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Marz - What say you

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by MarzOne, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. MarzOne

    MarzOne Junior Member

    Joined: Feb 19, 2003 Messages: 224 Likes Received: 0
    back.. got better been bomibin excecavly... got better in my opinion.. want ya advice on this b4 i paint it.. prob go ahead and do it 2moro...plus need jelp on my throwey.. or perhaps some1 coudl donate a quicky???

    tahnx

    -marz

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  2. Yellow Feets

    Yellow Feets Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 10, 2004 Messages: 1,958 Likes Received: 0
    Fix the right bar of the A. It's overlapping itself. Same with the left bar of the R. And ... ehhh.. I think it's best if you find the mistakes yourself. People shouldn't be asking stuff like this. :eek: But yeah, the piece needs a final adjustment. (ie. The lines aren' that straight) Keep it up.

    peace!
     
  3. JayFo

    JayFo Member

    Joined: Jan 1, 2003 Messages: 530 Likes Received: 0
    the A is very squeezed in there... like the whole of the A is very small and looks forced and squeezed, also the bar is overlappin as the guy said. if you moved it back it would open the whole of the, makin it look much nicer and it would make that overlapping go away.... also the top whole would get bigger too. The R is also a bit lower than the othe rletters and smaller, bit outta proportion but looks ok tho. a

    nd then theres lots of things here and there tht if i did the piece I'd adjust, but not gonna mention everything. For example the bottom right of the M where you connect it to the A is just off... I would fix that and make it neater and look better, and just stuff you should try to find yourself. It's better finding your won mistakes and fixing them then having someone else do it for you.

    Anywayz, hope some of my advice helps, if not oh well./... i did try lol.
     
  4. ruffisjonzon

    ruffisjonzon New Jack

    Joined: Nov 21, 2003 Messages: 34 Likes Received: 0
    my advice...quit writing marzhttp ://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=45613&perpage=40&pagenumber=16
     
  5. marlboromild

    marlboromild Member

    Joined: Feb 3, 2004 Messages: 312 Likes Received: 0
    yea theres already a marz in va. marz 2 would look wierd.
     
  6. seg

    seg New Jack

    Joined: Apr 28, 2004 Messages: 50 Likes Received: 0
    you guys freak me out with this continuous 'there's allready a guy with your alias' talk. is there anyone that goes by the name 'seg'? (i also write seg5 & segan).
     
  7. my moment

    my moment Member

    Joined: Apr 23, 2002 Messages: 378 Likes Received: 0
    yea the letters look alright but i would definetly change your name. marz from va gets ill with it
     
  8. earo 35

    earo 35 Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 18, 2004 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 1
  9. DEFCON2.0

    DEFCON2.0 Member

    Joined: Feb 27, 2002 Messages: 297 Likes Received: 1
    it looks ok but you need ta keep workin on it....and oh yeah marz froms VA is sick so you may wanna look into other names.............:king:
     
  10. earo 35

    earo 35 Senior Member

    Joined: Jan 18, 2004 Messages: 1,045 Likes Received: 1
    show us some more flicks!!
     
  11. GnomeToys

    GnomeToys Elite Member

    Joined: Jun 24, 2003 Messages: 2,616 Likes Received: 4
  12. nozaki

    nozaki Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 23, 2003 Messages: 1,323 Likes Received: 0
    i don't like the name...every city that has a half decent graff scene has a kid that writes MARZ or LINE or CUBE or some shit...it's like a generic name...write ARMZ or something if you are attached to those letters. just my opinion.
     
  13. marlboromild

    marlboromild Member

    Joined: Feb 3, 2004 Messages: 312 Likes Received: 0
    hahahhaha. yes.
     
  14. adderall

    adderall Elite Member

    Joined: Jun 10, 2003 Messages: 2,921 Likes Received: 1
    slaughtering the language
     
  15. timemachine

    timemachine Banned

    Joined: Mar 21, 2004 Messages: 773 Likes Received: 0
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