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Messin around with styles

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by Darkside, Jun 22, 2003.

  1. Darkside

    Darkside New Jack

    Joined: Jun 22, 2003 Messages: 19 Likes Received: 0
    Jus messin around with some different styles and was looking for some opinions

    http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/paradigm-thumb.jpg'>

    [img]http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/Sohl-thumb.jpg'> I did this one for a buddy of mine

    [img]http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/rank-thumb.jpg'>

    [img]http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/icwhead-thumb.jpg'>
     
  2. el_why_en_E

    el_why_en_E New Jack

    Joined: Jun 10, 2003 Messages: 99 Likes Received: 0
    im hoping that last one doesent say acw.............
     
  3. DorkstaR

    DorkstaR Senior Member

    Joined: May 24, 2002 Messages: 1,404 Likes Received: 0
    you got alot of work to do... try to work with a more simple technique. dont put so many arrows and uneeded bars on your letters. your m on the first flik looks like a tampon. dont connect your letters. make sure they are done well as simples. then you can move on to connecting them. the way you connected them in the 3rd flik is just horrid. make sure to take your time and work on the character. dont even think about 3d's bro... thats even out of my league. the only one i see potential on is the 2nd one. but keep workin at it... whatever you choose. just work with making it simple yet appealing. and by appealing i dont mean a bunch of arrows and shit. sorry if im bitchy... its all constructive criticism... imma nice guy. im just on the rag. laters.
     
  4. dork

    dork Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 399 Likes Received: 0
    yeup... go simple, plese
     
  5. xwibxonex

    xwibxonex New Jack

    Joined: Feb 18, 2002 Messages: 3 Likes Received: 1
    :lol: :lol: :lol:
    everything else you said was on point as well, i used to love giving nice criticism, you'd think people would read more and take the advice given to other people who suck as much as them, instead of showing off their books and wasting space. i too am in a bitchy mood, sorry.
     
  6. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
    do not mess around with those style. Go Simple
     
  7. StockFresh©

    StockFresh© Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2003 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 0

    simple, simple, simple, simple...
     
  8. mr_president

    mr_president Banned

    Joined: Nov 19, 2002 Messages: 5,691 Likes Received: 0
    http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/paradigm-thumb.jpg'>

    looks like a GREY bite...

    :lol:

    those who know... haha
     
  9. O Mei Shan

    O Mei Shan Member

    Joined: Jun 15, 2003 Messages: 293 Likes Received: 0
    ok while we are here and the critisism is being handed out...can someone help me out with this?

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  10. Vlad

    Vlad Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 9, 2002 Messages: 1,876 Likes Received: 0
    who mentioned style :confused:


    :lol:
     
  11. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
  12. O Mei Shan

    O Mei Shan Member

    Joined: Jun 15, 2003 Messages: 293 Likes Received: 0
    how cant you ? it says ks13. look i know i suck, im not looking for praise just help.
     
  13. Ckit

    Ckit Member

    Joined: Mar 10, 2003 Messages: 725 Likes Received: 1
    because they dont look like letters. go simple.
     
  14. Scrabble

    Scrabble Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2003 Messages: 735 Likes Received: 0
    :lol: at how cant you see the letters?

    i see 'em, but try making them look more like letters...maybe
     
  15. TuffKid

    TuffKid Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 14, 2002 Messages: 2,062 Likes Received: 0
    that second one looks like a Bite....here bite this.
     
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