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New Outline ....

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by cheps, Jul 2, 2002.

  1. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    Here is a more complex outline I did the other day. No color since most of you are shitting on my fills. Ill add color later, but for now, here is the outline.

    http://cheps.homestead.com/files/ChepsJaggedOutline.jpg'>

    Drop some suggestions as usual. :huh?:

    -A
     
  2. THEdude

    THEdude Guest

  3. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    ^Look again. :eek:

    -A
     
  4. THEdude

    THEdude Guest

    It's all about letter structure cheps.

    for real work on simples. once you get the letter structure, you can start messing with pieces.
     
  5. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    I dont think it looks too bad, but yea, i see your point. :lol:

    -A
     
  6. JoeHatesCops

    JoeHatesCops Guest

    work on your handstyle cause tis wack
    your S looks like an E the style doesnt work, practice practice practice
     
  7. ozeriesER

    ozeriesER New Jack

    Joined: Jun 9, 2002 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    go back to more simple styles

    your letters are out of proportion and your 3D is wrong, all the lines must go in the same direction, unless youre doing the curved look, which you arent
    Make it more fluent, stop and look at various points while drawing and concentrate on keeping the letters very roughly the same size

    Try and make your handstyle flow rather than doing each letter separately
     
  8. DOLR....LED

    DOLR....LED Member

    Joined: Jul 2, 2002 Messages: 675 Likes Received: 1
    whooza!!! horrible ill say what everyone else is saying to you work on simples...give it time dont bediscouraged every one has to start somewhere...but not on pieces
     
  9. MrMajicMarkker

    MrMajicMarkker New Jack

    Joined: Jul 20, 2001 Messages: 27 Likes Received: 0
    just know that you are not that good, i see you giving advice in other threads...work on your hand, its just fucking gross
     
  10. tears*uno

    tears*uno Guest

    exactly..

    that sucks horribly man...keep it way way way wayway way way simple, because that shit is ugly... and dont start a new fuckin thread everytime you doodle something on a paper; put it in your old one or something
     
  11. BdMiK

    BdMiK Guest

    as everyone else already said, work on more simple styles. And your 3D is way off. Peace
     
  12. test pattern

    test pattern Elite Member

    Joined: Jan 21, 2002 Messages: 3,975 Likes Received: 0
    Loose the jagged spikey stuff.




    Smoothness is key.
     
  13. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    Well, some of you were tellin me to do a more complex one, so I did and threw it down, I know it isnt great.

    -A
     
  14. DorkstaR

    DorkstaR Senior Member

    Joined: May 24, 2002 Messages: 1,404 Likes Received: 0
    there you go again....

    same as last time.....you are wrapping the bottom of the "s" around the "p" just to cover up that empty spot. it swings backward too much....also...try not to go for a wildstyle technique(arrows and blocks going everywhere) and focus on keeping it readable....kinda hard to tell whats what when there are letters of diff. sizes and things running everywhich way from the letters.
     
  15. NoEZ

    NoEZ New Jack

    Joined: Dec 25, 2001 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 0
    i dont remember anyone saying anything about you going complex....what i remmeber is them saying to keep doing simples and when you get it down move onto more complex shit......your gonna need to do simples for a long time i can kinda tell.....it might sound boring but would you rather get ebtter faster by starting simple....or trying to go all complex and never learning the basics...i made that mistake and then i tryed simples and it worked for me ......your 3d is way off......i dont know how 3d is hard....its the easiest thing in a piece..well i think.....just do straight down 3d until you get......every line...straight down........

    and i figured a way to get somewhat of a letter form is......think about how many bars there are in each letter....now just draw those bars in the letter for a while.....dont add anything axtra until you can do em straight as hell ok......or just ignore what i said and do what you want.....im out...bye
     
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