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yo what up guys, i finally did it (or at least hope i did) i posted some pics from my book, gimme some feedback/ criticism, all is appreciated, thanks and peace. O ya and thanks to mr. agip for the hosting, and sorry for the size of the files

 

http://www.dfected.net/12oz/jes2.jpg'>

 

 

http://www.dfected.net/12oz/jes5.jpg'>

 

 

http://www.dfected.net/12oz/jes6.jpg'>

 

 

 

this is not a reflection of my style, i try and keep it fresh and try new stuff as much as i can. :dazed:

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To each there own man, im not feeling the characters (dont get me wrong there drawn really well... there just not my thing) but i do like the last pic .. its nice to see something that's a little rounded out becuase everything down here is just jaged edges.

 

Keep it up.

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Guest big PERM

the characters are the shit, i dont like the hand on the mexi part, improve your letters and you got dope steez right there

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i was about to say the exact same thing tyler

 

thats the first thing that popped in my head when i say that last pic. its good....but its too much like the vault in scribble mag......but then again some of your other stuff looks a bit like deem.

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indizzle

 

haha ya yall caught me on that one, bitten straight from vault. I saw it in scribble mag thought it was just oozing fuckin style so i had to try it out it, was only a small ass little drawing in my book that i chose to color, on the right of the pic u can see a little writing that says "this is me on vault's nutz" but you cant see it fully in that pic. enough excuses, i bit that shit. kill me now. haha peace guys. thanks for the criticism

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if you got all this talent why would you...not exactly bite but feed off, or maybe grab some letter form ideas from vault? now how are we suppose to know if u haven't bitten for these other ones? well anyways.......last 3 flics are dope

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cherry poptart jennifer lopez pantaloons

 

they are prismacolors' but i sometimes use the clear blender marker so that might be why they resemble water color.

 

ps all except the one bitten from vault are 100% original, just like the other 30+ drawings in my current book, you can believe me or not, just thought i'd respond. peace.

 

 

 

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Guest Ted Wakowski

I'm not one to really give a fuck one way or another what someone writes, but since I'm looking at this I'll let you know that there's a head from New York who's pretty well known and respected that writes Jest (TVT) already. Some hater motherfuckers might try and call you out on that.

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i was gonna say

 

Originally posted by Ted Wakowski

Some hater motherfuckers might try and call you out on that.

^^^^^^^

that would be me.

i know the real JEST (TVT-MPC)http://www.spinemagazine.com/images/visual/designtypography/jest_image.jpg'> and it aint cool to jock someones name like that.

luckily you are young enough to start again. this time pick a name of your very own.

go to the lab. do some research. LEARN YOUR HISTORY

it is ok to bite an idea.(not the whole style) that is how every writer gets better. every good writer bit something at some point. don't let them fool ya

just a thought

bem

 

read about the real JEST

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