eros Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 http://www.ehomebook.com/users/eddy13/images/lime2.jpg'> http://www.ehomebook.com/users/eddy13/images/lime.jpg'> http://www.ehomebook.com/users/eddy13/images/egg1.jpg'> http://www.ehomebook.com/users/eddy13/images/egg2.jpg'> some new stuff from me... I would love to get some helpful advice. thanks for looking, ARES one...stealing candy from babies (now that is T-U-F-F-!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i like em, but i think your sacrificing letters, for the sake of being 'cool.' in the long run, its not a good way to go, trust me. also, i would work on your lines. they're not bad, but if you cant pull off a long straight clean line, i wouldnt really try. not that im trying to be all negative or anything, i like em, but me saying i like em doesnt much help you now does it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest THE LAW Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 D-ARES? consider your card pulled...it's not in the stack anymore. THE LAW took it out and put it in his bicycle spokes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by seeking innocence i like em, but i think your sacrificing letters, for the sake of being 'cool.' in the long run, its not a good way to go, trust me. also, i would work on your lines. they're not bad, but if you cant pull off a long straight clean line, i wouldnt really try. not that im trying to be all negative or anything, i like em, but me saying i like em doesnt much help you now does it? I am not sure what you mean by the first comment, but I would like to know. I agree with you on my line work, and I am assuming that when you say long straight lines you are refering to the wavyness of the extensions, correct? if so, I agree. That is definately a key fault. Thanks for giving advice... it is appreciated, and you are right that just saying "I like it" isn't very helpful. Thanks again. If you have any more advice, it won't fall on deaf ears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumb hot Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 not feeling it.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by THE LAW D-ARES? consider your card pulled...it's not in the stack anymore. THE LAW took it out and put it in his bicycle spokes. you lost me, please explain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 look at the first piece. thats an A? looks kind of like a fortune cookie or a cartoon ear or something. whatever it is, it certainly isnt an A. same thing goes for the R and E. the S isnt bad. on the second piece the letters are a bit better, but still, it looks like you were trying to make a cool shape instead of cool letters that make up a cool shape. make sense? i say all this coming from experience... i did that shit for a long time, then finally someone pointed out the error of my ways and ive been in appreciation ever since... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 seeking: now I understand what you're saying, it makes since... although I still like the 'r' in the first piece. Point taken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smeoo Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i like the coloUrs in the first one especially, and as you know your lines needs more work, but i don't have a problem with your letters being “cool” (i'm guessing Ansiq is referring to the whole abstract hoo-ha) cos you seem to understand letter structure pretty well so i guess your at the point where you can push them in whatever direction you wanna go...but..the lines...work the liiiiines... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smeoo Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by seeking innocence look at the first piece. thats an A? looks kind of like a fortune cookie or a cartoon ear or something. whatever it is, it certainly isnt an A. ..don't listen to this man, tweak those letters til they scream for mercy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ammo Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 fuck you guys, i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 thanks for the compliment smeoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 tweaking is one thing, but how was that thing ever an A? and im not hating at all, just trying to offer the criticism i was given... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by Ammo fuck you guys, i like it thanks, but all of their comments were helpful... except for that dumbhot kid (he didn't explain himself). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr. frink one Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 are those the same two, or same ONE wall? cause i remember some older posts you made (by the way your stuff looks really nice and clean and has improved) but i remember kids asking about it then, so I am asking about it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by seeking innocence tweaking is one thing, but how was that thing ever an A? and im not hating at all, just trying to offer the criticism i was given... http://www.yourphotos.com/users/3105/11pin.jpg'> Here is the initial 'A' that the "fortune cookie 'A'" was built off of... in case it clears things up. Like I said before, the kind of criticism that you are giving me is what will make me a better writer. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smeoo Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 yea thats what i saw... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 seeking: my aim is samsoup7, IM me if you want... I have a feeling I could learn alot from talking to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanity Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 the e in the 2nd one is cool... try some fades or cuts on the 3d.. looks flat. and i'm not much of a fan of rolling.. makes it looke less 'graffiti' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i doubt it, im not very smart... i can see it better now. and after looking at the first A again, i kind of like it, but i just think it could be stronger if it was a little more well defined... but thats just me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 seeking:I think that if the cross bar on the 'A' didn't go above the top of the 'A' like it does, then it would be much stronger. agree? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dow Jonez Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 kind of generic looking..........trying hard to be "weird" but ending up as conformed as a punk rocker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gnes 37 Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i like it keep up the good work its different all i gotta say it try to get the wings extending bothside of the piece more straighter other than that keep envolving :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eros Posted October 23, 2001 Author Share Posted October 23, 2001 Originally posted by Gnes 37 i like it keep up the good work its different all i gotta say it try to get the wings extending bothside of the piece more straighter other than that keep envolving :P thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ob1 Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 I see the A in the first one, and I see how it's an A. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCEBERG Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 those first joints were hot, im feelin those, just clean your shit up, i like your style. and thats all that is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DOS2HS Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 strange but unique .. definately easy to identify the writer by. :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bevis Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i like the 2nd one, you got nice colors, you using buf for fill? your name is very similar to some other people's.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest serpent of the light Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 i was told the whole purpose of 12 oz is to come here and say "dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope" to everyone's pics so i make friends. ha ha ha ha yeah, i dig on em. your character should have some fat tunnels or plugs in his ears. xxx303 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandalsBeer Posted October 23, 2001 Share Posted October 23, 2001 mad cool piece i like the letters quite alot and the character is dope ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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