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Marz - What say you

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by MarzOne, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. MarzOne

    MarzOne 12oz Junior Member

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    Marz - What say you

    Discussion started by MarzOne - Apr 17, 2004

    back.. got better been bomibin excecavly... got better in my opinion.. want ya advice on this b4 i paint it.. prob go ahead and do it 2moro...plus need jelp on my throwey.. or perhaps some1 coudl donate a quicky???

    tahnx

    -marz

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  2. Yellow Feets

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    Yellow Feets - Replied Apr 17, 2004

    Fix the right bar of the A. It's overlapping itself. Same with the left bar of the R. And ... ehhh.. I think it's best if you find the mistakes yourself. People shouldn't be asking stuff like this. :eek: But yeah, the piece needs a final adjustment. (ie. The lines aren' that straight) Keep it up.

    peace!
     
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  3. JayFo

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    JayFo - Replied Apr 17, 2004

    the A is very squeezed in there... like the whole of the A is very small and looks forced and squeezed, also the bar is overlappin as the guy said. if you moved it back it would open the whole of the, makin it look much nicer and it would make that overlapping go away.... also the top whole would get bigger too. The R is also a bit lower than the othe rletters and smaller, bit outta proportion but looks ok tho. a

    nd then theres lots of things here and there tht if i did the piece I'd adjust, but not gonna mention everything. For example the bottom right of the M where you connect it to the A is just off... I would fix that and make it neater and look better, and just stuff you should try to find yourself. It's better finding your won mistakes and fixing them then having someone else do it for you.

    Anywayz, hope some of my advice helps, if not oh well./... i did try lol.
     
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  4. ruffisjonzon

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    ruffisjonzon - Replied May 6, 2004

    my advice...quit writing marzhttp ://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=45613&perpage=40&pagenumber=16
     
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  5. marlboromild

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    marlboromild - Replied May 6, 2004

    yea theres already a marz in va. marz 2 would look wierd.
     
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  6. seg

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    seg - Replied May 6, 2004

    you guys freak me out with this continuous 'there's allready a guy with your alias' talk. is there anyone that goes by the name 'seg'? (i also write seg5 & segan).
     
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  7. my moment

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    my moment - Replied May 29, 2004

    yea the letters look alright but i would definetly change your name. marz from va gets ill with it
     
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  8. earo 35

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    earo 35 - Replied May 29, 2004

    i like it.....:eek:
     
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  9. DEFCON2.0

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    DEFCON2.0 - Replied May 30, 2004

    it looks ok but you need ta keep workin on it....and oh yeah marz froms VA is sick so you may wanna look into other names.............:king:
     
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  10. earo 35

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    earo 35 - Replied May 30, 2004

    show us some more flicks!!
     
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  11. GnomeToys

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    GnomeToys - Replied May 30, 2004

    bomibin excecavly
     
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  12. nozaki

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    nozaki - Replied May 30, 2004

    i don't like the name...every city that has a half decent graff scene has a kid that writes MARZ or LINE or CUBE or some shit...it's like a generic name...write ARMZ or something if you are attached to those letters. just my opinion.
     
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    marlboromild - Replied May 31, 2004

    hahahhaha. yes.
     
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    adderall - Replied May 31, 2004

    slaughtering the language
     
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    timemachine - Replied May 31, 2004

    i cant see it
     
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