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Feedback please

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by SegFault, Jan 27, 2004.

  1. SegFault

    SegFault New Jack

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    Feedback please

    Discussion started by SegFault - Jan 27, 2004

    Just wanted some peoples opinion just starting out.
    Peace
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  2. not_like_you

    not_like_you 12oz Member

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    not_like_you - Replied Jan 27, 2004

    how long you been writing? im not one to give advice because i dont really do pieces but i think some of the lines arent proportioned right inside the 3d and in your letter structure..but im new and dont know much im sure others can point out what needs to be worked on..
     
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  3. Overtime

    Overtime Dirty Dozen Crew

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    Overtime - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    aight, this is what i see. You seem to be very inconsistent with your stuff. On some pieces, that letters overlap in the 3d, but on other parts, they dont. dont do that. eithe overlap them all, which is hard to pull off anyway, or dont overlap the 3d and the letters so crazy......go sipmler also
     
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    Overtime - Replied Jan 28, 2004

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    maybe that wil help some
     
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  5. StarzAbove

    StarzAbove 12oz Veteran Member

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    StarzAbove - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    well u hav a lot 2 work on handstyle is 1st then ur letter stucture. Evryone has there own style but i dont think you should overlap your letters.
    Oh n be prepared for the comments ur new on 12oz :lol:
     
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  6. NOUM

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    NOUM - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    Well..my road dogs already
    said everything I was going to
    say so what left to say but keep
    doing your thing bro..eventually
    you'll get it..
     
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  7. Zack Morris

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    Zack Morris - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    simplify. You are obviously new to graff and in order to learn the proper way things progress you must learn the basics of how a letter is built. You can put a bazillion arrows and extensions on a badly structured letter and it will still be just that, a badly structured letter. Start off taking letters off of logo's and different fonts and pay close attention to the "bars" that make up your letters. After you can start getting your simple letters good and smooth hings will justs tart to flow off of them. This isn't something that will happen over night though. Its a slow process and it takes alot of work. No form of art is ever mastered in a year. Just keep at is and don't listen to the negetive tings that people say and just try to learn from anyone that is willing to drop a little knowledge.
     
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    yoga - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    ^^ :lol:
     
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  10. InfamousOne

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    InfamousOne - Replied Jan 28, 2004

    i think there nice. but im a new writer.
     
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