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New Outline ....

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by cheps, Jul 2, 2002.

  1. cheps

    cheps 12oz Member

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    New Outline ....

    Discussion started by cheps - Jul 2, 2002

    Here is a more complex outline I did the other day. No color since most of you are shitting on my fills. Ill add color later, but for now, here is the outline.

    http://cheps.homestead.com/files/ChepsJaggedOutline.jpg'>

    Drop some suggestions as usual. :huh?:

    -A
     
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    THEdude - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    [ X ]
     
  3. cheps

    cheps 12oz Member

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    cheps - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    ^Look again. :eek:

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  4. THEdude

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    THEdude - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    It's all about letter structure cheps.

    for real work on simples. once you get the letter structure, you can start messing with pieces.
     
  5. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    I dont think it looks too bad, but yea, i see your point. :lol:

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  6. JoeHatesCops

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    JoeHatesCops - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    work on your handstyle cause tis wack
    your S looks like an E the style doesnt work, practice practice practice
     
  7. ozeriesER

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    ozeriesER - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    go back to more simple styles

    your letters are out of proportion and your 3D is wrong, all the lines must go in the same direction, unless youre doing the curved look, which you arent
    Make it more fluent, stop and look at various points while drawing and concentrate on keeping the letters very roughly the same size

    Try and make your handstyle flow rather than doing each letter separately
     
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    DOLR....LED - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    whooza!!! horrible ill say what everyone else is saying to you work on simples...give it time dont bediscouraged every one has to start somewhere...but not on pieces
     
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    MrMajicMarkker - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    just know that you are not that good, i see you giving advice in other threads...work on your hand, its just fucking gross
     
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  10. tears*uno

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    tears*uno - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    exactly..

    that sucks horribly man...keep it way way way wayway way way simple, because that shit is ugly... and dont start a new fuckin thread everytime you doodle something on a paper; put it in your old one or something
     
  11. BdMiK

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    BdMiK - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    as everyone else already said, work on more simple styles. And your 3D is way off. Peace
     
  12. test pattern

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    test pattern - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    Loose the jagged spikey stuff.




    Smoothness is key.
     
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  13. cheps

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    cheps - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    Well, some of you were tellin me to do a more complex one, so I did and threw it down, I know it isnt great.

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    DorkstaR - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    there you go again....

    same as last time.....you are wrapping the bottom of the "s" around the "p" just to cover up that empty spot. it swings backward too much....also...try not to go for a wildstyle technique(arrows and blocks going everywhere) and focus on keeping it readable....kinda hard to tell whats what when there are letters of diff. sizes and things running everywhich way from the letters.
     
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    NoEZ - Replied Jul 2, 2002

    i dont remember anyone saying anything about you going complex....what i remmeber is them saying to keep doing simples and when you get it down move onto more complex shit......your gonna need to do simples for a long time i can kinda tell.....it might sound boring but would you rather get ebtter faster by starting simple....or trying to go all complex and never learning the basics...i made that mistake and then i tryed simples and it worked for me ......your 3d is way off......i dont know how 3d is hard....its the easiest thing in a piece..well i think.....just do straight down 3d until you get......every line...straight down........

    and i figured a way to get somewhat of a letter form is......think about how many bars there are in each letter....now just draw those bars in the letter for a while.....dont add anything axtra until you can do em straight as hell ok......or just ignore what i said and do what you want.....im out...bye
     
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