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New writer seeking advice..

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by youngslygunna, Nov 8, 2013.

  1. youngslygunna

    youngslygunna New Jack

    Joined: Nov 8, 2013 Messages: 2 Likes Received: 0

    Been writing for a couple months now mostly stick to hands and throws but recently started practicing pieces, not really sure what I need to work on so suggestions are appreciated
  2. Inappropriate_Responder

    Inappropriate_Responder Moderator Crew

    Joined: Jul 13, 2010 Messages: 11,193 Likes Received: 894
    Everything Looks prufect
    Would look better in the paperchase sub-forum
  3. theprotester

    theprotester Moderator Crew

    Joined: Dec 8, 2006 Messages: 10,991 Likes Received: 906
    Keep it in paper chase, yo. If you want crits I would suggest the toy thread.

  4. youngslygunna

    youngslygunna New Jack

    Joined: Nov 8, 2013 Messages: 2 Likes Received: 0
    Word thanks man still a bit new to the site a homie recommended it to me :p
  5. SuperSaying.

    SuperSaying. New Jack

    Joined: Nov 27, 2013 Messages: 3 Likes Received: 0
    The first one is really dope. The whole polka dot color scheme & shit. Keep it up
  6. Mr.Maker

    Mr.Maker Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 11, 2006 Messages: 5,224 Likes Received: 96
    Look man, I'm going to give you the secret to rap letters. It took me many years to learn this one lesson in life...

    Needs moar arrows.
  7. slo075

    slo075 New Jack

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