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Need some pointers..

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by TresOne, Jun 23, 2003.

  1. TresOne

    TresOne Member

    Joined: May 23, 2002 Messages: 447 Likes Received: 2
    Trying to keep it simple.. and tips/pointers are appreciated.

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    I know i tried to overshoot my skill level on a few of those, but whatever.

    :eek:
     
  2. Neskoner

    Neskoner New Jack

    Joined: Jan 6, 2003 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 1
    All i see is X's,sorry..
     
  3. StockFresh©

    StockFresh© Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2003 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 0
    i see it all fine (MaKeItHaPpEn, u retard) and it all looks fucking phat to me, the handstyle is definately fresh. keep it up.
     
  4. dork

    dork Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 399 Likes Received: 0
    yeup, nice hands
     
  5. dork

    dork Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 399 Likes Received: 0
    yeup, nice hands
     
  6. xwibxonex

    xwibxonex New Jack

    Joined: Feb 18, 2002 Messages: 3 Likes Received: 1
    this upsets the shit out of me, your fine, you're on the right track with most of those, you understand what your'e doing wrong, and you'll take time to fix it in the long run, why can't the real toys be as smart as the ones who aren't quite sure of there work.
     
  7. Neskoner

    Neskoner New Jack

    Joined: Jan 6, 2003 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 1
    I see them now you little buster....And they are quite fresh,i dont see much wrong,they do need a slight bit of work,but not bad at all!!!:)
     
  8. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
  9. mogilny

    mogilny Senior Member

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  10. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    i dig that shit.

    here is critique:
    on your S in that 8th one the bar gets kinda thin and you cant see the R very well, i do that shit a bit too.. but just something to look out for.. the style looks like most the bars are the same width, you should keep it consistant unless you have a style where some of your bars get thinner and thicker than others.

    but post more i like it
     
  11. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

    Joined: May 6, 2002 Messages: 1,072 Likes Received: 0
    good good

    well you seem to be on the right track.. work with letter forms some more like clean it up some .. and your hand is nice but dont be scared to make more crasy good job tho keep it up
     
  12. hyrax

    hyrax Member

    Joined: Jun 24, 2002 Messages: 486 Likes Received: 0
    bump for SARS!
     
  13. nightagger

    nightagger Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 17, 2003 Messages: 130 Likes Received: 0
    I liked those a lot...and i dont think you tried to overshoot your skill level at all...the 3d work on all of them are tight... :stretch:
     
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