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pencil and graphpaper

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by bar101e, Apr 1, 2003.

  1. bar101e

    bar101e Guest

    ive been writing for about a year and a half, but only seriously for about a year. just looking for some consructive critisism, and yes,i do paint, and paint better than i sketch in my opinion, so im not really interested in comments about painting it, or coloring it, just looking for letter and form critisism, thanks alot.
    bare a.p.r.
  2. NOUM

    NOUM Elite Member

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  3. dork

    dork Member

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    ican't see your letters
  4. swiss cheese

    swiss cheese Senior Member

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    It looks good, but really hard to see. Try something besides Fotango perhaps. maybe www.imagestation.com
  5. Nomaq

    Nomaq Senior Member

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    i cant see it either...
  6. Joker

    Joker Dirty Dozen Crew

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    I've seen worse from people who have been writing for longer...
  7. EveryWhere

    EveryWhere Senior Member

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    I like it.

    its balanced
  8. Krook

    Krook Banned

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  9. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

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  10. krie

    krie Guest

    lil small, but u can still tell its burning..good work
  11. sensnsa

    sensnsa Member

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  12. toastone

    toastone Junior Member

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    I did my best at resizing this image and cleaning it up a bit because I wanted to see what looked like (my enlarged version is pretty shitty).


    from what I see that is tight, a larger image from you would be nice
  13. bar101e

    bar101e Guest

    cheers toast, sorry about the initial size, ive since inked it and cleaned it up a little bit, ill scan it in soon and resize it, along with some of my other stuff.
  14. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

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    you sir have dopeness floating in your brain.. post some more
  15. melty

    melty Senior Member

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