MarzOne Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 back.. got better been bomibin excecavly... got better in my opinion.. want ya advice on this b4 i paint it.. prob go ahead and do it 2moro...plus need jelp on my throwey.. or perhaps some1 coudl donate a quicky??? tahnx -marz http://humansbeing.tv/marz/pics/outline.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 Fix the right bar of the A. It's overlapping itself. Same with the left bar of the R. And ... ehhh.. I think it's best if you find the mistakes yourself. People shouldn't be asking stuff like this. :o But yeah, the piece needs a final adjustment. (ie. The lines aren' that straight) Keep it up. peace! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 the A is very squeezed in there... like the whole of the A is very small and looks forced and squeezed, also the bar is overlappin as the guy said. if you moved it back it would open the whole of the, makin it look much nicer and it would make that overlapping go away.... also the top whole would get bigger too. The R is also a bit lower than the othe rletters and smaller, bit outta proportion but looks ok tho. a nd then theres lots of things here and there tht if i did the piece I'd adjust, but not gonna mention everything. For example the bottom right of the M where you connect it to the A is just off... I would fix that and make it neater and look better, and just stuff you should try to find yourself. It's better finding your won mistakes and fixing them then having someone else do it for you. Anywayz, hope some of my advice helps, if not oh well./... i did try lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ruffisjonzon Posted May 6, 2004 Share Posted May 6, 2004 my advice...quit writing marzhttp ://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=45613&perpage=40&pagenumber=16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marlboromild Posted May 6, 2004 Share Posted May 6, 2004 yea theres already a marz in va. marz 2 would look wierd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seg Posted May 6, 2004 Share Posted May 6, 2004 you guys freak me out with this continuous 'there's allready a guy with your alias' talk. is there anyone that goes by the name 'seg'? (i also write seg5 & segan). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my moment Posted May 29, 2004 Share Posted May 29, 2004 yea the letters look alright but i would definetly change your name. marz from va gets ill with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted May 30, 2004 Share Posted May 30, 2004 i like it.....:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEFCON2.0 Posted May 30, 2004 Share Posted May 30, 2004 it looks ok but you need ta keep workin on it....and oh yeah marz froms VA is sick so you may wanna look into other names.............:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted May 30, 2004 Share Posted May 30, 2004 show us some more flicks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted May 30, 2004 Share Posted May 30, 2004 bomibin excecavly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nozaki Posted May 30, 2004 Share Posted May 30, 2004 i don't like the name...every city that has a half decent graff scene has a kid that writes MARZ or LINE or CUBE or some shit...it's like a generic name...write ARMZ or something if you are attached to those letters. just my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marlboromild Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 Originally posted by nozaki i don't like the name...every city that has a half decent graff scene has a kid that writes MARZ or LINE or CUBE or some shit...it's like a generic name...write ARMZ or something if you are attached to those letters. just my opinion. hahahhaha. yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adderall Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 slaughtering the language Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timemachine Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 i cant see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earo 35 Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 Originally posted by earo 35 show us some more flicks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EViLPRiCK Posted June 1, 2004 Share Posted June 1, 2004 ..jumping on the marz va bandwagon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InDY_500 Posted June 1, 2004 Share Posted June 1, 2004 I like the work sir....Maybe you could try to paint it first and then ask for an opinion......All in all thats alot better and about the throwie.....Basically just try to make it balanced.......Then come back in here after your proud of it and ask for opinions sir...........Keep it goin though, nice work......bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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