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Let me have it...

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by Opus, May 12, 2003.

  1. Opus

    Opus New Jack

    Joined: Oct 31, 2001 Messages: 15 Likes Received: 0
    I want some feedback, this is a very simple sketch. I don't want to hear anybody whinging about the word, cause thats not what i write, just let me know what you think of the actual sketch.



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  2. anonymity1

    anonymity1 Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 28, 2003 Messages: 1,945 Likes Received: 0
    why are the lines overlapping. That idea is not working for this.
     
  3. Daze One Million

    Daze One Million Elite Member

    Joined: Jun 12, 2001 Messages: 3,804 Likes Received: 0
    if you get rid of the overlapping lines itd be straight for a begining writer...but is the first letter a "b" or a "D" if its a b i sugest getting rid of that little nich at the top of the "b"'s curve, if its a "D" i suggest you get rid of both niches and make one intersecting through the top curve of the "D" and the verticle line of it my 2cents
     
  4. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 1,280 Likes Received: 0
    just dont get more complicated than that and youll do fine
     
  5. maekr

    maekr Member

    Joined: Feb 25, 2003 Messages: 439 Likes Received: 0
    Make sure you finish drawing in all the 3D, like on the bottom of the "D" and the bottom of the "L."
     
  6. Methodz

    Methodz Member

    Joined: Mar 29, 2003 Messages: 333 Likes Received: 0
    I actually like it...Remove the overlapping, finish off the 3D and make that "D" look less like a "b" and it's fine.
     
  7. NOUM

    NOUM Elite Member

    Joined: Mar 17, 2003 Messages: 3,966 Likes Received: 0
     
  8. TheTruthHrtz

    TheTruthHrtz Junior Member

    Joined: Mar 30, 2003 Messages: 149 Likes Received: 0
    good letter structure for a beginner
     
  9. AORAone

    AORAone Veteran Member

    Joined: Feb 7, 2003 Messages: 6,460 Likes Received: 32
  10. TerraRyzeR

    TerraRyzeR Banned

    Joined: Feb 10, 2003 Messages: 1,656 Likes Received: 0
  11. awkward eye

    awkward eye Veteran Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 6,795 Likes Received: 159
    there is no need for overlapping lines..
     
  12. NOUM

    NOUM Elite Member

    Joined: Mar 17, 2003 Messages: 3,966 Likes Received: 0
    if he keeps those over lapping lines maybe it will give the piece more flavor..keep it..you might turn some heads with what you come up with...
     
  13. awkward eye

    awkward eye Veteran Member

    Joined: Sep 25, 2002 Messages: 6,795 Likes Received: 159
    well,thats your opinion..mine would be-erase the overlapping lines and the 3d and just leave it 2d and put an outline around it...that 3d doesnt work with those letters at all...and the key is you said "MAYBE" it would give it more flavor, but i seriously doubt that.
     
  14. some pittsburgh flavor

    some pittsburgh flavor Elite Member

    Joined: Mar 31, 2001 Messages: 4,936 Likes Received: 0
    it reminds me of a joker freight i saw. it was pink and yellow? with a red outline?
     
  15. yoink

    yoink Elite Member

    Joined: May 27, 2002 Messages: 3,428 Likes Received: 0
    my two cents...

    the overlaps would serve better if they were consistent and ghost lines, not fully overlapped (to make the letters connect still but give the appearance of letter flow), IE left to right, or right to left not all three letters overlaping eachother...get it? EXAMPLE:The D overlaps the E then the E overlaps the L
     
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