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New Sketch, please critque (yea, this one actually works)

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by cheps, Jul 1, 2002.

  1. cheps

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    New Sketch, please critque (yea, this one actually works)

    Discussion started by cheps - Jul 1, 2002

    Here is another basic sketch I threw down today. Please give me some specific pointers on whut needs to be improved. Thanks. ;)

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    :huh?:

    -A
     
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  2. el nervo

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    el nervo - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    it looks okey except that s at the end is off. but for all it is worth keep it practicing
     
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  3. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    Aight, thanks for the input, whut about the s needs improving? Just let me know whut needs to be changed.

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  4. el nervo

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    el nervo - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    well for starters you have to equal out the bars and dont put the ending bar under the p unless you do it with another letter hope that helps a little
     
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  5. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    Yea, that helps, thanks. :dazed:

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    meone - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    make sure your lines are straight. use a ruler if you have to until you get your hand steady enought to break away from it. other than that and wut others have said good start
     
  7. tears*uno

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    tears*uno - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    new colors, the s could use some work, and the lines are sloppy
     
  8. imported_El Mamerro - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    Those diagonal lines on the 3D have to be drawn at the same angle to work. True perspective would have the angles slightly diverging, but for now, keep the angles constant.

    Nice call on the white highlights. Don't forget that the bottom of the holes on the 'e' and the 'p' are also upper edges and should have a highlight line as well.

    I actually don't mind the 's' at all. Good job. Beer,

    El Mamerro
     
  9. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    ^Thanks, thats good input. Ill work on that. :dazed:

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    ~DeNtOnE~ - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    try summ'n new

    hey hard to tell if your good or not.. post more non block leters! ya sss needs werk!
     
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  11. High Priest

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    High Priest - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    Work on your hand style, I realize and can respect that your probably comftrable with your tag looking like that.. but if it came down to me not getting up on a spot because that was there id go right over it... not to mention i dont think it would go over real well here.

    Other wise the peice could use a little touch up work but its nice over all ... planning on using brushes or rollers or what?
     
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    TEE_rase_war - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    not quite a full zing zing.....maybe half a zing???
     
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  13. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    Yea, when I get the extra money to buy some new supplies, im broke right now. :(

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    DETO - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    work on the hand steez. but decent for just startin' off.
     
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    DorkstaR - Replied Jul 1, 2002

    no matter how hard i try to like that "s"....i just cant seem to do it. but the rest of it is good for a roller. i say you just do a regular block "s" and leave the gap at the bottom between the "s" and "p" alone.
     
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