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some new stuff from me... I would love to get some helpful advice.

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i like em, but i think your sacrificing letters, for the sake of being 'cool.' in the long run, its not a good way to go, trust me.

also, i would work on your lines. they're not bad, but if you cant pull off a long straight clean line, i wouldnt really try.

 

not that im trying to be all negative or anything, i like em, but me saying i like em doesnt much help you now does it?

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Originally posted by seeking innocence

i like em, but i think your sacrificing letters, for the sake of being 'cool.' in the long run, its not a good way to go, trust me.

also, i would work on your lines. they're not bad, but if you cant pull off a long straight clean line, i wouldnt really try.

 

not that im trying to be all negative or anything, i like em, but me saying i like em doesnt much help you now does it?

 

I am not sure what you mean by the first comment, but I would like to know. I agree with you on my line work, and I am assuming that when you say long straight lines you are refering to the wavyness of the extensions, correct? if so, I agree. That is definately a key fault. Thanks for giving advice... it is appreciated, and you are right that just saying "I like it" isn't very helpful. Thanks again. If you have any more advice, it won't fall on deaf ears.

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look at the first piece. thats an A? looks kind of like a fortune cookie or a cartoon ear or something. whatever it is, it certainly isnt an A. same thing goes for the R and E. the S isnt bad. on the second piece the letters are a bit better, but still, it looks like you were trying to make a cool shape instead of cool letters that make up a cool shape. make sense? i say all this coming from experience... i did that shit for a long time, then finally someone pointed out the error of my ways and ive been in appreciation ever since...

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i like the coloUrs in the first one especially, and as you know your lines needs more work, but i don't have a problem with your letters being “cool” (i'm guessing Ansiq is referring to the whole abstract hoo-ha) cos you seem to understand letter structure pretty well so i guess your at the point where you can push them in whatever direction you wanna go...but..the lines...work the liiiiines...

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Originally posted by seeking innocence

look at the first piece. thats an A? looks kind of like a fortune cookie or a cartoon ear or something. whatever it is, it certainly isnt an A.

 

..don't listen to this man, tweak those letters til they scream for mercy...

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Originally posted by seeking innocence

tweaking is one thing, but how was that thing ever an A?

 

and im not hating at all, just trying to offer the criticism i was given...

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Here is the initial 'A' that the "fortune cookie 'A'" was built off of... in case it clears things up. Like I said before, the kind of criticism that you are giving me is what will make me a better writer. thanks.

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i was told the whole purpose of 12 oz is to come here and say "dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope" to everyone's pics so i make friends. ha ha ha ha

yeah, i dig on em. your character should have some fat tunnels or plugs in his ears.

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