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"My First Peice"

Discussion in 'Brick Slayers' started by staE, Jul 31, 2004.

  1. staE

    staE New Jack

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    "My First Peice"

    Discussion started by staE - Jul 31, 2004

    whatsup yall, this is my first peice. ehh, i know it aint much, but hey, its my first.If yall got pics of your first peice's, post em!
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v175/PR80F/mpose3.jpg'>
    [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v175/PR80F/mpose2.jpg'>
     
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  2. Shoefers

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    Aww man. Youre gonna wanna delete this. Everyones gonna make fun of you.. Although if its your first peice Ive seen worse...
     
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    headsh0tz - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    I'm pretty sure we all can relate when I say: "you got to start from somehwere"
     
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    Ill start with the good things. Im sure the haters will say the bad things...

    1. you got most of your 3d going to the same place. Thats a plus.

    2. I see you tried to clean up a little bit...
    Are you using Belton? Belton is nice.

    I bet if you would of had a nice subburst yellow forcefield it would of looked better.

    Umm.. Keep trying. And go simpler..
     
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    my first "piece" Im on the left.

    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/shoe1/first.jpg'>

    :confused:
     
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  6. staE

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    i honestly dont mind the bullshit that the haters will say. if they decide to hate, can they honestly say that the first time they picked up a can, they were automatically amazing? if you were. then i apologize. but if not. then think twice about what you say. i dont care how good you are. everyone starts out bad.
     
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  7. Shoefers

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    true dat.
     
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    Faaantastic.
     
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    staE - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    hey shoefers, what do you write? and what area are you in? cuz in the area im in, [toronto] we have an ASE too, im just wondering if thats you i see on the go line.

    edit: oh and by the way, i TRIED PMING you, but it wouldnt work for some odd reason. I havent been on 12oz in a while too.
     
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    Shoefers - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    Nope. Im from the Oakland, California area. But right now Im in Los Angeles..


    Theres an ase website

    www.haywardgraffiti.com

    I dont think I got much on there but its got a lot of work on it.


    EDIT: I write shoe but I used to write PRONE back in the day
     
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    CrazyLazy - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    Not too shabby for your first one.
     
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    deph - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    It's alright for a first go, unlike most guys firsts you didn't try to do an out line then put a fill in that. Plus your construction lines looked krisp, now just get paint control down. I like the little fade youve put in there try and drag fades out for longer so theres like a merky part.

    p.s Prone thats pretty cool for a first go like the style thats coming out.
     
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    killerqueen - Replied Jul 31, 2004

    work on your straight letters for a good 2-3 years & paint with stock tips. you can't get good without a decent foundation.
     
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