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Jyse

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by JayFo, Mar 8, 2004.

  1. JayFo

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    Jyse

    Discussion started by JayFo - Mar 8, 2004

    Well my other Jyse thread was filled with my older crap and I just felt like having only newer stuff in here and gettin criticism on it. So that's why I'm makin a new thread....

    http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid104/p62486307275830954305f89c7174bc18/f99939b1.jpg'>

    I'll have more stuff soon but gotta scan.

    Any criticism is fine... just wanna see where I'm at with shit...
     
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  2. phone

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    phone - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    Nice work..cool style..keep it up
     
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  3. why write?

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    why write? - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    dope work...i like your style
     
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  4. drunken fool

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    drunken fool - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    im not feelin it
     
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  5. JayFo

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    JayFo - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    thanks to phone and why write and thats cool drunken, watcha not feelin tho? And to anyone else who likes it... what ya like or feelin?

    I dunno it just is good to know why someone does like somethin or doesn't so i can get an idea where I'm at and what to maybe work on or continue doin the same. Ya know..??
     
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  6. why write?

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    why write? - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    i like the letter style...
     
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  7. Propaganda

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    Propaganda - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    Hmm. Hard to say really dude. From looks off the letters, you are higher experience than I am so noit much to say. I like the flow and style. Something about the extras and add ons tho. Some flow nice, some look afraid to flow. Almost like they are stiff. The thing I Think I see with your work is that all letters you do are straight edge. Ever thought about curves and bump flows. It gives the letter sometimes something fantastic to look at. Sorry if I couldn't help much.
     
  8. JayFo

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    JayFo - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    I get you man... I dunno ever since I started I've done a pretty good amount of stuff with straight letters, especially cuz I dunno I based everythin off just bars. Now I'm curvin some lines and stuff here and there as you can see... but the overall thing i do is straight edges i guess.

    I do want to do mroe than one style or whatever so as i progress more I'm gonna work on just straight up curvy flowing letters rather than the straighter ones and see what i come up with.
     
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    micro - Replied Mar 8, 2004

    all i see is a red X :(
     
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  10. JayFo

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    JayFo - Replied Mar 27, 2004

    same style and letters are way similar but no extra shit on this... any opinions criticism whatever is fine....

    [​IMG]
     
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    StarzAbove - Replied Mar 27, 2004

    Nice n simple
     
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  12. drunken fool

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    drunken fool - Replied Mar 27, 2004

    i just think the add ons are wack.. but overall it looks like you have nice letter structure.. just work on the add ons.. make them go somewheres
     
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  14. KuiK

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    KuiK - Replied Mar 28, 2004

    im feelin it jyse...not so much the "E" cuz too many ppl bite off that look...rest is the shite though!
    DOPE!
     
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    KuiK - Replied Mar 28, 2004

    looks like my style..well almost.
     
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