MarzOne Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 right ive started writing tome. have been writing it about 3 weeks now. and i want soem input if u please. i few sketches i got. are u feeling? incase your wondering TOME means old dusty book of wisdom. hope taht helps you with some of the themes and shit stay up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarzOne Posted October 25, 2004 Author Share Posted October 25, 2004 this is heavily inspired by totem. lol. u can prob see the parts i bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 im feeling most of them...nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ERNEST2 Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 all dat is dope but i m havin trouble postin up ma graffiti so if someone can help me i satrted the thread graffiti sketches from texas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reXone Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 I'm liking it... I never had much success finishing with an "E"... seems like your style got that down, kudos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JUSTONE Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 yup; it's sick. good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeakSauce Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 #1 get off totem's jock #2 your hand looks like jome #3 change your name to tome8-0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Kids Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 yeah tooo much totem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gates Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 the second photoshopped one is nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 fuck all you who say get off totems jock, get all up on that jock kid, looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Kids Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 looks like he spends a little to much time on totems website, stealing his machine look, and damn i know they both do t's and o's but it looks like he just copy and pasted some of that guys 2d, the orange and red one is the worst totem bite, yes bite! sorry enter, but you have to admit it, if you can't make you own shit, don't make it at all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flayed God X Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 dont do wildstyles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarzOne Posted October 26, 2004 Author Share Posted October 26, 2004 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarzOne Posted October 26, 2004 Author Share Posted October 26, 2004 well im not gonan sya i dont admire totems work cuz i do. but the only think tahst similar in my 3D is the shards which i will admit i bit. but every1 does shards. my style is not like totem at all. and i dotn do a machien look, i try do a digi feel.and thanx enter. means alot. angry kid sorry u taken such a dislikin to my work. but i aint gonan stop i dont no u, and your oppinion doesnt really affect how i work. but tahnx for the replys every1 good and bad.. stay up UK represent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herbivore Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 who the fuck cares what his shit looks similar to? it's dope, and that's all that matters......... the third one (the digital one) is real nice.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 fuck them nice post im feelin them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icetray Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 No, im not feeling em.. I'm not gonna sit here like some other peeps and give you some bullshit credit that you don't even deserve... Yeah, you did good alright... ..biting some other writers styles... but all I really have to say is that you should just start with straight letters.. and get into your own creativity.. and try being more original... and for everyone elses sake and yours.... quit bitin'... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 loving the old dusty tome keep it up bruv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 i like it... : \ maybe its cuz ive never seen totems shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 Originally posted by earo 35@Oct 26 2004, 08:01 PM i like it... : \ maybe its cuz ive never seen totems shit. Quoted post Who the fuck is Totem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarzOne Posted October 26, 2004 Author Share Posted October 26, 2004 Originally posted by icetray@Oct 26 2004, 06:04 PM No, im not feeling em.. I'm not gonna sit here like some other peeps and give you some bullshit credit that you don't even deserve... Yeah, you did good alright... ..biting some other writers styles... but all I really have to say is that you should just start with straight letters.. and get into your own creativity.. and try being more original... and for everyone elses sake and yours.... quit bitin'... Quoted post icetray man. it obvious i dotn need to do fuckin starit letters. i dotn fuckin bite. i say when i look at some1s work for inspiration but u na go on totems site or any1 elses and if u see one of my pieces taht resembles theres in the leat ill shut up. but it iant gonan happen cuz i dotn bite. thanx to every1 who has shown love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOReSeVeNTeN Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 yes kid you do bite it is obvious by your handstyle as anyone knows HANDSTYLES BOMBS PIECES are equally important Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarzOne Posted October 27, 2004 Author Share Posted October 27, 2004 Originally posted by LOReSeVeNTeN@Oct 26 2004, 11:59 PM yes kid you do bite it is obvious by your handstyle as anyone knows HANDSTYLES BOMBS PIECES are equally important Quoted post wtf man. i bomb i piece and i tag im soryr i have a wack handstee i always have had i been writing bout 2 and a half years now... so dont tell em the importance of shit. man i bene around and i no whats up with this shit. and no i dont bite and no its not obvious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 27, 2004 Share Posted October 27, 2004 For someone who has been writing the name for three weeks it looks good to me... just dont bite Totem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icetray Posted October 27, 2004 Share Posted October 27, 2004 icetray man. it obvious i dotn need to do fuckin starit letters. i dotn fuckin bite. i say when i look at some1s work for inspiration but u na go on totems site or any1 elses and if u see one of my pieces taht resembles theres in the leat ill shut up. but it iant gonan happen cuz i dotn bite. thanx to every1 who has shown love. Quoted post im sorry to break it to you or burst your bubble... your shit DOES look like Totem2's. and maybe it isn't obvious to you that you need to do straight letters.. but it is obvious to me and a lot of heads here that you do need to get more creative and original... than using totems original shit he worked so hard to come up with... and a good start is by doing your own straight letters.. i know what im saying.. don't front like i dont.. cuz i do.. you wanted input.. im giving some.. but im not gonna give you love for someone elses shit... give me a fuckin break and take time to listen to my advice... peace edit: and by the way.. you DO need to work on your handstyles.... thats the first element in graff.. the tag.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 Totem2? I don't see any similarities besides that "exploding crystals" looking thing. And biting. This has already been discussed time and time again. Let's establish something here... Everyone bit when they first started out. No shit. You could've bit one or two letters, or even something small like an arrow. A bite is a bite, no matter how small or big it is. And as time goes on, that same person uses what he bit and develops it into something of his own... hopefully. Anyways, Tome... Am I feeling your shit? No. Is it original? No, of course not. Point is, keep on practicing buddy. And it'll definetly pay off in a couple of years. Your work is fairly simple and you should keep it that way. Also, work on your handstyle and throw ups. Mess around with your letters once you have a better understanding of them. It could take months, could take years. Who knows. peace edit*** okay, maybe I didn't look at your work long enough. Pracitice on simples. I know you might think shit is boring but it's key to success. Lay off them extensions in the mean time. Or, keep extensions to a minimum y'know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icetray Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 word up Yellow Feets.. work your handstyle a lot.. you'll get better understanding on letters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flayed God X Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 Work on simples you need it. Post some if you got em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Kids Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 buttplug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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