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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by rymewon, May 27, 2002.

  1. rymewon

    rymewon New Jack

    Joined: Oct 19, 2001 Messages: 10 Likes Received: 0
    heres my newest. post ur shit too!!!! peace

  2. cazper

    cazper Guest

    an honest opinion......i dont like ur letter form, but on a real good positive note, my god the colors are dope as shit!!....i wish i could color like that...:(
  3. PHYNE

    PHYNE Guest

    so many haters ........good shit cyzer.....should joined me and hav today at the yards..yes i said yards.....peace out:beat:
  4. fizm

    fizm Member

    Joined: Apr 9, 2002 Messages: 573 Likes Received: 0
    it would be better without the background and the blue text...just the piece. but ill nonetheless.
  5. aimsTOplease

    aimsTOplease Member

    Joined: Feb 4, 2002 Messages: 496 Likes Received: 0
    ill colors and use of em but that fuckin letters suck but its all good keep it up its dope

    TECONE SW Guest

    your def. on point with the colorin...
  7. Ser3adc

    Ser3adc Guest

    that coloring is just plain fucking dope...i'm feelin the peice alot too...bump.
  8. rymewon

    rymewon New Jack

    Joined: Oct 19, 2001 Messages: 10 Likes Received: 0
    another new one.!!!!

  9. decu goldyn1

    decu goldyn1 Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 24, 2001 Messages: 1,098 Likes Received: 1
    i like the yellow and dark orange one in the middle
    i agree that the letters in the blu are sucky
  10. newjersey

    newjersey Member

    Joined: May 27, 2001 Messages: 801 Likes Received: 0
    cyzm..... can u post more.... im really feeling your shit... bump..... colors blow my mind!
  11. rymewon

    rymewon New Jack

    Joined: Oct 19, 2001 Messages: 10 Likes Received: 0
    sucky?.. why?.. because there nice and simple..... i just wanted to rock some straight edge readabes, that can be read very easily.. peace
  12. cazper

    cazper Guest

    everything in the first was better, but still........nice,...dope character, lol.......u got ur own style:)
  13. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Guest

    sorry but they are not 'nice and simple'.
    They lack flow, have shifting proportions of line segments,
    rely way to heavily on classic cliches, and the 3D is off.
    Plus they're too busy to be considered "simples".

    while I'm at it...
    How often do you see pieces carry the 3D to an infinate point?
    Well asides from this one, never! It's just not astheticly pleasing.

    but I do like the train, and you've got good colour selection.
    But without the colour... I'd give it a C
  14. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Guest

    ^ none of the above was intended to 'diss' you or your work. ^

    I just get a little blunt with the constructive critism sometimes.
  15. rymewon

    rymewon New Jack

    Joined: Oct 19, 2001 Messages: 10 Likes Received: 0
    its cool man im always up for criticism, im an art major i understand.... the letters are too busy?. hmm.. not really . look at the letters, not the fill. the 3d is off?.. how, its the classic, i'll rock my 3d to the right, which way are u rocking urs deal".. as for the one-point infinite perspective on the 3d, i thought i would do something a little different, it works if u ask me. and as far as the "aestethic" of the piece, it looks pretty eye pleasing to me, the piece appears to be coming out at ya, like i had intended it to do.... i admit the letters could have been a little doper, know tat i look at them, but its all gravy....... peace man , good lookin zesto!!!