Dylanh Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 Hey Im needing some feedback on my work.Please help me out and give me tips and idea to improove my writing. thanks http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/HY/GSELHSNJVEWL.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/HY/...SELHSNJVEWL.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffie Crave Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 thats good man, keep it simple, then slowly work your way up, lets see some color on it now, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylanh Posted October 5, 2003 Author Share Posted October 5, 2003 its colored well I just finished the coloring http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/HS/GSELKQAYUHDE.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/HS/...SELKQAYUHDE.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 THATS PRETTY GOOD MAN.......I DONT REALLY LIKE THE "Z" THO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.VIRS Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 if you drop one L you will have shit going better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bodice_ripper Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 Don't write skillz. Don't. Even if you like it, or have been writing it for some time, don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:wizo:cdc:. Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 its pretty cool, i like it mostly because the fact of how simple it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 it looks good, if you take the econd L out it'd look way better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deph Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 thats groovy dude liking it the charcter had me smiling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylanh Posted October 5, 2003 Author Share Posted October 5, 2003 heres another heres something I just did. the only thing I really like is the CH. any comments? http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/KQ/GSERGRBUXWKM.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/KQ/...SERGRBUXWKM.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrSeusLives Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 1) Don't connect the "C" and the "H" like that. 2) That thing in the "A" makes it looks strange. 3) That "L" is deadly. Don't make it that long. 4) Fix that "K". "K's" are sot of tough... Just keep practing it. 5) What do you write? 6) If you haven't chosen what you want to write yet... practice ALL the alphabets and choose what you think is best. Also, be aware that most names are taken. Most writers have 4 letters. .. 7) Be sure to practice your letters, your handstyle, and your throwups. The first thing you should paint is a throwup. 8) Who cares about color, well, for now. Just keep on doing outlines and sooner or later you'll find that flow. Your letters don't flow that much. It's tooo [adjective here]. 9) Oh yeah, I forgot characters... I didn't feel like writing a paragraph so I did a list... Anyways, just keep practicing. From a toy to a toy. peace! AMEK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikro137 Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 drano tastes good , you should try drinking some after you look in the mirror before elementary school tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted October 5, 2003 Share Posted October 5, 2003 Originally posted by mikro137 drano tastes good , you should try drinking some after you look in the mirror before elementary school tomorrow oh, and ive heard that long rusty nails submerged in draino adds alot of flavour to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**REDRUMS** Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 Originally posted by mr.VIRS if you drop one L you will have shit going better you can't talk you got people to draw your shit out for you you know nothing nothing at all sucker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 umm cant say im really feelin it, ur first sketch is definately better then ur second one..ur letters on ur first are decent, its good that ur startin simple..i know double L's are hard..fuck i used to mess aorund with writin llama, so i could figurea way to use double l's..but ya keep it up..where u from?..in BC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylanh Posted October 6, 2003 Author Share Posted October 6, 2003 thanks hey thanks for the feedback I'm working on some sketches right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 hey ask yourself what does a letter REALLY look like.. then draw it. FUCK, im sick of these little dependant BOTCHAEDEADSFSDG;JKSH/////... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylanh Posted October 6, 2003 Author Share Posted October 6, 2003 some new stuff just finished these outlines http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/GSE8OSKMJBMN.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/...SE8OSKMJBMN.JPG http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/GSE8OQKEPWDG.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/...SE8OQKEPWDG.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toad_AAA Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 Originally posted by **REDRUMS** you can't talk you got people to draw your shit out for you you know nothing nothing at all sucker HEY YO i dont think he gets n e one to do his sketches for him virs sketches are virs sketches i wouldnt talk soo much shit either cause so far frm what ive seen YOU HAVENT POSTED SHIT SO STOP TALKING IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 dylan, those arent really workin, but right off i see that it would look better with all those silly arrows gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikro137 Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 Re: some new stuff Originally posted by Dylanh just finished these outlines http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/GSE8OSKMJBMN.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/...SE8OSKMJBMN.JPG http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/GSE8OQKEPWDG.JPG'> http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HR/NS/...SE8OQKEPWDG.JPG more homosexual than a phi8l collins concert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destruction by Definition Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 haha phil collins... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikro137 Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 DbD you are awsome , we should hang out in illadelph sometime , get at me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peter N0rth Posted October 7, 2003 Share Posted October 7, 2003 UMMMMMMMM.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted October 8, 2003 Share Posted October 8, 2003 ummmmm ehhhhh hmmmmmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BAMBOOZLED Posted October 9, 2003 Share Posted October 9, 2003 You used hotornot.com to host your pictures...... that's priceless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylanh Posted October 9, 2003 Author Share Posted October 9, 2003 ... just something new. http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HZ/KR/GSRYN8HXDJFJ.JPG'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted October 9, 2003 Share Posted October 9, 2003 3d Pretty good letters-Need more work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
causinpanic Posted October 10, 2003 Share Posted October 10, 2003 very strange, my buddy is named dylan and writes skillz from louisville.odd. but props good startin out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikro137 Posted October 10, 2003 Share Posted October 10, 2003 Re: ... Originally posted by Dylanh just something new. http://pix2.hotornot.com/pics/HQ/KM/HZ/KR/GSRYN8HXDJFJ.JPG'> you are the worst ever. virs is dope compared to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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