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Ill start with the good things. Im sure the haters will say the bad things...

 

1. you got most of your 3d going to the same place. Thats a plus.

 

2. I see you tried to clean up a little bit...

Are you using Belton? Belton is nice.

 

I bet if you would of had a nice subburst yellow forcefield it would of looked better.

 

Umm.. Keep trying. And go simpler..

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i honestly dont mind the bullshit that the haters will say. if they decide to hate, can they honestly say that the first time they picked up a can, they were automatically amazing? if you were. then i apologize. but if not. then think twice about what you say. i dont care how good you are. everyone starts out bad.

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hey shoefers, what do you write? and what area are you in? cuz in the area im in, [toronto] we have an ASE too, im just wondering if thats you i see on the go line.

 

edit: oh and by the way, i TRIED PMING you, but it wouldnt work for some odd reason. I havent been on 12oz in a while too.

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It's alright for a first go, unlike most guys firsts you didn't try to do an out line then put a fill in that. Plus your construction lines looked krisp, now just get paint control down. I like the little fade youve put in there try and drag fades out for longer so theres like a merky part.

 

p.s Prone thats pretty cool for a first go like the style thats coming out.

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im feeling in a good mood since the xanex from yesterday so.

since this is your 1st attempts u should try and stick with the same color outline/ 3d. in your case i think u used black? im not sure im color blind.

 

once u lay out your fills u should do some background bubbles. then your outline+ 3d then a trim or force field or whatever u wanna call it.

and please for gods sake pratice your handstyles. if u cant do that then write in cursive till u get a good handstyle.

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Originally posted by Shoefers

my first "piece" Im on the left.

 

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/shoe1/first.jpg'>

 

:confused:

 

 

and by the look sof this, you havent got much better !!!

 

 

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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/shoe1/roller.jpg'>

 

dont try to give this dude advice when he's obviously better than you :eek:

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