, pretend your doing the outline of a roller on your paper cause that curvy tweaked out crap isnt gonna fly pal
     
  11. toyeattoywar

    toyeattoywar Member

    Joined: Jul 3, 2002 Messages: 829 Likes Received: 1
    yeah, listen to wale. play around with that basic letter shit. the simpilar the better. go to the training ground and get an understanding of whats called "bar letters", then add small amounts of style to them slowly but stick with the basics. what you have now is pretty basic but it seems you arent working from any kind of basis of letter structure.
     
  12. shitonastick

    shitonastick New Jack

    Joined: Jun 15, 2002 Messages: 94 Likes Received: 0
    ahhaha....man,for real...that shit sucks...i normally play nice and all,but foo,that shit look like some junky tag....damn foo',throw that shit away,and ur needles...and start ova....

    Good Luck next time tough....
     
  13. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 1,280 Likes Received: 0
    dude your still joking right?
     
  14. C.O.P.S

    C.O.P.S Guest

    i think 1st of).......change ur name.......2nd)....start over.......3rd)ummmmmmm there is no third just repeat 1&2.......
     
  15. stract

    stract New Jack

    Joined: Aug 14, 2002 Messages: 38 Likes Received: 0
    does considering it was a qucik ten minute throw up make any differnce?.. i know it doesnt, but i do have a cleaner style when i take time.
     
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