suburbanevol Posted June 26, 2003 Share Posted June 26, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000002.jpg'> lookin for some feedback. i know the d is smaller an shit. first time i tried to do this type of structure. lemme know what u think and what i should change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted June 26, 2003 Share Posted June 26, 2003 stick with one style, some letters have curves (D, E) some you made have no curves. your 3d is horible, pick a vanishing point on the paper that every 3d line will lead to. put your E forward dammit. stay simpler than that, if posible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbanevol Posted June 26, 2003 Author Share Posted June 26, 2003 haha thanks man i appreciate it. yah my 3d is a bit :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrabble Posted June 26, 2003 Share Posted June 26, 2003 come on now, you know you didnt put any effort into that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted June 26, 2003 Share Posted June 26, 2003 damnit, ic ant see it and i want to give feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 Join your letters fix the E it looks like a puzzle piece Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Clean Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 Originally posted by TerraRyzeR Join your letters fix the E it looks like a puzzle piece Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 i can honestly say that i think this is the first post where someone put up something that was not as good (sorry) as everyone elses and he actually got feedback congrats on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 Originally posted by EveryWhere hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice. WTF r u talkin about u do the samething:rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bufme1 Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 that name is taken already, .........and its hurting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dork Posted June 28, 2003 Share Posted June 28, 2003 you should quit...that is garbage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuzo Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 Originally posted by EveryWhere hey mr. clean, if your just gonna quote someone, dont bother posting, i dont like having to read over the same shit twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 yeah.. you need to do something about those letters, my shit looked like that about 4 years ago.. i stopped drawing for a while then started up again.. just think of the letters as bars.. http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/process.bmp'> all those letters have bars on them.. if you do letters like this you will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, create something better than what you posted. unless you cant draw bars very well but a 10 year old can even do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbanevol Posted June 29, 2003 Author Share Posted June 29, 2003 Originally posted by shor yeah.. you need to do something about those letters, my shit looked like that about 4 years ago.. i stopped drawing for a while then started up again.. just think of the letters as bars.. http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/process.bmp'> all those letters have bars on them.. if you do letters like this you will ALWAYS, ALWAYS, create something better than what you posted. unless you cant draw bars very well but a 10 year old can even do that. is this along the lines of bars? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000003.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EveryWhere Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 Originally posted by TerraRyzeR WTF r u talkin about u do the samething:rolleyes: do not, i always say something after when i quote. god i started an internet fight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 Originally posted by EveryWhere do not, i always say something after when i quote. god i started an internet fight... No not really:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caL Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 Originally posted by suburbanevol is this along the lines of bars? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000003.jpg'> so much better. keep at it. improvise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 yeah that is soooooo much better than the other one. just think about the basic letter structure. if it helps, keep those lines that go through the letters like on the dork picture i posted... but yeah lookin a lot better keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.VIRS Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 hit my up on aim xvirsonex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milton Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 That is a lot better, but try drawing all of each bar like the Dork thing shows, don't worry about overlapping, just do each bar as it's own entity. See how the tips of the straight bar on the D don't match up with the center? It's because you didn't draw that bar out by itself. And that handstyle thing is good but try starting with a simple font, TIMES NEW ROMAN perhaps... Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbanevol Posted June 29, 2003 Author Share Posted June 29, 2003 thanks for the help. i appreciate it. its alot more constructive then people just flaming me. that doesnt help much.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nekro Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 That second one is like 40x better than the first. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbanevol Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 ight this is another attempt, i'm thinkin its the best so far, but who am i to critique. anyhow this is off the brooklyn kid font and i did some other fonts. just to get a feel for this shit. i know my 3d'ish stuff sucks. so go easy on the flaming. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000005.jpg'> its a pretty rough sketch but u get the picture.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 not bad...not bad at all now fill that shit!.. the 3D has to many lines in it.. just do it where the bars kink, i guess.. at least for now until you get the hang of it. and make all the lines parallel, as well as parallel to the bar, and same width Edit: this is just something i did.. i know im not like or anything almost remotely close to dork.. but same thing, but with deko.. and i know the letters look weird in some spots more than others.. but just a quick example i did in a couple minutes.. http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/im003442.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suburbanevol Posted June 30, 2003 Author Share Posted June 30, 2003 another sketch http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00334015f00000006.jpg'> gonna add some color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenceOne Posted June 30, 2003 Share Posted June 30, 2003 :idea: see, when you actually give feedback and tell the kid whats wrong with his shit.... he improves. but when you dont tell him whats wrong you just say "that sucks quite writin" hes gonna keep writin like shit look how much you made him improve with giving him good tips:) compare his 1st flick to the one he just posted before mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimace Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 please stop the 3-D. If you want to practice 3-D, draw several defferent rectangles (four paralell sides with different lengths) with like bends, curves, or twists in them, shit like that, then add 3-D (either all going to a vanishing point or all the same length and paralell) to those and shade them with like a pen or a pencil or something. This should help you get your perspective down faster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£piK uNo Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 ^ his 3d aint that bad.... keep it up....i see madd potential... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Originally posted by £piK uNo ^ his 3d aint that bad.... keep it up....i see madd potential... yuh, for real, the o in the last one, the lines need to be litter fatter, but he's right, potential Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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