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my sketch 2

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by virus, Oct 21, 2002.

  1. virus

    virus Guest

    my sketch 2

    Discussion started by virus - Oct 21, 2002

    my sketch [​IMG]
     
  2. i'mlost

    i'mlost 12oz Member

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    i'mlost - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    if i was virus (aa) i'd piss on your face
     
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  3. virus

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    virus - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    damn you why cant u shut the fuck up i posted this just to get some help oh and never compare me to a writer that is writing for 15 years or whatever i aint virus and i m not biting him so fuck you
     
  4. Dare

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    Dare - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    hmmm, cant really leave any specific advice, you just need to practice, practice, practice. However, maybe u should try simpliar lettering structure for now, cos I think that is your downfall.
     
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  5. OsCaR306

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    OsCaR306 - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    im just curious about wut the graff scene is like in israel...cause of the ongoing war or whatever it is...
     
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    virus - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    there is'nt any that is what i m trying to start
     
  7. DorkstaR

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    DorkstaR - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    im not gonna criticize you about your name.... im tired of that crap. but the sketch has its share of flaws. you need to make sure everything is in porportion with everything else. some of your letters are fatter than others....some things are too elaborate....and some things are just crooked. marvin's head is a circle shape....your sketch of him looks like an oval to me. youre not gonna get props by using the name virus, but just practice more and maybe you'll come up with something nobody has seen before. maybe sumthin like that will get you more respect. keep posting nonetheless. laters.
     
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  8. virus

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    virus - Replied Oct 21, 2002

    I FIALY FOUND A NAME NO ONE HAS IT IS "ZARKA" BUT I STICK TO VIRUS IT IS MY CAPOEIRA NICK AND MY FRINDES CALL ME THAT CUZ I M ANOYING LIKE A VIRUS
     
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    virus - Replied Oct 22, 2002

    what's up whit u all u dont want to tell me opinions cuz of the nick?!
    well i m wating for coments
     
  10. Kettiecat

    Kettiecat 12oz Senior Member

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    Kettiecat - Replied Oct 22, 2002

    the shadow around your letters isn't right. You keep changing the angle on it.
     
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  11. TresOne

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    TresOne - Replied Oct 22, 2002

    -Straighten the letters out, to start off with.. it'll give it a little unity that way.
    -Lose the arrows and and plateaus on the 'v' and the 'r'
    -stick with simple letters, and practice like mad.
    -leave the characters out until the letter structure is better. Having characters doesn't necessarily make a peice.. it adds, but isn't be be-all and end-all of graffiti.. the letters and style are.
    -be original
    -practice
    -practice
    -practice
    -practice
    -etc...
    -keep posting
     
  12. virus

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    virus - Replied Oct 22, 2002

    these r sketches i got in my computer i got beter ones and simpler but my scanner is dameged so i need to fix it and ill post some more
    i like to poast but it sucks the second i put somthing here evreybody becomes aginst me cuz of the name.... i dont want to change it
     
  13. TresOne

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    TresOne - Replied Oct 22, 2002

    Everyone is going to be a little apprehensive about your chosen name, just as they would if i chose to write Zephyr or Dondi, etc..
    Keep the name if you want, but practice and work on your style.. if you come up with an original style, and a good one at that, then who knows, maybe the name won't matter as much...


    *edit*
    I'd bust up my own ass if i tried to write Zeph or Dondi.. :beat:
     
  14. virus

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    virus - Replied Oct 23, 2002

    jee thanx
     
  15. krie

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    krie - Replied Oct 23, 2002

    its better then the first one u posted..