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i got it this time

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by excess, Jul 29, 2002.

  1. excess

    excess New Jack

    Joined: Jul 27, 2002 Messages: 32 Likes Received: 0
    here you peeps go.
    [img]http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/karactorpiece.jpg'> [img]http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/karaktorone.jpg'>
    that should work but if it dont the hit up this site[url=http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/index.html]http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/index.html[/url]
    if this dont work then i fucking give up.
  2. Legal Speed

    Legal Speed Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 14, 2002 Messages: 195 Likes Received: 0
  3. swif1

    swif1 Veteran Member

    Joined: Dec 13, 2001 Messages: 7,067 Likes Received: 29
    first picture:

    exas? <--doesn't look too bad.

    character's ear looks deformed.

    crushed can looks ...ugh.

    second pic:

    can't see worth poop.

    character need to be whited out.

    third picture:

    ...i would like to see your handstyle since it was cutoff.

    work on your letters, m8.

    word, man, word.
  4. eseLokE1uno

    eseLokE1uno Senior Member

    Joined: Jul 29, 2002 Messages: 1,280 Likes Received: 0
    your almost there on characters you just have to work on the areas of where you shrink and blow up parts(perspective?). like the 2nd dudes arms look 2 small, the can looks like a tube of toothpaste. your letters are alright they just need to be polished (do them over in pencil)/ and that third dudes stomach is sticking out 2 much. But it's not bad you got skill you just need more practice/
  5. excess

    excess New Jack

    Joined: Jul 27, 2002 Messages: 32 Likes Received: 0
    that first pic says excess the can is supposed to be some srt of s.
    ill put up some hand styles and other shit when i get them scanned.
  6. cazper

    cazper New Jack

    Joined: Apr 26, 2002 Messages: 56 Likes Received: 0
    was feelin ur 3rd character's face to death and his body features were overdone in most parts, ur letters suck.......ur characters faces are fresh....so just work on ur characters and forget letter graffiti cuz ur skills is obviously in characters
  7. Arson.85.ATG

    Arson.85.ATG New Jack

    Joined: Sep 9, 2001 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    um..its aight...ur characters is ok i guess cause mines suck...but ur skills is ok......i think i like ur writing style considering its similar to mines...peace
  8. yoink

    yoink Elite Member

    Joined: May 27, 2002 Messages: 3,428 Likes Received: 0
    --in my opinion--
    i actually like the third char's exaggerated body, it looks comicy, more cartoony manga than anything....but then the face just dont fit...it looks like a simple like -boom- char face with a dif body on, that doesnt mesh (cause all the muscles and veins and segmented pieces)

    the others are ehh..keep working;)
  9. melt

    melt Guest

    i cant see them.
  10. excess

    excess New Jack

    Joined: Jul 27, 2002 Messages: 32 Likes Received: 0
    yeah im feeling the critism i know the graff in that first one was kinda wak its a new style i was working on, the second piece is actually better ill clean it up and repost it
    anyways heres a piece i had lying around shortiez krib(she the one with the scanner)it got some handstyles and the graff is better,lemme know what youse think.http://www.geocities.com/excessoneroks/exkaraktor.jpg'>
    thanks again for the critism.
  11. cazper

    cazper New Jack

    Joined: Apr 26, 2002 Messages: 56 Likes Received: 0
    that last 1 u posted is mad dope.....the S on the left isnt that great but everything else is bangin, very nice shading and everything on the character
  12. excess

    excess New Jack

    Joined: Jul 27, 2002 Messages: 32 Likes Received: 0
    umm... thats actually supposed to be an e i just put some design under it....damn...i really wanna give you heads some of my better graff shit but i dont have none with me right now..ill post some shit tomorrow but in the meantime keep the criticism coming im loving that shit,id be happy if i come back tomorrow and see 20 replies telling me i suck ass-that shit pushes me and since i aint got noone to battle around my work schedule thats all i got.
    and im out.
  13. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    Thats a pretty tite character in the first one.

  14. stupid412

    stupid412 Guest

    yo peeps heres tha flixxx..

    uh those are bad...
    looks like a bad bite off an anime charecter...
    but why do you talk like your some goofy ass thug, its so lame
  15. excess

    excess New Jack

    Joined: Jul 27, 2002 Messages: 32 Likes Received: 0
    Re: yo peeps heres tha flixxx..

    ah man did i actually sound like im some some goofy ass thug ..damn.fuck it.
    yo lemme ask you something stupid412 how come i looked through this forum and i only see you talking shit shit and uploading other peoples shit?im not saying nothing but hey, i just wanna know.
    anyways for the other heads in here i said id post some graff shit but i didnt bring none with me i just got this i did for this clothing company at work today today(its called king of new york if you cant guess) and seeing as to how i havent submitted it i thought id put it here instead. lemme know what youse think.
    im out one.