cheps Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 New outline, new name (ethos). http://cheps.homestead.com/files/EthosOutline1.jpg'> -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TresOne Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 not bad, getting there... but the little swirly things on the ends of the E and S could throw people for a loop... Drop those, and add some colour. just my $0.02 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KSDERBERS Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 toy :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 let me fit in with all the 12oz people and say............................"ur wack, quit graffiti u fuking toy, my eyes are burning ahhhhhh ahhhhhh ahhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" ps: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by cheps New outline, new name (ethos). http://cheps.homestead.com/files/EthosOutline1.jpg'> -A NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest THEdude Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by C.O.P.S let me fit in with all the 12oz people and say............................"ur wack, quit graffiti u fuking toy, my eyes are burning ahhhhhh ahhhhhh ahhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" ps: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Aren't you wack too motherfucker? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FourOneTwo Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by THEdude Aren't you wack too motherfucker? He was being sarcastic :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by THEdude Aren't you wack too, motherfucker? :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by THEdude Aren't you wack too motherfucker? :nut: WHAT A DUMBASS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 K dont listen to all this people saying your shits wack and you should quit,,, odviously if your new your shit is gonna be wack so lets all get over that,, besides i bet half of you suck almost as bad as he does anyways,,,and if not that you will alwayse suck compared to somone else,,,, I think your sketch is wack but im not gonna tell you that every time you post something,,, what i will say is you have improved,,, you have taken in somones advice somwhere along the line because your letters have the same thickness so thats good,, my advice is that you still gotta slow down the pace a little,,, you are putting loops everywhere and they just dont look attractive.. sketch that again but heres what you should do the second time around. 1.get rid of those big loops infront and behind of your piece, 2. get rid of all that shit above and below your letters. (that S is a little too much) 3. your letters are sloppy looking. do them again and keep them straight and clean.. 4. just keep the same line width everywhere! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest C.O.P.S Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 ^^^man how come i never got this kind of advice...:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MISTA POOKY Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Originally posted by THEdude Aren't you wack too motherfucker? HAHAHHAHAHAHA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serpent of the light Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 umm, you use way too much flair. and you suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poof! Posted September 24, 2002 Share Posted September 24, 2002 Yeah, the swirl on the e and the three swirls on the s dont really flow, and the last one is just kinda sticking out, not connected. Simple can be good... Keep practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted September 25, 2002 Author Share Posted September 25, 2002 page of scribbles .... Herez the page, you should recognize the top one. I did these two today .... http://cheps.homestead.com/files/EthosScribble1.jpg'> -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wilt Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 cheps...do i know you?if you are who i think you are..please email me..i have to get some info from you...stuff isn't looking bad..and tears...nah forget it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~i~hear~voices~ Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 the second and third on that page are pertty coo...:nut: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SayOne Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 shit aint bad :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 definately alot better then ur other shit..ur improving alot...just get rid of that shit b4 and after ....other then that not bad..peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DorkstaR Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 man that stuff really shows a big improvement on your part. the second and third one are nice. the first one's biggest problem is that the "s" is being thrown around like spaghetti....fix it. it really does need to be the same size/thickness all the way through the letter. but for all of them i suggest losing that line that is sticking out of the bottom of the "s" altogether. that simple in the middle would be real nice if it didnt look like a penis was pokin' out at the end. lose a little bit of the detail loops and swirls at the beginning and end of the pieces....well you dont really have to lose them, but i would recommend not making it stand out so much. they really do seem to overpower your letters. just tryin to help. laters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 ... ok yes you are getting better but................... YOUR HAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH please work on that too:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted September 25, 2002 Author Share Posted September 25, 2002 Yea, im workin on that hand, lol. Im fuckin around with some different styles with the new name and shit, but imma work on it. :lol: -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TresOne Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 Yeah, the second one is way better. Nice and simple, more appealing to look at. Good work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TECKTNACREW Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 TECKROK WELL IT LOOKS LIKE YOUR IMPROVING TRY WORKING ON YOUR TAG AND YOUR STRAIGHT LETTERS, REMEMBER THAT FOUNDATION IS THE KEY.. TEK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FameWhore Posted September 25, 2002 Share Posted September 25, 2002 Re: page of scribbles .... Originally posted by cheps Herez the page, you should recognize the top one. I did these two today .... http://cheps.homestead.com/files/EthosScribble1.jpg'> -A thats some pretty sweet shit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRone Posted September 26, 2002 Share Posted September 26, 2002 Originally posted by FROSTY K dont listen to all this people saying your shits wack and you should quit,,, odviously if your new your shit is gonna be wack so lets all get over that,, besides i bet half of you suck almost as bad as he does anyways,,,and if not that you will alwayse suck compared to somone else,,,, I think your sketch is wack but im not gonna tell you that every time you post something,,, what i will say is you have improved,,, you have taken in somones advice somwhere along the line because your letters have the same thickness so thats good,, my advice is that you still gotta slow down the pace a little,,, you are putting loops everywhere and they just dont look attractive.. sketch that again but heres what you should do the second time around. 1.get rid of those big loops infront and behind of your piece, 2. get rid of all that shit above and below your letters. (that S is a little too much) 3. your letters are sloppy looking. do them again and keep them straight and clean.. 4. just keep the same line width everywhere! Yeah listen to this kid, fuck the haters. You have defeinetly improved a lot since the last shit i saw from you. I want everyone to post their first five sketches and then see if they can still talk shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yoink Posted September 26, 2002 Share Posted September 26, 2002 well thank god theres a kid here improving like whoah...take everyones advice, im glad to see theres progress esp. in the last two on your whole page...you allready heard about the first one..but keep on keeping on........and for gods sake man take all the past advice about your hand...thats THE only frusterating thing!!!!!! (it aint changing worth a damn.......;) ) keep at it......some more two cents to add to the piggy bank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted September 26, 2002 Share Posted September 26, 2002 KEEP IT MEAT ND TATERS cheps your the kid who posts every sigle damn thing that youve ever done on here right?...RIGHT.. from the page of like 15 terrible hands......to you "bomb" on some board in suburbia....to every drawing youve ever done... unplug the computer...learn letter quality...basic letter quality that you can actually paint... and come back with real flix... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimmy james Posted September 26, 2002 Share Posted September 26, 2002 let me tell you this, and its my opinion. lose that goddamn face. it sucks. a lot. the middle one is nice, though. it's real good. lose the face and you've got it made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted September 26, 2002 Author Share Posted September 26, 2002 I wasnt really using the face to enhance my sketches, im just fucking around with some characters ..... -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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